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Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Ugly Duckling
tehheeee
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Drawing Lines
well he's just mean....I want him!
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Reality Check!
Mom....haha
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:02 PM · On: The Swan
So fun to read, and I love both POV.
Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 10:18 AM · On: The Swan
great chapter! Edward is indeed a complex creature. I'm so glad he didn't leave with that skank. thant would hasve made the chapter not so great.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:53 PM · On: The Swan
Ugh come on already we can be angsty but still get jacob and tanya the hell out of the picture
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:22 PM · On: The Swan
Oh thank freakin christ that Tanya did NOT go home with him....
I just cringe at the thought...
Will Edward ever get over himself and just go for it? I can't wait until your next update...
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:12 PM · On: The Swan
Ok so the idiot bases his opinion on her wanting him to whether or not she's gonna dance with him giving her only what ten seconds to decide and not properly asking her, WTF. Seriously, what is his problem!
Ok so really looking forward to the next chapter, i'm guessing that we're back to bella's perspetive, so is she really gonna quit?
Reviewer: jasonandbrandy1999 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:51 PM · On: The Swan
awesome. Great story and cannot wait for more
Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:33 PM · On: The Swan
please get the next chapter up SOON!!! :) this is great!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 05:25 PM · On: The Swan
I feel so bad for him.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 05:13 PM · On: The Swan
O.k. really feeling bad for Edward and how hard he has fell for her.....i knew he wouldn't go home with her!! I hope he has the nerve to let her know how he feels soon....but that may make for a shorter fic!!?? I really was glad to see this one updated!! Still lovin' it!!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:57 PM · On: The Swan
What wasw Bella thinking?!?!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:45 PM · On: The Swan
You didn’t think he’d really do that skank did you!!?? Silly!!......Well, I'm thankful he didn't!
I wish Jacob would just the get hell out of there!
And I'm hoping that Edward will grow a set and talk to Bella, let her know how he feels! Could a guy with that kind of fame and adoration really be that insecure?
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:42 PM · On: The Swan
Stupid EDWARD!!!
Why can't he just grow a pair (or use the pair that we all know he has) and just fess up to his feelings for BELLA!!! UGH!
More soon please!
Reviewer: anntje (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 11:32 AM · On: The Swan
Loved this chapter. Love the hole story!
Reviewer: TweetieBird (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:28 AM · On: The Swan
why is it that edward loathing himself usually sounds pathetic, but you make it seem like one of his good traits? it blows my mind. i'll be trying to figure out how it works for the rest of the story ;)
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:24 AM · On: The Swan
Your Edward is one totally fucked up guy!! He is so besotted it's almost too funny. I take it he has never been in this kind of situation before? I am glad he was able to pull it together and finish his scenes. I am not sure how they can work together from now on, at least not from Edward's point of view.
I hope we see inside Bella's head next to find out if she is handling these feelings better-I have a suspicion she is as we females always manage better when it comes to emotions!!
Reviewer: Brittbee21 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:34 AM · On: The Swan
rip my heart out why dont you! i am going to be going crazy until you post your next chapter so please hurry! my heart is just aching for both of them. its so furstrating.. i wish someone would just yell that they both have feelings for each other! thanks for your work!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:08 AM · On: The Swan
Ha, complex is definitely right. Good job! Love the EPOV. please let someone make a move soon...i'm doubting it's going to be Edward.
Reviewer: fotogirl (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:55 AM · On: The Swan
I really, really like this story, so update soon! It was too long since last chapter. :)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:42 AM · On: The Swan
good chapter... though i really wanted bella to dance with edward...
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:36 AM · On: The Swan
poor edward, you'll have to give him some of his self-confidence back. he has to go after bella!!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:29 AM · On: The Swan
gee you'd think Edward would be a bit more polished lol
Reviewer: landslide (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:21 AM · On: The Swan
You crack me up! This Edward is brilliant. Definetly one of my favorite ff.
Update soon, please!
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