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Reviewer: dark edwards girl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Protection

i loved it. edward the hero i cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Protection

Happy she didnt get too hurt... and that Edward beat the living shit out of him!! Love when he protects her!!!!

Also loved the extra long chapter and the quick updates!!! Wonderful writing as always...

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Protection

Can't possibly wait :)

Reviewer: aearlso (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Protection

amazing!...enough said

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Truth

Fantastic update, I'm loving these long chapters

Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Truth

FAN FUCKING TASTIC cant wait for more!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Truth

How much more considerate can Edward become?  Having all her clothes hung up in the wardrobes.  Including having her shoes all lines up.  It's like he had the staff move her into his home.  Still loved when he said let's go home.  Like it is both of theirs' home.  Stopping at an In N Out Burger wonderful.  They really do have the best burgers.  Glad Angela is out of ICU and only staying overnight for further observation and most likely released tomorrow.  What a great friend is Angela when she is laying in a hospital bed and allowing Bella to release all the tension, fear, love, and all the worrying thoughts locked inside her.  Granted a lot of those emotions and thoughts were about Angela almost dying, the fire damage, and the fact she has nowhere to go or all her belongings probably lost in the fire.  But Edward has done everything in his power to make Bella feel at home.  He wants her to treat his house as her own.  Poor Bella at the party at Alice, definitely should have watched her drinking.  Her mind's filter was dismantled and she said some pretty shocking things.  I gasped and laughed while reading them and woke my husband out of a sound sleep.  Now the one comment I was confused about was Edward's statements after her crude comment to Jasper, if he fired someone for doing what she did, then why was he smiling and is the bomb going to hit the fan tomorrow when all are sober?  Or was he just trying to rile her up or was he flirting with her trying to see if she was really implying inneundoes regarding her comments.  The looks between them were intense, I am surprised Emmett wasn't more crude and pointed it out to everyone there.  They both have to realize the other party is just as interested as they are to be together in all ways.  Looking forward to future chapters.  Very curious about what will happen when they arrive at Edward's house, will they or won't they?  The tension is so thick between them the readers can literally feel it through the internet.

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Truth

great chapter! more please!

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Truth

I seriously didn't want the chapter to end!  Awesome job.  This is definetly one of my top 5 favorite stories.  I love how you're drawing it out (even though it's slightly maddening for the readers).

Reviewer: Elvire23 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Truth

Love it, LOVE IT!  Hope you update soon!

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Truth

Ah I love this story!  Just read everything so far and I can't wait for the next chapter!  I love the pace of the progression of their relationship, it's perfect!  The sexual tension and their growing friendship is awesome.  This is going in my faves!  Xoxo

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Truth

WTF??? Where...what??  Get them together already!

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Mr. Nice Guy

So sweetttt!!  Love jasper...but I always love Jasper.  I love this story!!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Truth

LOL... The whole Cullen fiesta was great! Emmett just cracks me up with fun loving ways and his choice of swear words had me laughing up a storm. They really know how to have fun... =)

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Truth

I loved this chapter!  The family interaction was perfect...you really captured the Cullens and Co. very well.  The ending was great, too!  I can't wait to hear more from Bella, or from Edward if we're lucky...we have a premier coming up!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Truth

I loved the whole chapter --except the IN-and-OUT Burger part.  I really want a double-double fries and a shake --and I'm a good thousand miles from the closest one.  Somebody please eat one in my honor.

Reviewer: snowyland (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Truth

like it!!! love it!!!

please update it soonn :)

Reviewer: Luv2readEdward (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Truth

I loved the party! I'm glad you avoided the typical "they kiss at truth and dare". It was fun to see the relationships between everyone develop. I just really hope that Edward and Bella's angst finds a happy place soon. It's breaking my heart!

Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Truth

I so loved this chapter. Emmett kicked ass. I was laughing so hard that my kids came into my room just to check on me... Great stuff.... can't wait for the next chapter.....

Reviewer: Brittbee21 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Truth

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE FAST CHAPTERS AND I REALLY HOPE IT CONTINUES BECAUSE THIS IS JUST TOO MUCH! I NEED SOME MORE QUICKLY! I LOVE THIS STORY AND I GET SO EXCITED WHEN YOU UP DATE!! I LOVE HOW ITS GOING WITH E & B, ITS DRIVING ME CRAZY BUT I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Truth

Ok so I've been trying to get caught up for a while now between my work and school it just finally happened, i love the story loved this chapter it sounded like so much fun. Truth or Dare with the Cullens how fun!!!

 

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Truth

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG...that was hilarious!! *snickers* MORE MORE PLZ!!!!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Truth

argh! so very close to coming clean with each other!!!!

Sigh... wonder if they'll make it next chapter? It was great fun to see Bella interacting so well with the family once she settled in enough :)

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Truth

i can't wait for them to get together! it seems that they are moving in the right direction!

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Truth

Loved the chapter, loved the game-so much fun.  When I saw the title of the chapter, I thought they would finally tell the other how they were feeling, but I should have known NOT YET!!  And I am glad that the wait continues-I love the flirting going on.  I wasn't sure what he meant when he followed her into the kitchen and threatened to fire her(well, not really).  I thought there were going to be some admissions there but then they backed off.  Loved it all!

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