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Reviewer: ahya (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:12 PM · On: The Big Picture

i'm really hooked up with this story! when will it be updated? cant wait!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 02:25 PM · On: The Big Picture

Edward truly has learned the joy and benefits of make up sex.  Gloriously beautiful and satisfying.  Bella reading the script of a film Edward wants to do.  The love (sex) scenes are hot Bella and Edward are both fantasizing about them.  Bella can't wait till Edward does them to her.  Edward drives her to her maid of honor dress fitting and will pick her up when she's done.   After Angela and Bella's dress fitting, Jacob (Ben's college roommate) asked them to join him to eat.  Bella communicated with Edward about the invitation.  He was okay (sorta).  After they finished eating Bella called Edward about being picked up.  Said he was at his parents it would be 20 minutes.  Jake offered to drive both girls home. Angela first and then Bella.  She had Jake drop her off at the outside gate.  She entered code and walked to the house.  Edward's Volvo in the driveway.  She entered the house and went to look for Edward.  He surprised her and made quick and passionately forceful love to her leaning against the wall.  HOT!!!!  Edward needed to hear Bella tell him HE was her only one.  HE was the only man to make her feel what she is feeling.  His insecurities about losing Bella.  He knows she won't, but it's still in the back of his mind.  Edward earlier was talking wedding.  So he has plans for them long term.  Bella doesn't want a huge wedding.  Edward said good it'll be a small wedding for us then.  Looking forward to Angela and Ben's wedding.  Jake doesn't have a chance with Bella, but he'll sure try and win her.

Reviewer: lsapping (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 12:52 PM · On: The Big Picture

Just finished, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Honesty

perfect, first time lemon!!!! hell ya.... u wrote it to perfection. I didn't see that one coming at all, in the pool..ha ha ha...coming...tee hee.... I love the first change.....

Reviewer: manda375 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 08:14 AM · On: The Big Picture

Sigh...

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 04:03 AM · On: The Big Picture

Ooohhh....it's like Edward had been pouring his heart into his new script and now when he got all jealous of Jacob being around Bella, he unconsciously (or consciously, depending on your opinion! *L*) decided to re-enact that violent f*cking scene out :) Like Bella was complaining.... hehehee

Reviewer: stellarock (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Ugly Duckling

<3 it

Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Truth

I haven't laughed that hard in a long time.... Emmett is hilarious. I loved his curse words every 5 minutes

I love how u are writing Bella. She is one sassy girl....this is so awesome. Can't wait to read more and more

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 11:01 PM · On: The Big Picture

Wow!  Never disappointong in the lemonaide girl!  HOT!!

Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy

Ok...your humor is priceless. I love how u write all the characters. I am still pluggin away at your creation. It is only 10pm, so now i know i will be able to get more in tonight :) Just finishing Ch 15, Mr. Nice Guy.... He is too cute to love....wait..scratch that....whatever...gotta go read some more...tee hee

Reviewer: pmw1234 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 09:43 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

WOW!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 08:31 PM · On: The Big Picture

Great chapter! I'm glad know that Bella is over her anger, that everything looks to work out with the contract. And possessive Edward? Seriously hot! I wouldn't mind having him here getting that worked up over me. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 08:13 PM · On: The Big Picture

HOLY MERCY...I LOVED THIS CHAPTER.

I'm feeling a little dizzy here....whew.

Reviewer: lsapping (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

and the bitch goes down!!

Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 06:24 PM · On: A Good Defense is a Good Offense

OK....just started reading your creation today.... I am soooooooooooo glad that you put an EPOV. It was killing me not knowing how he felt...after I've read it....holy hell....hell ya :) <3...... i absolutely love your story.... tee hee...got lots and lots of chapters ahead of me.... oh boy...lucky me.... can't wait to dig in some more.... I don't want to be annoying and review after every chapter, but let me tell ya....u are doing a FANTASTIC Job!!!! ok...more fun for me, all thx to you :)....not patiently waiting for update,,,, tee hee, since i already got more to read already... oh boy....

*squeel*

Reviewer: cullenetc (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 06:20 PM · On: The Big Picture

I'm really glad that you explained Bella's feelings about she forgave him so easily. It is nice to see both sides. The fact that she wanted to know whey he did that, after she saw his remorse is good. Look at the great sexin they got because she didn't hold a grudge. We love the great sexin. Especially naked Edward attach sex!!!!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 05:38 PM · On: The Big Picture

I love a good Possessiveward.  Yum.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 05:17 PM · On: The Big Picture

love the caveman!

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 04:59 PM · On: The Big Picture

i am always so excited when I get notices that you have posted and I am never disappointed.  :)

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 04:58 PM · On: The Big Picture

i am always so excited when I get notices that you have posted and I am never disappointed.  :)

Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 04:05 PM · On: The Big Picture

Yes ... love all around for the possessive Edward :) Very nice chapter addition.

Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 03:58 PM · On: The Big Picture

GREAT HOT SEX WITH STUDWARD

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 03:25 PM · On: The Big Picture

oh how I've missed these two

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 02:23 PM · On: The Big Picture

Thank god there won't be a triangle, ever. Bella was always standoffish about Jacob, why won't he see she doesn't like him that way - oh right, need a little worry or cause for panic sex right.

Yummy chapter, like always. ;-)

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 12:38 PM · On: The Big Picture

Love it! :) Cannot wait for moree! :)

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