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Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Truth

I fucking knew it! Before I even scrolled down the page as I was reading, I thought, I'll bet he's going to In & Out Burger, I was right and I laughed my ass off! I guess I laughed my ass off quite a bit throughout this whole chapter! They all had so much fun together! Emmetts outbursts had me rolling on the floor! I felt like I was there with all of them having a great time, such a fun chapter! I loved E/B flirting with each other, it was so cool to see them getting along so well, and I love how well Bella fits in with the gang...Was she dreaming or did Edward really run his hand from her ankle to her knee and back? Hmmmmm, he is getting bolder...Can not wait for the after party...What did Alice mean about Bella winning with Edward, more than she could imagine? I wonder if it's the effort Edward has been making to let Bella see him in a different light, plus Alice knows that Edward is in love with Bella...I don't know for sure, so I'll just keep reading...I love your story more and more with each chapter!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Confessions

Another awesome chapter! I really love the way you write, the story is really good, I love your sense of humor, and I'm really loving your story so much!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy

I loved this chapter so much! I was laughing so hard when Alice and Jasper were calling Edward out on his feelings about Bella, all their conversation was funny as Hell, I bet we all wish we had a best friend like Jasper...I'm so glad Edward is going to let his guard down and let Bella in...I can't wait for the moment he finds out that she isn't into JB...Well, on to the last day of filming, and looking forward to the wrap party as well...

Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

That was Fucking PRICELESS!!!!!  I have loved every second of this story up to now, and that was AMAZING!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:37 PM · On: In Control

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Unlucky for Some

Oh my God! I hope Angela is going to be alright, I wonder how the fire started and if it was in their apartment...I wonder where Bella will stay now? Probably with Alice; It would be too much to hope that it would be with Edward, ya I know, wishful thinking...I think Alice set that whole lunch thing up, that's so Alice's m.o., the sneaky little shit! :)  Edward took Bella to lunch! I loved that part of this chapter...It was good that he let Bella in a little, now she has a few more clues as to what makes him tick...Finally a little progress...He was so sweet, protective, and concerned for her when they pulled up to her apartment...You could just tell he wanted to be with her and comfort her as the ambulance pulled away, can't wait to see if he'll go to the hospital to be there for her...Oh, I got caught up in the end of the chapter and forgot to mention Bellas latest dream, I think that one had me panting a bit...I would absolutly give anything to know what Edward was thinking when Bella answered her door in nothing but a towel, wet hair dripping down her back...Oh, one more thing I forgot, I can't believe Edward asked Bella about JB at lunch, that was so unlike him, and again Bella dropped the ball with her vague answer...I'm getting a bit impatient with this dance these two are doing around each other...Totally not complaining about your story and you are really a good writer, I'm just anxious for these two to get together :D

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Mixed Messages

*Giggles* Well there you go, Bella knows that Edward didn't leave with Tanya, but he still thinks there's something between Bella and JB...I can't wait until all the cards are on the table with these two...I love Jasper and Alice so much (they are my fav couple after E/B) Edward is so lucky to have such a wonderful and caring family, and of course THE best friend in the world...Now if he can just get it together he can have the best girl in the world too...Oh yeah, I'm so looking forward to the premier and the rap party, a trip overseas? That should be fun ;)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 02:19 AM · On: The Swan

Holy shit! Edward and Bella are totally thinking the same things about each other, jumping to conclusions, etc., etc. I hope they figure out (quickly) that looks are decieving, things are not as they appear to be...I want yell at them to get their shit together, but where would the fun be in that? They need to wallow in their misery for a bit longer, aye? Yes, I am guilty of thinking Edward might have boned the slutty, lying, desperate skank that is Tanya, I'm so glad I was wrong, shame on me for thinking that...The bad part is that Bella will think they did, just as Edward thinks there is something going on with JB...I wonder if Bella is really going to quit...I have too many questions and theories about how that could go down...I just can't wait to see what happens next...Oh, and I was wondering when Rosalie would pop up, now the gangs all here! Oooo, I also can't wait to get more info on Edwards past and why he thinks he's not good enough for Bella, it seems that maybe something bad or traumatic happened to make him the way he is, just a guess, I wonder if it has anything to do with his mother...I also think that the drawing hanging in Edwards house is his mother...Holy crap, it's 2:16 a.m., I need some sleep, I hate to leave this story though!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 01:24 AM · On: A Good Defense is a Good Offense

Great chapter, very enlightening, love hearing from Edward, must go read..........

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Ugly Duckling

*Frowning and Eyerolling* Not at you, but at Bella and Edward...All I have to say is this, Edward better not screw Tanya, because we all know It'd just be because he got his ego bruised by Bella, and Jacob needs to back off...I'm not opinionated or anything *Winks* So happy to see Jasper finally, love him!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Lip Service

*Facepalm* What I find amusing about Edward accepting Bellas help to go over his 'lines', was that he damn well knew what was on that page, including the kiss at the end, he could have skipped that part, but noooo...I think that's why he had that look on his face (anger, confusion, regret), maybe angry at himself for doing that part of the scene with her, confused by his feelings from that kiss, and regret for either actually doing that part of the scene or regret that it didn't last longer, oh I crack myself up with my silly ideas! He's probably mad at himself for not keeping his feelings in check, she is his PA after all, I'll bet he's confused by her reaction, he probably regrets kissing her because now he'll want more...Oh crap, I need to stop this, I could come up with tons of scenarios, or gee, maybe I should just keep reading...Edward was so sweet as he was taking care of her wrist, then like Bella thought, nice Edward went out the same door Emmett came in...I realize that Edward may have been a bit of a moody person before Bella started working for him, but I think now he is over compensating because of the feelings he has for her (I think he's fighting those feelings)...Poor Bella, she was already an emotional mess; being in love with Edward is going to get a little messy for her, trying to hide the fact that you're in love with someone is no easy task...But knowing our Bella, it will be written all over her face and she won't be able to hide it from some people...Of course the one person who matters will undoubtedly be the last to see it, or he'll be in denial...Oh, the drama, I love it, just like I love your story...

Reviewer: kamilynne (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:44 PM · On: The Big Picture

MORE!! Please? Pretty please? With Edward on top? :)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Drawing Lines

Gah! That was hot...I just knew when Bella offered to practice lines with Edward it was going to be some sexy little scene, not just some 'lines'  Yeah, Bella will get all hot and bothered by this kiss, but will Edward just play it off and thank her for helping him practice his 'lines'  Hey, I just thought, it's too bad Bella hadn't come upstairs a few minutes later, she might have seen Edward with out a towel wrapped around his gorgeous bod, or anything...Oh well, maybe another time...And yes, I'm going to bitch about JB again; is it just me or did it sound like in his phone call with Bella that he's taking this dinner thing more seriously than he let on? Oooo, It just dawned on me that Edward is feeling better, I'll bet he'll be going now (I hope), that should be interesting...I can't wait to see the dress that Alice will no doubt talk Bella into getting (not that I'll actually see it, you know what I mean)  I thought  it was really sweet when Carlisle was talking to Bella about Edward when he dropped her off at her place...

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 11:51 AM · On: First Aid

I'm glad Edward isn't too sick...Hmm, Emmett thinks he sees something between Edward and Bella...Was Edward really dreaming about Bella? :D OK, I screwed up on Esme, but I still want to know who the dark haired girl is in the drawing on Edwards wall, maybe it's no one, but again, I get a feeling there is a story behind it, eh it's probably my imagination...Edward was dreaming about Bella!!!!!!!! Sorry, I got a little excited again...Well I knew it, Jacob asked Bella to that dinner, even though he said it wasn't a date; I'm just not happy about that at all...It may be innocent enough, but like I already stated in an earlier review, I don't like JB under any circumstance, period...I wonder if Edward heard Bella tell Alice that JB asked her to that dinner, and if so I wonder what he thought, if anything... :) 

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Reality Check!

The dream Bella's had the past three nights is hot as Hell; I noticed her mention of not being able to see the mans face through the frosted glass, imagine my surprise when there was frosted glass at Edwards house...Coincidence? I wonder who the drawing of the woman with the long brown hair is that's hanging on the wall at Edwards house...There's been no mention of Edwards mom so far (that I can remember) so maybe it's her? I also noticed that when Bella first came into Edwards bathroom he had whispered "Mom?" Or maybe the drawing is an ex-girlfriend of Edwards, just guessing...It's pretty clear that Bella is attracted to Edward, but I did notice a few subtle things by Edward as Bella was helping him to his bed, I wonder what he's thinking about her...And what is up with Emmett and his little smirks and eyebrow wigglings? He must know something, or he just picked up on how Bella feels about Edward, is she that obvious? I wonder if anyone else has noticed? I can't wait to see if Edward will be nicer to Bella after her taking care of him or if he'll go back to the way he was before...I think maybe he's attracted to her too, but he's in denial or something...Onward to chatper six!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Assumptions

Just a few thoughts: I wonder if there is anything going on between Edward and Tanya besides acting...I'm glad to see Emmett in the story...Thank God for Alice, she may save Bellas sanity...Sorry, but I don't like Jacob in anyone's story, I hope he doesn't ask Bella out, and if he does I hope she says no...Bella was awesome when she put Lauren in her place, she's gonna be great at her job if she can keep that up, it seems to me she is going to have to be a little tough to put up with Edward, I hope she doesn't put up with his shit...Still early in your story, but what the fuck is Edwards damage? He's all pissy about having a PR person being hired for him, or is it just Bella he's opposed to? I can't believe he appologized to her, though she deserved it...It's still early (only ch.4) but I love this story, I'm hoping you have some chapters in EPOV...Maybe his attitude with most people besides his family, and of course keeping up appearances for his public image is that he thinks everyone just wants a piece of him...No, not like that! Although, I wouldn't mind a piece of Edward Cullen ;)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Acting the Part

I'm thinking Jessica was maybe a little jealous that Bella got that particular job, just a guess...It's a little early in your story (only ch.3) but I think Edward is attracted to Bella already, again just a guess...I'm glad his family is so nice, it would suck if they were snobs; I can't wait to find out what kind of personality Edward really has...I'm already sucked in by your story, this is going to be good!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 04:06 AM · On: First Impressions

Yay? I'm not sure what to make of Edward at this point...I think I'm glad Bella got the job, but I'm not sure yet...Too bad Bella can't say, 'Bite me' to Jessica...Angela will be so happy for her and Seth will no doubt be jealous, but happy too...I have to wonder just how much of Bellas ass Edward did see that day, and if he liked what he saw, I'm sure seeing her on all fours might have sparked his interest...I would love to hear that encounter from EPOV, and the second interview when he could hardly look at her, I want to know what he was thinking...Maybe you'll have the next chapter in EPOV...I guess I better quit typing and go read! :)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 03:10 PM · On: The Interview

*Giggling* I've been dying to start this story for a while now...It's started out fun already! Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 02:36 PM · On: The Big Picture

He is so insecure, possessive - a bit worrying, don't you think? I mean, it's nice they have such hot sex, but he kinda needs to get a grip.

Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 04:41 AM · On: The Big Picture

I love the way that Bella truly sees Edward in this chapter.  Despite the fact that he upset her with the job stuff and that, essentially, he fucked her against a wall to help ease his insecurity...she loves him enough to understand those things, gives him what he needs and, of course, revels in his Caveward behavior. She's learning to love the man, not the guy on the pedestal and it makes things so much better.

And just for the record, eating mac n cheese with Edward, prepared by Edward, following hot hot sex would be SOOO much better than anything the fanciest restaurant could offer. Just sayin'.  ;)

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 04:09 PM · On: The Big Picture

Nothing better than a sexy and agressive Edward.  I am injoying reading this fic so very much.  It should be interesting at Angela's wedding.  I cannot wait for more.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READINGS.  Sherri

Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 09:08 PM · On: The Interview

The line has been cast and I'm nibbling ;)  Probably only a matter of time before I'm hooked!  (So cheesy, I know!!)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 11:15 AM · On: The Big Picture

Caveward ... fuck me sideways. 

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 06:31 AM · On: The Big Picture

Really loved it!!!!! Yeah, it was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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