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Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
GAHHHHHH.... this is quite the mess. Normally I would feel as if Bella misintepreted everything, twisting things to fit her insecure mind, but really - this time around I can't blame her for thinking the way she did. So props for you for making this so believable. Yes, she's still insecure, and to some degree she did twist things around in her mind... but realistically speaking the things she'd encountered must have confused the hell out of her. Edward's behavior is a good indication, he hadn't exactly played nice with her a whole lot. And of course, Tanya. Bella should know better than to listen to her misconstrued opinion about Edward "being embarassed to kiss her in that scene because there were feelings". Bah! That woman is ridiculous.
Your story is so good, and quite angsty... I like it. ;D Please keep up the great work and hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Nautica7mk (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
I like it. Like it a lot.
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
love the long chapter
Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
awww, poor Bella, poor confused Edward. He needs to make his feelings known FAST, before Jake muscles in. I really like this one. You're doing a great job. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: nicoleyoo (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
soo good,
keep updating!
like noow !
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
great part
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
Ooh, I love, love this story, but PLEASE have pity on us & no more Jake/Bella and ESPECIALLY no more Edward/Tanya. Aargh, that Tanya is the world's most annoying female, and she's messing with this thing between Edward & Bella and she just needs to drop off the face of the earth!! Please? :)
Anyway, you have a fantastic story here & I can't wait to read more (even if I have to put up with E & B with others as long as it's only temporary!). Please update soon!
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
hey i love the long chapter we dont mind cant wait for more
Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
Sad to say that I would've re-acted the same way as Bella. Gah. He wants Bella. Frickin Jasper and his little clues. <3 it all.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
Good chapter! Not to long at all. I can't wait to read EPOV! I hope they get together soon.
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
Poor Bella-she just can't catch a break! And edward-don't get me started on what a jerk he is. I like the introduction of Esme and Jasper-veryu subtle. Sorry for any types-it's almost 2am and I was out drinking!
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Ugly Duckling
I hope Bella doesn't quit. If she tries to I hope Edward or Alice talk her out of it. Please hurry with Edward's POV!
Reviewer: ZiggaZigAhh (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Ugly Duckling
I"M ALWAYS SUPER EXCITED TO SEE A NEW CHAPTER FROM THIS WONDERFUL STORY AND TODAY DEFINITELY DID NOT DISAPPOINT! CAN"T WAIT FOR MORE!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Lip Service
Great update!
Reviewer: Devy love (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Lip Service
ahhh cant wait for the rest!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Lip Service
ahhh - i'm loving it. can't wait for more goodness. :)
Reviewer: Brittbee21 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Lip Service
Please hurry with your next chapter! I love the story, so thanks for that! Cant wait!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Lip Service
*Mike leans in to kiss Ella*
You fucking imbecile, Swan!
How could I have thought that the kiss would have meant anything?
How arrogant was I to think that someone like Edward Cullen would actually kiss me because he wanted to?
POOR BELLA!!
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Lip Service
I bet the fox dinner will be great,only hope jealousward will make an appearance ;)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Lip Service
=[ We should slap Edward.
And then kick him in his gorgeously chiseled abs.
FOR REAL.
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Lip Service
awww, poor bella!
edward should really grow up and get his mood in check :P
luv luv luv your story :)
Reviewer: jillycate (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Lip Service
I like this sotry: I am interested in what makes Edward's moods shift.
Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Lip Service
Love the story. I'm so excited to see what will happen at the dinner.
Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Lip Service
I loved this chapter. It's nice to see a different side of Edward once in a while. I am really looking forward to the dinner. I know that something of importance is going to happen there, am I right??
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Lip Service
Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see where you'll take this next.
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