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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Drawing Lines
AHHHHHHHHH!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!
Reviewer: PolkaDotty (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Arghhh Cliffy!!
Wonderful chapter :D
xx
Reviewer: Brittbee21 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Cliff hangers are a bitch!! so please post another chapter as soon as possible! I have to know what happens next! and soon please!
Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Drawing Lines
ugh! what a cliffie! anyway...great chapter..update soon!
Reviewer: Llewlynne_Rose (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Drawing Lines
You are a wicked ... wicked person for leaving us poor readers with such a heck of cliffy!!!! AHHHHHHH!!!! I need the next chapter!!! :-)
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Drawing Lines
nasty nasty nasty how could you leave it there. i cant wait for next chapter hope it is the ball
Reviewer: cautionxoxo (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Drawing Lines
You are evil. I can not believe you left it like that! ha Great chapter. : )
Reviewer: Juuh (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Drawing Lines
Oh God!!!!
This chapter was just perfect!!!
please update soon!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Drawing Lines
"I held my breath as I felt his mouth mould slowly but firmly against mine."
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CAN'T WAIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: B and E 4ever (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Drawing Lines
You are evil how can you just leave it like that. Update soon i waiting no dying to see what happens.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Drawing Lines
Ahh! Cliffhangers are just... not nice! How dare you! No, seriously. I loved this chapter and you did a fantastic job. I especially liked how they were reading lines back and forth.
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Drawing Lines
So fantastic!!!! But you are a real tease...lololol
please update soon!
Reviewer: Rosalie_Hale (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Drawing Lines
10 stars.. one of the best all human stories I have read on here. Cant wait to see what you do with the story
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Drawing Lines
yay!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Drawing Lines
squeal!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!! tHAT WAS HOT!!!! Eventhough they were just playing a part. Loved the chapter!!!
Reviewer: Ironic Twist (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Even if it was just a scene it was hot! Great job.
Reviewer: Bibinator (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Ahhhhhh how could you?!
lol brilliant, I love it
Reviewer: LuckyStar113 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Drawing Lines
oh that's just evil! but i love it! i was almost hoping he slipped up and said 'bella' instead of 'ella' but i'll take it! :)
looking forward to the next chappie!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Awesome chapter. What a coincident the lead in the movie's name is "Ella" so close to "Bella". Is this really a movie being made or a set up to woo our fair Bella. Edward tricked her into practicing those lines by throwing that script at her. I just know he was setting her up to kiss her. Why the cliffhanger there? Now we all have to wait for the next update. It's getting harder and harder the waiting. The story is really getting interesting. Can't wait for his reaction at the Fox Dinner. He is going to flip, especially when she is on Jacob's arm as her escort/date. Update when you can. Really loving this story.
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Holy SHIT!! That was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you i'm so glad that you liked it!!
Jax x x
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Drawing Lines
I want to practice lines too
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Drawing Lines
oh, he is such a tease! I am not sure how this scene will continue! Will Bella come to her senses and run for her life-hopefully not. I think the upcoming dinner might be juicy. Hurry and update!
Author's Response: I like Teaseward!! hee hee
Thank you for the review i'm so glad that you liked it!!
Jax x x
Reviewer: Rosat (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Drawing Lines
HOW COULD YOU !!!!!! Gurrrr
Hurry up and update soon ;D
Author's Response: Apologies!! I just love keeping you in the edge of your seat!!
Thanks for the review
Jax x x
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Oh...my...god...!! Please for the love of all your fans update soon!!!!! That was frickin awesome! I'm beginning to wonder in the scene in the kitchen...where he was asking her about blushing...was he trying to see if she blushed for any "other" reasons? *snickers* I love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your awesome review - i'm thrilled that you like it!!!
I like Cheekyward - he could be my fave!
Jax x x x
Reviewer: micilyne (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Drawing Lines
okay, that was not nice.
keep it coming. i like the plot. i would really like to see where you take them.
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