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Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

I recently found your story and have been enjoying it so much. This was very fun. :) Nancy

Reviewer: bsmithy (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 01:12 PM · On: The Swan

i like this and everything, i just don't see how you could fall so in love in a week? but it's still good.

Reviewer: puddinbug (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Fate

I must say you are doing a great job in capturing the mannerisms and personalities of RPattz and Ms Stewart so I just love your story! Excited for an update!

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Fate

Oh yeah... going back to reality will definitely be a cold shower on them... RL is a bitch.  Loved the date... that is definitely an incredible date.

Reviewer: whitt96 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Fate

I am giving you a new nickname......................Lemon Queen :) hehe, you are an amazing writer. I am loving this story I can not wait for more!!!!!!

Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Fate

This story is so sweet, it makes my heart hurt! Love it.

Reviewer: lksloan1 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Lip Service

I just started reading, but already i love it.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Fate

geez... if that's Edward idea of a "date" what's he going to do for the eventual proposal? He's setting the bar pretty high for himself hehe

 

Reviewer: tyg (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Fate

I read this from start to finish in two days.  It is intriguing how insecurity is the theme of a romance story, but it is particularly apt to use it in an Edward and Bella romance.  You are definitely 'worth a sexy little review' because maybe it will encourage you to let Bella loose with that naughty little birthday present.  Can't wait ... very long.

Reviewer: michelle0526 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 06:18 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Oh, that just melted my heart!  So romantic and perfect!  And it's about time! 

Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Fate

It would have been a fitting contemporary romeo to respond with "you bet your ass I do" to her "kiss by the book" comment. Brilliant! Not just the closing, but the entire chapter. Bravo!

Reviewer: obsessed1012 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Fate

I have been reading this non-stop.  I didn't review until now well simply b/c I couldn't stop long enough to write since i needed to know what happens next.  You're killing me, I need to know what her b-day gift was.  LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: MrsMCullen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Fate

Hey hun,

Well what can I say about this chapter that hasnt already been said.It was freaking amazing.I love this story more and more every time I read it.Is Bella's gown a real dress or just you fab imagination??

Cany wait to read more.

xx Mary

Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Fate

Wow... what a wonderful chapter. *claps hands*

Reviewer: obsessedliz (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Fate

Loving this story!  I want to go to Italia pronto!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Fate

This chapter was done beautifully.  I am  glad that Bella and Edward are having such a wonderful time in Italy.  I especially love it when he speaks Italian also.  I was also glad that Bell had a sit down with Esme and discussed Edward's early life and how he came to be with them.  She even got a sampe of the choco-mallow.  Edward even took her to the opera.  They just love each other so very much.  Cannot wait for more.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sherri

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Fate

AAAAHHHH!

Edward at the opera?  I love the oprea!  Now I'm all hot and bothered.  Darn you.  :)

Reviewer: puddinbug (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Reality Check!

Love the way her mind wanders and tries to distract her - so cute!!! Still love this story so far :)

Reviewer: vixenella (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Fate

It is worth a review! Your fabulous! Love the story and its going wonderfully!

Reviewer: puddinbug (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 10:57 AM · On: First Impressions

Just started reading - love the way you write with humor and have already felt a connection to your characters. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Fate

Another lovely chpater, thank you.  The opera is a little too "Pretty Woman" for me, but I get the sentiment.  Looking forward to the next installment...

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Fate

it's definitely worth a sexy review!! That was amazing! Poor Bella, getting her period on her trip...that's alright, though...I have her beat, though...two days into our honeymoon in Vegas, I got my dreaded monthly gift...needless to say, the jacuzzi in the room went unused the rest of the stay... :(

Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Fate

I loved every word of this chapter!!  Esme and Bella's chat was fantastic and the whole date that Edward has planned it amazing.  I just love it!  Hot images of Edward at the Opera will now carry me through my day! :)

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Fate

Well crap, with all the goodies and inuendos, I so expected a 'will you marry me', but no, you want to wait. Should be interesting to see once the press gets a whiff of their relationship. I can't wait to see what happens and I'm pretty sure Tanya will be sticking her ugly nose into the mess as well.

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Fate

i don't want this story to ever end!  Can you imagine .,,.,,

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