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Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:51 PM · On: In Control
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:49 PM · On: In Control
If EPOV was made at Cold Stone, I would get the Gotta Have It size.
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! ANGELA!!!!!! holy crap that was ridiculously sad! at least we see the happy in love-with-bella-swan-but-wont-tell-her-edward!!! lmao..this was great and an update two days in a row?!?!?? EPIC!!!! do you think you could do another magic trick and update tom again? lmao :D
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
NNNOOO!!!
I was worried just by the chapter title, but then B&E looked like they were getting closer to 'fessing up to each other... and you had to take that twist right there omg!!
I'm "hoping" that Edward's high-tailed it to the hospital to support Bella though :)
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
This is getting good.
Reviewer: siggynic (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
I liked this chapter! Their dinner was great! Looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
So, I'm really really sick. Like high fever, icky scratchy cough. And, except for the ending, which was nice of course, but depressing, this chappy definitely made me feel better. :P
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
What a chapter, where to start? Bella's reaction to hearing Edward saying "Beautiful Bella" was hilarious, but I think she should consider option 3 as wel: Only when either sick or drunk will Edward lower his walls enough to speak his true mind..
Meddling match-maker Alice, what a sneaky trick she pulled, but it worked! Edward finally dared ask Bella out and showed his nice side as well. Loved it, very hot! And now the're even, she's seen him in a towel fresh from the shower and he's seen her as well, lol!
Poor Angela, please don't let her be too badly wounded, ok? So now obviously the flat is going to be damaged so Bella will have to live somewhere else for a while, perhaps at Edward's house? So many possibilities there...
Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
OMG this chapter was amazing. I really liked this side fo Edward. And Alice the match maker.... And what happened to Angela. Keep it up!
*meldisil
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
OMG what the hell happened! i hope this brings them loser together
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Mixed Messages
oh i hope Bella doens't let Edward get away with that!! great part
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
This story rocks! Two updates in one day! *squeal*
Reviewer: Naudisia (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
Aw... Gotta love the story... But kind of don't like you, not nice leaving such a cliffhanger ;)
Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
Please update soon, that cliffy was MEAN!!! Great Chapter, I like getting to know your Edward:)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
Oh dear good your gonna kill me...Angela! OMG What in the hell happened? This chapter had me laughing (fuck a duck...comedy gold) Swooning...come on sweet unsure Edward who wouldn't? But left in a panic...What happened at the apartment?
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Unlucky for Some
Loving this story so far!!!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
A Cliffy indeed. Is this your ploy to get Bella under Edward's roof?
Reviewer: YolieRomantic (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
awsome!
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
Great chapter! Edward is so sweet here!!
Reviewer: ravendiva (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
You evil...evil...evil woman, How could you end the chapter there? You like torturing us don't you? Love it!! write more please.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
Oh Angela! Oh Bella! Oh Edward!
WHAT IS GOING ON? Now that is what I call a turn of events!
And I completely loved how Edward called Bella "honey". Swoon!
Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
It was nice to seethe softer side of Edward, and to have Edward and Bella get to interact over the lunch date arranged but Alice 's subterfuge (wicked little thing that she is). Hopefully this change in their dynamic will continue as we see what happens with Bella and Angela after the fire...
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
I liked seeing that lighter side of Edward. I hope that Bella makes it clear that Jake and she are only friends. That would probably go a long way toward comforting Edward, lol! I hope Angela's okay.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Unlucky for Some
Poor Angela. I hope she's ok. Maybe this will bring Edward and Bella closer together. Good chapter!
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