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Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Protection
I read the entire chapter again. loved it!! please do the different poitns of view, its great! CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Protection
Bring it on,Baby!!! BTW...I love angst. LOL...Awesome!!!!!
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Protection
bet the mornin' will be fun;)
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Protection
No need to be nervous. This chapter helped to bring these two closer together and although James is a complete creep, nothing too terrible happened to Bella.
Love and I mean love these long chapters.
More please.
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Protection
love the long parts so keep them coming!!
Reviewer: vixenella (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Protection
very well done
Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Protection
Oh wow I loved that Edward got to save Bella from James. This chapter was great. Now I am ready for them to move on in this relationship and see if Edward can handle an emotional relationship as well as a physical on. Will the fact that she is an assistant stand in the way of a deep relationship with her? Will he hurt her? can she have the confidence in herself to accept Edward love? I can't wait. I just read your update and am ready for the next one NOW, but I will try to be patient.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Protection
I like long chapters and I thought you did a great job on this one. Please let James be one of those actors who end up doing jail time adn not be allowed to get away with bad behavior just because of who he is. It wont be for this but maybe multiple DWI's drug possession or assult. :)
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Protection
that was so amazingly intense. I love the angsty stuff.
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Protection
Oh my. That was sad. But happy. But sad. Mostly sad. Poor Bella! But you're right, something needed to happen for them to talk. Really talk. No worries, I trust you. ;)
Reviewer: Feelybox (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Protection
I love it. I know I know....I've been lurking, but! I adore this story. If I kept you in my office and fed you homemade cookies would it help you write faster because I'm completely addicted to this little tale.
I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Protection
Great chapter! :) I love protective Edward!!!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Protection
Ok first of all every good story needs some kind of angst, seriously! i did like the pov change, i've read stories where the pov changes multiple times with multiple people which is weird but one switch is fine, in fact i'm not sure you could get this chapter to work without it. yes i'm sure that they are gonna have one hell of a chat in the morning, looking forward to that!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Ugly Duckling
Awww shit. Hes getting rid of his insecurities with Bella and jealousness with Jacob by sleeping around with Tanya. Haha. I feel like one of those carnival chickies.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Protection
at least it gave them an excuse to get in the same bed...
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Protection
W.O.W.!!!!!! that was AMAZING!!! i swear to god i was on the edge of my seat! i love how protective he is of her and how pissed he got at james...ugh and tanya..if i could kill her i would. james too. i cant wait until they finally get together and the dynamic of their relationship has definitely changed and i couldnt be more excited!!!! great chapter and im digging these long ones!! keep up the amazing work and please update soon!!! <3
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Protection
You shouldn't have been nervous about this chapter--it's awesome! I kept looking to see how much I had left to read and was sad when I saw it was nearly over. I wanted it to go on and on!
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Protection
I really liked this chapter. I can't believe what a bitch Tanya was and I hope Edward addresses what she said. Poor Bella, it's too bad she didn't get to show off that dress very long. The way I imagined it in my head has me drooling! I love the way you described it and I want it for myself, hehe. I can't wait until Edward and Bella finally give in to the sexual tension. My fingers are crossed for them waking up tangled and horny in the morning! Looking forward to the next chapter! Xoxo
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Lip Service
Oooooh. Bella loves Edward!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Drawing Lines
OOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im so jealous!!
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Protection
Please please update soon!! I know everyone probably this weekend is going to be seeing New Moon who isn't? lol but PLEASSSSE update soon! I absolutely love this story!!!!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Protection
Oh thank goodness they're getting some of that awkwardness outof the way! Can't wait for your update!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 03:24 PM · On: First Aid
Haha. Sexy Edward reamin hot sexy dreams of Bella. *wiggles eyebrows*
Reviewer: drema (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Protection
Wow, apparently angsty chapters are my cup of tea! Holy... That was great, ahhhhh, I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Reality Check!
Mmm. yummy. So hot. A sick, hot and sweaty Edward, laying on the bed, asking you to rub a wet rag on him. Mmm. NEW MOON PREMIERE BABBY!!!!!!!
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