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Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Apart

hot fucking edward

he knows he needs to propose and make her his forever

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Apart

so what is jacob going to try and pull at that wedding, because im sure that he is that stupid!! and bellas mom? when will edward propose?

Reviewer: lilangel_me (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Apart

He wants to marry her!!!!! Yeah - that better be right :P  I loved that chapter - oh Edward making Jacob scared was priceless!!!  Can't wait for the next chapter - and when does Edikins get to meet mommy dearest?.....  Great writing!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Apart

He finally realizes he wants to marry her?

Did I win 10 Edward fucks against the wall? Oh, pretty please??

Great chapter, as always!

Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Wishful Thinking

That was the BEST FUCKING CHAPTER EVER WRITTEN!!!! 

Reviewer: lilangel_me (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 06:44 PM · On: The Big Picture

Okso I started reading this story like 3 days ago and havn't been able to concentrate on ANYTHING else!  I am in love with your writing.  I must say Your "Holy....Batman"'s made me laugh out loud at first and now I read the chapter and try not to look at the author notes untill I guess what the ... is going to be.  I got 2 right!!!!:)  Anyway LOVE LOVE LOVE the story can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightxxxxx (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Truth

WOOWWW loved it ,long but loved it

Reviewer: twilightxxxxx (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Mr. Nice Guy

i love it it was fab and i would loveee to write a strory with you you are very talented

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Inevitable

I wish all couple fights can be so.  I know my aunt and uncle fights are suttle ones.  A said this before.  This has been a good read from start to finish.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Fate

Awsome chapter.  I love a good opera  too.  Is the opera a good place to do something "quite" ;}

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Italy Part One - Arrivals

This story is rocking so far. I've been doing my reviews on my cell. I hope there're going throuh. The screen shows nothing. Anyhoo. I'm loving it.

Reviewer: Maddie22 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 06:27 PM · On: The Big Picture

read all the chapters in one go.. great writing....can't wait for more

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 11:02 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Very, very romanic. edward is master in the romance department. Anther great chapter.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Plan of Action

That was a fun chapter.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Playing by the Rules

I liked it.  I liked it alot.  I know they say to rise above it all, but damit if Edward doesn't make the whole I got your ass, look soooooooo good.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Rising to It

that was a good chapter and I loved the ending.  But Bella is getting on my nerves with her being selfconsious bull, she deserves good things just like Edward.  Do she thinks she deserves less.  Own it Swan.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Rising to It

A good ending.  But Bella is truly getting on my nerves with her selfconsious bullshit.  A man that can get anyone in the world that he wants and he chose her.  What part of that don't she understand?  Was her life so wrong that she deserves less than?  Bella own it.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 04:55 AM · On: In the Know

I am loving this story so far.  Man, star sexed Edward can't get enough.  Bella is one luck you know what.  Seth will go home and have happy happy dreams tonight.

Reviewer: Lost Star (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 01:59 PM · On: The Big Picture

Woah. Just read the entire story up to this point and it is fantastic! :D

Reviewer: twilightjunki (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Fate

UGHHH totally hot chapter:) you definately write some good lovin and some awsome story  :) going to read on!!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Coming Clean

You write great lemons, never doubt that! ;)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Hide and Seek

Another awesome chapter, thanks!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Honesty

I'm so glad Edward told Bella about his past,I felt so bad for him because he felt so bad, but we all do stupid shit when we are younger...I just feel like I'm missing something and there is more...They made a lot of progress, I'm so glad they talked, it brought them closer to each other...That was some seriously fuckhot sex in the pool, I was getting a bit hot and bothered myself just reading about it...I feel a bit giddy, if I smoked, I think I'd be having a cigarette right about now...I'm so happy for them but they'll have some things to work out, like how is this going to affect Bella working for Edward now, will she still be able to, and if so how are they going to keep it a secret? Oh my God, Al, Jaz, Em, and Ro are going to be so happy for them, and so will Ang and Ben, and I hope Carlisle and Esme too...I can't wait until they tell each other ILY...*Heavy sigh*

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Protection

Jesus! Hell of a chapter, well done...Loved it...

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Courage

You are too funny trying to appease the "anti-period-sex" population with your a/n's!  LOL!  All I have to say is that they shouldn't knock until they try it because it. is. hot.

Loved the chapter.  They're so sappy lately I think I could wring out my laptop and make some syrup for my waffles!  But I love it! 

And these two doing anal... hello!  To quote Starward "Holy fucking Christ".

;-)Your fic is great!  Off to read more!

 

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