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Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Plan of Action

That was a fun chapter.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

I liked it.  I liked it alot.  I know they say to rise above it all, but damit if Edward doesn't make the whole I got your ass, look soooooooo good.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Rising to It

that was a good chapter and I loved the ending.  But Bella is getting on my nerves with her being selfconsious bull, she deserves good things just like Edward.  Do she thinks she deserves less.  Own it Swan.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Rising to It

A good ending.  But Bella is truly getting on my nerves with her selfconsious bullshit.  A man that can get anyone in the world that he wants and he chose her.  What part of that don't she understand?  Was her life so wrong that she deserves less than?  Bella own it.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 09:55 AM · On: In the Know

I am loving this story so far.  Man, star sexed Edward can't get enough.  Bella is one luck you know what.  Seth will go home and have happy happy dreams tonight.

Reviewer: Lost Star (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 06:59 PM · On: The Big Picture

Woah. Just read the entire story up to this point and it is fantastic! :D

Reviewer: twilightjunki (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Fate

UGHHH totally hot chapter:) you definately write some good lovin and some awsome story  :) going to read on!!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Coming Clean

You write great lemons, never doubt that! ;)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Hide and Seek

Another awesome chapter, thanks!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Honesty

I'm so glad Edward told Bella about his past,I felt so bad for him because he felt so bad, but we all do stupid shit when we are younger...I just feel like I'm missing something and there is more...They made a lot of progress, I'm so glad they talked, it brought them closer to each other...That was some seriously fuckhot sex in the pool, I was getting a bit hot and bothered myself just reading about it...I feel a bit giddy, if I smoked, I think I'd be having a cigarette right about now...I'm so happy for them but they'll have some things to work out, like how is this going to affect Bella working for Edward now, will she still be able to, and if so how are they going to keep it a secret? Oh my God, Al, Jaz, Em, and Ro are going to be so happy for them, and so will Ang and Ben, and I hope Carlisle and Esme too...I can't wait until they tell each other ILY...*Heavy sigh*

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Protection

Jesus! Hell of a chapter, well done...Loved it...

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Courage

You are too funny trying to appease the "anti-period-sex" population with your a/n's!  LOL!  All I have to say is that they shouldn't knock until they try it because it. is. hot.

Loved the chapter.  They're so sappy lately I think I could wring out my laptop and make some syrup for my waffles!  But I love it! 

And these two doing anal... hello!  To quote Starward "Holy fucking Christ".

;-)Your fic is great!  Off to read more!

 

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Truth

I fucking knew it! Before I even scrolled down the page as I was reading, I thought, I'll bet he's going to In & Out Burger, I was right and I laughed my ass off! I guess I laughed my ass off quite a bit throughout this whole chapter! They all had so much fun together! Emmetts outbursts had me rolling on the floor! I felt like I was there with all of them having a great time, such a fun chapter! I loved E/B flirting with each other, it was so cool to see them getting along so well, and I love how well Bella fits in with the gang...Was she dreaming or did Edward really run his hand from her ankle to her knee and back? Hmmmmm, he is getting bolder...Can not wait for the after party...What did Alice mean about Bella winning with Edward, more than she could imagine? I wonder if it's the effort Edward has been making to let Bella see him in a different light, plus Alice knows that Edward is in love with Bella...I don't know for sure, so I'll just keep reading...I love your story more and more with each chapter!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Confessions

Another awesome chapter! I really love the way you write, the story is really good, I love your sense of humor, and I'm really loving your story so much!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Mr. Nice Guy

I loved this chapter so much! I was laughing so hard when Alice and Jasper were calling Edward out on his feelings about Bella, all their conversation was funny as Hell, I bet we all wish we had a best friend like Jasper...I'm so glad Edward is going to let his guard down and let Bella in...I can't wait for the moment he finds out that she isn't into JB...Well, on to the last day of filming, and looking forward to the wrap party as well...

Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Playing by the Rules

That was Fucking PRICELESS!!!!!  I have loved every second of this story up to now, and that was AMAZING!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 11:37 PM · On: In Control

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Unlucky for Some

Oh my God! I hope Angela is going to be alright, I wonder how the fire started and if it was in their apartment...I wonder where Bella will stay now? Probably with Alice; It would be too much to hope that it would be with Edward, ya I know, wishful thinking...I think Alice set that whole lunch thing up, that's so Alice's m.o., the sneaky little shit! :)  Edward took Bella to lunch! I loved that part of this chapter...It was good that he let Bella in a little, now she has a few more clues as to what makes him tick...Finally a little progress...He was so sweet, protective, and concerned for her when they pulled up to her apartment...You could just tell he wanted to be with her and comfort her as the ambulance pulled away, can't wait to see if he'll go to the hospital to be there for her...Oh, I got caught up in the end of the chapter and forgot to mention Bellas latest dream, I think that one had me panting a bit...I would absolutly give anything to know what Edward was thinking when Bella answered her door in nothing but a towel, wet hair dripping down her back...Oh, one more thing I forgot, I can't believe Edward asked Bella about JB at lunch, that was so unlike him, and again Bella dropped the ball with her vague answer...I'm getting a bit impatient with this dance these two are doing around each other...Totally not complaining about your story and you are really a good writer, I'm just anxious for these two to get together :D

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Mixed Messages

*Giggles* Well there you go, Bella knows that Edward didn't leave with Tanya, but he still thinks there's something between Bella and JB...I can't wait until all the cards are on the table with these two...I love Jasper and Alice so much (they are my fav couple after E/B) Edward is so lucky to have such a wonderful and caring family, and of course THE best friend in the world...Now if he can just get it together he can have the best girl in the world too...Oh yeah, I'm so looking forward to the premier and the rap party, a trip overseas? That should be fun ;)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:19 AM · On: The Swan

Holy shit! Edward and Bella are totally thinking the same things about each other, jumping to conclusions, etc., etc. I hope they figure out (quickly) that looks are decieving, things are not as they appear to be...I want yell at them to get their shit together, but where would the fun be in that? They need to wallow in their misery for a bit longer, aye? Yes, I am guilty of thinking Edward might have boned the slutty, lying, desperate skank that is Tanya, I'm so glad I was wrong, shame on me for thinking that...The bad part is that Bella will think they did, just as Edward thinks there is something going on with JB...I wonder if Bella is really going to quit...I have too many questions and theories about how that could go down...I just can't wait to see what happens next...Oh, and I was wondering when Rosalie would pop up, now the gangs all here! Oooo, I also can't wait to get more info on Edwards past and why he thinks he's not good enough for Bella, it seems that maybe something bad or traumatic happened to make him the way he is, just a guess, I wonder if it has anything to do with his mother...I also think that the drawing hanging in Edwards house is his mother...Holy crap, it's 2:16 a.m., I need some sleep, I hate to leave this story though!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:24 AM · On: A Good Defense is a Good Offense

Great chapter, very enlightening, love hearing from Edward, must go read..........

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Ugly Duckling

*Frowning and Eyerolling* Not at you, but at Bella and Edward...All I have to say is this, Edward better not screw Tanya, because we all know It'd just be because he got his ego bruised by Bella, and Jacob needs to back off...I'm not opinionated or anything *Winks* So happy to see Jasper finally, love him!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Lip Service

*Facepalm* What I find amusing about Edward accepting Bellas help to go over his 'lines', was that he damn well knew what was on that page, including the kiss at the end, he could have skipped that part, but noooo...I think that's why he had that look on his face (anger, confusion, regret), maybe angry at himself for doing that part of the scene with her, confused by his feelings from that kiss, and regret for either actually doing that part of the scene or regret that it didn't last longer, oh I crack myself up with my silly ideas! He's probably mad at himself for not keeping his feelings in check, she is his PA after all, I'll bet he's confused by her reaction, he probably regrets kissing her because now he'll want more...Oh crap, I need to stop this, I could come up with tons of scenarios, or gee, maybe I should just keep reading...Edward was so sweet as he was taking care of her wrist, then like Bella thought, nice Edward went out the same door Emmett came in...I realize that Edward may have been a bit of a moody person before Bella started working for him, but I think now he is over compensating because of the feelings he has for her (I think he's fighting those feelings)...Poor Bella, she was already an emotional mess; being in love with Edward is going to get a little messy for her, trying to hide the fact that you're in love with someone is no easy task...But knowing our Bella, it will be written all over her face and she won't be able to hide it from some people...Of course the one person who matters will undoubtedly be the last to see it, or he'll be in denial...Oh, the drama, I love it, just like I love your story...

Reviewer: kamilynne (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:44 AM · On: The Big Picture

MORE!! Please? Pretty please? With Edward on top? :)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Drawing Lines

Gah! That was hot...I just knew when Bella offered to practice lines with Edward it was going to be some sexy little scene, not just some 'lines'  Yeah, Bella will get all hot and bothered by this kiss, but will Edward just play it off and thank her for helping him practice his 'lines'  Hey, I just thought, it's too bad Bella hadn't come upstairs a few minutes later, she might have seen Edward with out a towel wrapped around his gorgeous bod, or anything...Oh well, maybe another time...And yes, I'm going to bitch about JB again; is it just me or did it sound like in his phone call with Bella that he's taking this dinner thing more seriously than he let on? Oooo, It just dawned on me that Edward is feeling better, I'll bet he'll be going now (I hope), that should be interesting...I can't wait to see the dress that Alice will no doubt talk Bella into getting (not that I'll actually see it, you know what I mean)  I thought  it was really sweet when Carlisle was talking to Bella about Edward when he dropped her off at her place...

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