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Reviewer: cullenetc (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Inevitable
I like that Bella wants to be independent and not just rely on Edward's money. I also like that realizes that he did this because he loves her, not to be controlling. She is right to still be mad, but I like that she tells him that she loves him even though she is pissed. I hate waiting for updates, but you make up for it when they are long ones. Still loving this story.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Inevitable
Wow. SO much happening in one chapter. A sad farewell back home to LA for them both - they really did grow as a couple, discovering more important things about how one another works.
Jessica is SUCH a bitch. It was quite clear how much pleasure she took in firing Bella and really Edward, as hard as it might have been for you not to tell Bella or keep it from her, you HAD to expect that kind of reaction from her surely? You knew the whole time what she was coming home to.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Inevitable
ohhh boy! I'm almost surprised that Edward & Bella got that sorted - I was pretty concerned there was going to be a "give me space & time" separation coming on the heels of that fight.
I love that they duked it out and got it more or less settled though :)
I wonder what sort of contract Bella's going to negotiate now? Oh, and really liked when she gave the verbal smackdown to Jess hehe :)
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Inevitable
Well it was a really interesting and awsome chapter , i was waiting for it with my tongue hanging ,thank god it was a juicy one , and has a lot of stuff going on , sex,love,hate,kinkyness,menstrualsex,Bellward fight, and ohmygod , this was good stuff , thank you lola
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Inevitable
Wrapping up time in Milan Edward and Bella return to the villa. They quickly have to pack all their things due to a limo picking them up in a few hours for their flight back to LA. After the long flight home both Edward and Bella were extremely tired due to jet lag. When Bella checked her text messages and emails she noticed a couple from Jessica. She also noticed Edward seemed uptight slightly like there was a problem he didn't want to talk about. As she talked to Edward with her concerns about Jessica and the meeting he gave her encouragement. He already knew she was going to be fired. In fact his discussion with his father was to have their business attorney draw up a contract for Bella to work for them. Bella didn't have previous knowledge of what the meeting was going to be about. She arrived at the office, getting snide looks and comments from Eric. Jessica was drawing the torment out awaiting the killing punch to destroy Bella and be the triumphant one. Bella also discovered that Edward had paid a visit to Jessica to change her contract for foreign travel. Bella actually had the last word and told Jessica exactly what she always wanted to tell her. Jessica told her to empty her desk and Bella left with her dignity. She didn't start crying until she reached her truck. By the time she arrived home she was upset, still no knowledge that Edward knew she would be fired and that the wheels were in motion to offer her a contract with their company. A huge fight between occurred. Both declared they still loved each other. Bella wanted to see the contract. Edward had it faxed to them. Bella stressed that honesty in the relationship works both ways. Edward needed to tell her when he and Carlisle found out from Marcus. She would have been more prepared to face Jessica. Maybe even more and better jabs at her character and personality.
Reviewer: AlisterMart (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Dreams
This was so long I thought it'd never end... not that I wanted it to. Hell, I want 20 times more after that cliffhanger. Pop these suckers out faster goddammit >:U
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Inevitable
hmm i think we should take Jessica and knock the crap out of her! But then again that is just me.
Great chapter, loved how you kept Bella so close in character to what Stephanie wrote. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Inevitable
That was a bit underhanded of Edward, but I'm glad they talked about why it upset Bella. Progress progress progress!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: JLW4108 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Inevitable
Oh I love these two so much!!! Bella will rock as E's PA working directly for him! Screw Forks, Inc!!!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Inevitable
Great chapter! I understand where Bella is coming from. I hate double standards too, and I hate people going behind my back and deciding what's "best" for me. I'm glad Bella won't have to worry about her job anymore. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Belle36 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Inevitable
Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Inevitable
wonderful chapter... those two can definatly have alot more fun now that theres no more fear of her job :)
Reviewer: Mom of Jem1 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Truth
I am sooo glad I found this story! I am not sure I've laughed this hard in months! My hubby thinks I've lost my mind. Guess he isn't used to seeing me sitting at the computer laughing until I cry. I cannot wait to read the rest of this!
Reviewer: jdsalacious (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Inevitable
So... uh... what's up with Rose's mood in this chapter?
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Inevitable
What a fantastic chapter! Holy hell I love these two :)
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Inevitable
I knew that the shoe was going to drop at some point...i mean it had too she couldn't stay oblivious forever right? Anyway...yea for no more work problems...but that just leaves room for more types of problems right...drama drama drama...what is with these actors...geesh! Loved the chapter.
Reviewer: jenaflower (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Inevitable
I am really enjoying this story...Italy was GREAT! Please rush next chapter! ;-)
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Inevitable
Jessica, I knew we hadn't seen the last of her. I work for my husband. Maybe she can lighten up. lol Thanks for the chapter! Nancy
Reviewer: Andee (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Inevitable
While I am not pissed about the delay in updating.... I really don't like being left hanging... So more updates please! I know I never review... It is not because I do not love you and this story, because I do! I read the story on my IPhone, and for some reason, it does not let me write reviews. Very sad!
So glad Bella does not have to deal with Jessica anymore. Would be great if Angela could get hired by the Cullens too, so I won't have to feel so bad for her.
Oh what I would not give to be in Bella's shoes! I wan't to eat McDonalds with Edward by the river.... Although I do not think I would be able to eat. And the lemony scene was very tasty! Thanks for giving me something nice to think about today :)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Inevitable
i kind of had a feeling that edward would've been thinking about or doing most of this suff. im not surprised that bella is upset. but look at sharon and ozzy she works for him and it works out great!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 04:45 AM · On: London Confessions
Great chapter. England at last! Love stoned Jasper and the family interaction. Glad Bella and Edward got a chance to talk. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Courage
whew!!
I can just imagine Edward's face lighting up every four weeks... he'll be wondering if Bella's got something more up her sleeve again? Although he's such a sweetie we all know he'll never be sad about it hehe :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Leaving on a Jet Plane
Great chapter. Love Jasper! Can't wait to read more. Yay London!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 04:46 AM · On: Plan of Action
Great chapter. Loved all the Edward/Bella time. Looking forward to the trip to London.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Playing by the Rules
LOL oh my God that was so funny! Well... I'm glad Bella's going to England :)
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