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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Dish the Dirt

im sure that edward is going to be upset and then get tanya in trouble! i wonder what they could find out about her?!

Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Dish the Dirt

I can't believe that I have caught up and not reviewed more than once.  That is so not like me -- but -- I have enjoyed this story very much.

So Rosalie was the culprit all along.  She is truly devastated by this.  She has made a step in the right direction telling Bella and Edward.  

But that Tanya.  Such a manipulator!  Skank!  I can't stand her!!!!

Edward will definitely be upset about the situation. 

Can't wait for next update.   I promise to do better with reviews. 

Thank you for writing.

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter 

 

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Dish the Dirt

This was another GREAT chapter!!  So very hooked on this story, just can't get enough!!!!  Now, the angst wasn't that bad, Just Like You Said!!  Hummm how on earth to get even with the Strawberry Blonde Witch!?!?  Do the words Tar and Feather ring any bells here?  Poor Rose, vicious blackmailers!!!

Well we shall see how our Edward takes the information, I thought Bella handled it pretty well actually!  Italy should be VERY INTERESTING Darlings  hehehehehe!!!  Can't wait. 

Have a Happy and Safe New Year's

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Dish the Dirt

Edward will probably freak out a bit, but then he'll understand and want to see Tanya hurt for what she's done.  Right??!!

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 49: A Union

Holy Shit!!!!

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Coming Clean

Yes, I most definately think you have the Lemony Talents....Hands down!!!  This Chapter Rocked!!!

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:12 PM · On: A Good Defense is a Good Offense

interesting, and the plot thickens!!!!

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Lip Service

Poor Bella!  I heart hurts for our girl here!!!!!  She just needs a good nghts sleep!?!?

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Drawing Lines

Awh Hell!!!  Who wouldn't drool, walking in on a half dressed,  Hotward!?!?!?    I say Bravo brave Bella for helping him with the scene!!! 

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 07:11 PM · On: First Aid

Hummm!!!  Beautiful Bella eh!  Now she's going to the Banquet with Jacob, hummm!  Interesting!

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Reality Check!

Yes you could definately feel the tension between them.  But I'm looking forward to his explaination as to why he was so cool to her, and what did he mean by I know your tough!?!?  Humm  getting very good!!! Thanks for the wonderful chapter!!!

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Assumptions

Very good chapter, I love how she (Bella) stood firm to the reporter who turned out to be Lauren, that was great and a wonderful introduction to Tanya and Jacob both.  Really liked how he stammered his apologies to Bella for being late and for the Great Job she did for him today.  This is going to be great, I can see right now, and we arent into the story that deep.  Keep up the great writing and feeling motivated by wonderful imagination!!!!

Reviewer: JasonGee (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Inevitable

Ugh, Bella let him off way too easy! I'd be livid, and there would be at least a week of sleeping in the guest room.

Reviewer: ilovekristenstewart (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 49: A Union

This story is fucking amazing

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 03:10 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

OMG, that was one heck of a chapter!!! starts with amazingly hot sexy scene then ends making you cry with Edward's heartfelt gift!!!  I don't think SM could have written that better -- BRAVO!!!!!!!

Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Coming Clean

WOAH

Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Honesty

That was so hot!  I love this story!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

absolutely loved this chapter, just wish there was a way Edward could have bought Bella out of this contract for good!!!!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Drawing Lines

ugh, Ed purposing got her to help him with his lines just to kiss her!!! lil tease that he is!! curious to see how she will respond & what he will do as well :)

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 09:58 AM · On: First Aid

fun chapter "beautiful bella" lol

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:34 AM · On: First Impressions

Congratulations indeed!!! can't wait to see how Jessica reacts!!! :)

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 07:33 PM · On: An Educational Visit

Oh boy.  Renee is a handful, isn't she?  Every daughter's nightmare when she meets your boyfriend, lol.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 05:29 PM · On: An Educational Visit

Oh boy... I think Tanya fucked the film up.  She's not done getting her claws into Edward.... and Rosalie knows... that's why she wants to talk to Bella.  I hope Bella remembers to call her.  Great chapter.  I'm glad Renee wasn't too embarrasing. :)

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 12:16 PM · On: An Educational Visit

This story is ending, why? Angst ahead, well crap. Of course if it involves Tanya I can see it coming...why do I have a feeling Tanya was the cause for the film being ruined *shrugs*, who knows - oh wait, you do.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:31 PM · On: An Educational Visit

Leave it to Renee to say all the embarrassing things possible during the conversations.  First at the airport announcing Bella was pregnant.  Then discussing marriage.  Questioning Edward when he knew Bella was the only woman for him.  Talking about her college boyfriend.  Implications of her sex orientation towards same sex.  Now we all know Edward is well aware that isn't or wasn't Bella's problem with men.  Talking about her running around naked with Seth.  Making it seem a lot longer and more frequent then when it was for them.  Also Renee doesn't believe Seth is gay.  Now both Edward and Jasper are very much aware that Seth likes men.  He loves Bella like a sister.  Talking about looking for a wedding hat and Edward said no problem looking.  Flowing with the conversation neither confirming or denying.  But when Bella told Edward about her mother at the airport and Edward turned green I can't blame Bella for being hurt.  Bringing doubts that maybe Edward isn't really as serious about staying together for a lifetime.  He did tell at the end of the evening that marriage and children with Bella are his goals, but he wants to spend time with her enjoying life for awhile before they take that next step.

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