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Reviewer: bexkate-leah01 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Wishful Thinking

this is a brilliant story and the end of this chapter is just so beautiful! i honestly had a tear in my eye! and the song fits aswell! when i was listening to this song while reading breaking dawn i always thought that if the wedding was elaborated this song would suit it so well! so i was surprised when it was in here! its just perfect though!!! congratulations on such a sensational story! i can hardly wait for the next chapter! :D :D :D

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Wishful Thinking

oooh.  sex on the Aston and Van Morrison - perfect!!  Tanya getting hers was an added bonus!

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Protection

Even though there was the assault, it worked out in the end and they are getting closer because of it.

I so hope Bella sleeptalks and mumbles something (I love you Edward) in her sleep.

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Truth

What in the world is with the odd-ball words/namecalling. I can honestly say I have never heard them till now.

Wonder who will make the first move? Seems like its going to happen soon...I hope.

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Sharing

I just love how you have the abilty to make your readers (well for me anyway) feel like they are there in that a fly on the takes a great writer/story teller to do that!  I loved the tipsey Tinkerbella and also all the love shared by the characters in this chappie! XO

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 08:46 PM · On: In Control

One night? I really wonder if she'll be there for only one night. So many fun/delicious things could happen as well.

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Surprise (Part Two)


Reviewer: badkitty (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Dreams

just waaaaaaw

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Unlucky for Some

You wouldn't really kill off Angela...would you?

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)

Great story..I loved this chappie..actually love all..but this one was my fav!  You are on a roll..can't wait to hit that little next button...but sad after that one..have to wait for an update!  I am soooo greedy!  hehehe!  xo

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 05:35 AM · On: A Good Defense is a Good Offense

What kind of skeletons could he have as a human?Curious, guess I'll have to read on to find out.

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Ugly Duckling

Sorry it took me so long between reviews - been moving, I'm hoping to do more reading while I'm unpacking.

Tanya is always a hinderence and always, always delusional.

This chap may have been long but all things concidering, it needed to be, Great!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Dreams

Agg!! Will somebody just shoot the bi**h!!!

Reviewer: melissa19 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Dreams

Amazing!! i read the chapter for the second time, i am an addict lol

Reviewer: Brittbee21 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Dreams

oh yay! I just got caught up and I just love your writing! I so excited how the story is going and I cant wait for more! What a cliff hanger to leave us on!

Thank you!

Reviewer: Addicted73 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 04:51 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Great chapter, you wrote that perfectly!

Reviewer: twichipie (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Dreams

No way what a cliffy, lol, Edward got his groove back! Can't wait for his pov

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Dreams

Are you fucking kidding me?  ;)

Reviewer: CS3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Dreams

WOW! Amazing chapter. Yuo made me cry with the beautiful anniversary suprise. keep on rocking

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Dreams

that was WELL worth all your repetitive strain!! What a great chapter! AND URGH to Tanya. Is it wrong of me to say that I hate her with a passion? I knew you'd understand! ;)

Update soon! I absolutely LOVE this story!! I wonder what the bitch from hell has planned! Why would she try to crash the party???

Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Dreams

What a chapter!!! I am not going to object to the lovey parts, or to the hot, hot times either!  What a cliffie though - what the hell is that one doing in Italy, strolling into the family home like she owns the place.  The nerve!!  Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Dreams

Love it! I love this story. Hopefully Tanya will get her hair extentions ripped out or something. Someone needs to yell at that crazy. My only thought, and I'm sure it's just a matter of personal preference... but three times a lady?! That song is sooooo cheesy!
K, sorry. Other than that, two very enthusiastic thumbs up!

Reviewer: ArieCullen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Dreams

OH Shit !!

Reviewer: MyHubbyIsATwilightWidow (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Dreams

Can't wait for EPOV.  Didn't really think Tanya actually had anything to do with the article since it's usually all wrong - so you fooled me there.  You also scared me with Jasper in the kitchen - she was thinking he was gorgeous and I was getting worried.  Should have had faith.  I keep wondering when Jessica will read the tabloids... 

Several laugh out loud moments, but of course can't think of any right now. I know they usually involve Jasper or Emmett.  Way back, I LOVED Emmett's made-up cuss words after Truth or Dare and Jasper's airplane theatrics - classic!   

This whole story is fantastic.  Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Dreams this story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Very beautiful story and well written.....Will he propose? Will she get pregnant? I wonder because she "made a mental note to refill her pills".....did she forget? Love these two! Keep this story going for a while! Thankyou!

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