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Reviews For Ethan Church
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:29 PM · On: He Speaks

At last our garden man speaks. LoL...I have to admit Ethan Church's story is very intersting and a very interesting retelling of a story we have come to know well...it's fascinating...



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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:16 PM · On: The Gift

Wow time is slipping by and the mystery surrounding Ethan Church is told little by little. What of our mystery garden man? Oh and the books magically appearing at Bella's feet literally has me intrigued like no other...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:50 PM · On: The Gardens

Wow her first encounter with the stranger was intense...I can't wait to learn more...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Ghost

Oh this is just exciting. The mystery of it all is so intriguing...



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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Ethan Church

Wow that was one heck of a first meeting...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:13 PM · On: The Letters

Wow it souds mesmorizing...I can't wait to find out more about the reclusive Ethan Church...



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Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 12:06 AM · On: The Other

I love this story! So glad to see you updating again!



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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 07:55 PM · On: The Other

Bella arriving in Phoenix in time for Renee's wedding to Phil.  Edward can't stay away from Bella for a long time.  He arrives in Phoenix day of the wedding.  Thank goodness Edward saves Bella from Death (vampire).  Bella finally learns Edward is a vampire that doesn't prey off humans.  Bella definitely missed Edward so glad he was in Phoenix.  Edward needs to dispose of the torn apart vampire.  He wants her to go home where she will be safe.  Edward will join her there when his task of getting rid (completely destroying) the vampire.

Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 06:11 AM · On: The Other

nice chapter! Keep it going!



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Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 05:53 AM · On: The Other

Wow! Awsome chapter, well worth the wait! I so wish you could update sooner but hey, the quality of your story and writing is well worth it!



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Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 12:44 AM · On: The Other

Go Alice.   Thank you So Much for the update :)



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Reviewer: mr1378 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 12:39 AM · On: The Letters

I can't believe you don't have more reviews! This is absolutely beautiful writing!



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Reviewer: sickcity (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 03:29 PM · On: The Other

*claps*

That was awesome! Please update more often!



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Reviewer: hooker81 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Revelation

Okay I think I figured part of it out.

The man that is telling Bella the story is the wounded man from the war, that was released from the hospital?

Reviewer: daisyhellride (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:30 PM · On: The Other

Aghhhh!!!! I need more! This is great!

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Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:26 PM · On: The Other

I absolutely ADORE this story - it's beautiful and wonderful! I just want to keep reading and reading.  More please!



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Reviewer: writingbabe (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:17 PM · On: The Other

Another gorgeous chapter. Your voice is so wonderfully sustained through this novel, so able to carry the reader through Bella's experience. Thanks for continuing the story. I'm always happy to see it pop up at the top of my favorites list.



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Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:13 PM · On: The Other

Oh Lord, that was such a traumatic way for her to find out he was a vampire, yet she still embraced him.  Edward said "This isn't finished yet."  That is so different to think of vamps in Phoenix.

I love how you have built up an alternate world for Edward to live in, how he has been mysteriously living on his own with humans as friends and helpers.  And how somehow, he found or sought out Bella from across the country.  I'm so curious as to how he came to know about her, and insisted on her being the one to help with his book.  How did he find her?

You have such a mesmerizing and mysterious way of putting your words together.  Every single time it feels like I'm just leaning closer and closer to the screen, trying to get as much as possible.

OK, when I get home, I can go on ff.n and read chapter 12.  Two updates in a short time!  I've died and gone to heaven!

Kat



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Reviewer: closettwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 01:26 PM · On: The Other

Everything about this story is so spooky but sooooo good! I love it!
Thanls for sharing your story with us!

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Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 12:13 PM · On: The Other

Poor Bella, that must have given her quite a scare.  I'm glad Edward came to the rescue.  Lovely as always!

xoxo Sarah



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Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 11:13 AM · On: The Other

I was so happy to see this story updated! It is definitely one of the most intriguing stories I've read so far here.

Plus the update means you'll continue working on BLTS ))



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Reviewer: Ochanteuse (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 10:09 AM · On: The Other

I'm so glad that you're back. I've missed this story.



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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 09:55 AM · On: The Other

wow close call there for Bella and Edward both, really, since we all know Edward wouldn't have handled losing Bella very well :)

And the truth is out finally!!

Reviewer: Aiisling (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:23 AM · On: The Other

Glad to see you're still updating! I really enjoy this story. It's beautifully told.



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Reviewer: loss4words (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:57 AM · On: The Other

I didn't see it going there at all, but what a perfect twist.  I hadn't gotten to your previous update, so this morning was a bit like Christmas for me....or maybe an early Mother's Day present since I was able to read two of your chapters.

This story is so mysterious, I love it.  I found it when there was only two chapters and await each update.  :)



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