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Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
im so happy he's not going to sit around and wallow ! It's going to be awesome and Im so excited for more! pleaseplease please please please please pleas more more more more more!
Reviewer: NinjaKitten (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
okay, I'll admit it... I'm a lurker. I don't review as often as I should, which is odd since I have my own story and love getting reviews - thus, here I am trying to be better about it.
Really loving this story... more please! Also, if they don't at least acknowledge SOMETHING between them soon, I might shoot someone.
That is all.
Reviewer: edwardluvr4eternity (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
AHHHHHH! I loved this chapter, but i wish he could have told her that he loves her in this one....but ill keep waiting patiantly. :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
Great chapter! I hope he can be the man she needs.
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
WHOA...THAT WAS A CHANGE, HUH? COULD IT BE EDWARD IS GROWING UP??? I REALLY LOVE JASPER; HE IS DIRECT AND TO THE POINT. AND THAT WHOLE SCENE AT THE END? AWESOME. THERE WAS SOMETHING SO INTIMATE ABOUT BELLA HOLDING EDWARDS SHIRT RATHER THAN WEARING IT. ALMOST LIKE IT SHE WAS IMAGINING IT WAS HIM SHE WAS HOLDING. AWW..SO GREAT
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
Jasper is a great best friend, there's no doubt about that. I'm so glad that Edward has realized his feelings, and knows that he has to let his guard down a bit. Great chapter! I'm loving these updates. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
yes yes yes me luvs it all
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
Awesome, more please?
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy
Well if reviews = new chapter i could write plenty!! I love love love jasper!!! And how cute is edward being? i just want them do act on it!!!
I hope there is somre fluff in the next one.
Oh and a big YAY for the quick updates!!! Very much appreciated!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:33 AM · On: In Control
All I can do is squeal like a little girl. :)
This is such a fantastic story! Your writing is amazing!
I hope we find out what happened to her apartment soon!
:D
Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 08:59 AM · On: In Control
I want it really bad!!! ;-)
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 08:58 AM · On: In Control
I want a friend like Alice!! Of course, the fates(or is it Alice again) conspire to have Bella spend the night with Edward! I'm not sure I want Edward's POV just because like canon Edward he is highly self critical about himself-and his feelings for Bella. I guess being her boss it's expected! You did a great job portraying the fear Bella is feeling for Angela, and the guilt whenever she finds herself having a good time. Really liked the chapter.
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:59 AM · On: In Control
i want it very, very badly. great chapters.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:31 AM · On: In Control
So... hopefully Angela's going to be ok.
But Bella and Edward's URST is about to go up a few notches hehe
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:33 AM · On: In Control
An update again, thanks! Great chapter! And I was right, she is staying at Edward's house, admittedly just for one night but somehow I think Edward and Alice will make her stay. Poor Bella, exhausted, worried, panicked, shocked and fightning her feelings for Edward, she will eventually break. Perhaps waking up screaming from a nightmare with Edward holding and calming her...?
EPOV? End of last chapter and this one in EPOV, YES PLEASE!!!! How much we want it? Whatever it takes, name your price!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 01:31 AM · On: In Control
great part
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 01:14 AM · On: In Control
ohh, i want it alright;)
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:30 PM · On: In Control
Let me just say Poor Ang! But besides that this was a freakin' hilarious chapter. I so love nervouse edward. mmm and sleeping in his shirt and bed....
Can't wait for his POV
Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:21 PM · On: In Control
Still loving the story! Here's hoping that Bella's stay wiwth Edward will prompt them to get even closer. As for EPOV...you knew we want it BAD!
Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:46 PM · On: In Control
More please!!!
Reviewer: Lazairahel (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:21 PM · On: In Control
Very powerful chapter. I like the way this is progressing.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:05 PM · On: In Control
I want it! ;o)
Excellent chapter, as usual. A friend recommended your story, and I'm so glad she did!
Reviewer: elw (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:38 PM · On: In Control
Ohh, getting interesting.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:22 PM · On: In Control
O.k. first i have to say my review of last chapter i said she didn't need to stay alone, not realizing....duh her appt. was on fire!!!! so just so you know i'm not a complete idiot!! So glad he was there for her......i knew he would be!!! I really want to know his POV. I bet he was about to bust a nut thinking about her in all that underware!!!! Alice, Alice, Alice......you gotta just love her. She makes things so much easier!! I love that he was giving her an out by saying not to let Alice make her do anything she didn't want to. so sweet! I really can't wait to see where this takes them. I must say if I had one suggestion.....he should come to check in on her and find her on his bed, broken and then he would just have to hold her right???? Great Chapter!!!! Great fic!!!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:00 PM · On: In Control
i hope angela gets better
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