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Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Rebirth
Jasper's such a worry wart! Bella's okay!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Permanent
Hurray!!!!! I love how Jacob and Carlisle discovered her gift!!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Restoration
AWE!!!!!!!!!! that was simply adorable!!!!!!!!! i'm so glad you gave Edward time alone with Renesmee!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Consciousness
Yay, that was so sweet!!!!! I loved seeing Edward reaction to hearing Renesmee's thoughts and changed his mind about how he felt about her.
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Instinctive
Awesome....AMAZING..... Incredible.... once again, I LOVED IT!!!
So, so, so sad to know there are only a couple of chapters left :o(
Wont you PLEASE consider finishing the story.... PLEASE... I am not above begging!!! ;o)
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Choice
"Alice was curled up on the floor next to a sleeping Jacob. Her mind was very empty, and she was enjoying a temporary peace." I glad that Alice gets some relief from her headaches!!!!!!1 I als olove Edward's thoughts on Seth!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Nourishment
AWE!!!!!!!!! ilove reading Edward's POV!!!!!!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Instinctive
Oh hunny. You're probably sick of me saying this, again, but you constantly astonish me with how you "get" Edward's mind. Exactly, perfectly, the same as I interpret him. And express him as good as Queen SM herself. Same goes for the whole family...you are amazing!!! Linda
Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 03:20 AM · On: Instinctive
I like how Edward is still getting all over-protective and forgetting she's a vampire. Old habits die hard and that!
Reviewer: writz (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Instinctive
You answered alot my questions in this chapter. I always wondered what they were thinking to allow Edward to be alone on the hunt with only Bella. I love the desire that he is feeling as well.
I know I've said this before, but I'm pretty sure you are the best cannon writer I've read. Thanks for writing. As always, I'm looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Time
Now I see how you could warm up to Rosalie... I've read several stories about this topic, but your explanation of Rosalie's actions and behaviour just seems to cover everything. It's great!
I also really like the way the idea of injecting venom into Bella's heart forms in Edward's head. Have to say it again - great story!
Reviewer: TwilightStorm (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Instinctive
A wonderful chapter. Thank-you!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Instinctive
very well written fic!!
Reviewer: jewelsbyers (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Instinctive
I am looking forward to when Bella attacks Jacob, I assume that it will be next chapter.
Reviewer: hush (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Instinctive
awsome part.......can't wait for bella to see her daughter and Jacob's bash.........................do cont.....soon:)
Reviewer: Debra Fox (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Instinctive
I really enjoyed how you presented this chapter.
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Instinctive
great chapter, add this to breaking dawn and they might have a great movie yet, sometimes I think you may be SM. LOL.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Instinctive
I love this hunt scene. The stream of thoughts in Edward's mind while he's watching Bella is terrific. I totally enjoy how seamlessly this reads for me. Truly, I love that you've given Edward his voice in a story that sadly lacked it (IMO).
Beautiful. Sorry to cut it short but my guys are telling/showing me it's time to shut down. lol
Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Instinctive
You know this is just the best, don't you? I love that you say in canon and use the same dialog as Breaking Dawn. Love. It. Excited for more. :)
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Strategy
When reading the books, I disliked Rosalie. Reading your story, I loathe her. I really liked the way you describe the inevitable fight between the siblings, and how everyone is taking sides. Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks!! As you can guess, I wasn't a big Rosalie fan either - but as I wrote this story, I warmed up to her a bit (in later chapters :) ). Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Intervention
I love this story! Every sentence makes me feel Edward's pain. Tissues, anyone?
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Suspension
Wow-Jacob's revelation to Sam and the rest of the pack that he imprinted on Renesmee-that was a tense scene! I loved it.
Loved Renesmee's reaction to the baby formula!! Too funny!
And Edward-dancing around the room with Renesmee in his arms! That was such a sweet moment...and I LOVED his reaction to thoughts of Bella's lacy undergarments and the fact that Jasper picked up on those feelings was hilarious! That was a great scene. I also loved how you showed Edward coming to terms with Bella losing her humanity but then realizing it wasn't lost at all. Amazing chapter!
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Permanent
Loved, loved, loved how Edward dealt with Jacob and explained the imprinting to his family. Their reactions were priceless! I really liked that Jake was the person to discover Renesmee's gift! How sweet.
Jake's reaction when Edward tells him he knows that he was planning to kill Renesmee and to finding out Leah is coming...perfect Jacob! lol
I cannot stop reading this story! I freak out when I see a new update in my email inbox-even though I'm not all the way caught up yet! lol
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews!! I had always planned for Edward and Jacob to have it out a little about Jake planning to kill Renesmee - never really came up again in the book. But it stays between them.
I think the lullaby scene (from the last chapter) is one of my favorites.
You're almost caught up!! :)
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Restoration
So much to love in this chapter! Edward's elation when Bella's heart begins to beat on its own, his confrontation with Jacob about the imprinting (loved angry Edward!), and oh my...him singing Renesmee to sleep and then holding both hers and Bella's hands in his and telling them he loves them. So beautiful!
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Angel
*continues sobbing* This chapter was beyond amazing! Edward's life flashing before his eyes...both human and vampire, good times and bad...it was a glimpse into some of Edward's most precious memories and defining moments. Simply heartwrenching and beautiful. And I love the tie-in with what Bella was going through at the exact same moment.
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