I think that's a perfect place to end this.  One thing that happens with a lot of stories is that they continue long after they should.  You avoided this and stayed true to your goal from the outset, which was to tell Edward's side of Bells's pregnancy and becoming a father. 

What happens in the last part of BD almost seems like neither here nor there when compared to books 1 & 2.  I personally, as a fan and reader, would have been much happier if they'd been seperate tales.  The story of Bella & Edward's marriage and the birth of Renesmee is complete in and of itself.  I love that you kept it that way and didn't feel the need to carry this beyond into the second sequel (in MPO) and the conflict with the Volturi. 

Great job, as you know this is one of my favorites for so many reasons, and  I look forward to staying in communication with you as my own writing progresses.  Yours has been a wonderful journey and I will miss this story.  Though I may come back and read it again sometime.  Well done!!

Ginnie

This was a great story.  I am facinated with the Cullens as characters.  You did each one justice.  Very enthralling.

Amazing!

Thank you so much for your wonderful story!  I enjoyed it all the way through, look forward to your Epilogue, and look forward to re-reading and savoring it all again and again.  Bravo! :)

I absolutely loved this! Excellent writing!

You are so intuned with the characters in SM. I enjoyed how you have put so much of this story together like this story belonged to you. You really did a Great Job!  I look forward to the epilogue.

Wow... I've followed this fic for a long time, off and on, and I'm REALLY glad I came back to it! I always wondered about Edward through Breaking Dawn, and some of the things he was going through. I feel like you captured his emotions and thoughts to near exact perfection.

I really enjoyed Edward's careful transition from hatred of self and the thing he created into the loving father and devoted husband. I think you nailed it! Also, during Bella's horrific C-section, I absolutely loved how you incorporated their shared love for Renesmee. They both clung to her when they thought everything else was lost.

In case you haven't noticed, I absolutely love this fic. I cannot wait for your double epilogue to tie everything in a neat little package!

Much love,

itsbloomagic

The feeling was so bittersweet when I saw the new chapter had been posted. I was thrilled to read more, but sad that it's almost over :-(. You have done such a fantastic job capturing Edward. I had tears in my eyes for most of this chapter. There just aren't words for how incredible this story is. I'm a fan forever! I can't wait to read the Epilogue!

Great chapter. Loved how you got into Edward's head, to hear his struggles and to finally come to realize his happiness. Also enjoyed the ease of the whole family, the comfort and strength they find in each other. The moment with Rosalie struggling to let Renesmee go was beautifully written, I think it gave her and Edward the moment to reaffirm their love for one another given all the strife and discord in the early chapters. Look forward to your epilogue, this is a wonderful story and thanks so much for writing.

I have soo enjoyed your story!  Your writing is beautiful! I hope you write other things!  I would love to see more of your work.  Thank you for the enjoyment I have received while following their journey.  You have brought Edward and Bella to life again.

Thank you so much!

This just chapter just made me want to cry! I can feel Edward's joy and undying love toward his beloved Bella and now his little angel of a daughter, Nessie. I really do hope you continue those two last chapters at least. I have to say, I believe that you, besides Stephenie of course, have a real grasp on Edward's perspective on life and every time I read a new chapter, it's like I am reading Breaking Dawn for the first time again! Have you met Stephenie in real life? If not I think you guys should meet because honestly, great minds think alike.  ;-)

Can't wait for your final chapters! Great ending for this one and since you seem to know Edward so well, can you tell him I say Hi for me please! (Obviously I'm Team Edward, LOL!) I'll be looking forward to your next chapters and stories! Hope you have a great day.

Sincerely from your fan, 

Mayra.