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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Honesty

Yes!  Finally.  They might want to warn the guys not to swim in that pool.

Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Honesty

THANK GOD! Took 'em a while! I got so frustrated waiting for it to happen, I nearly re-wrote it JUST to hurry it up!.....ok thats a lie. But yayyyyyyyy! Pleaseeeeeeee update soon! I have to know what will happen!!

Reviewer: uncwsnook (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Honesty

Excellent chapter, the build up to the lemon was definitely worth the wait. Loved the intimate conversation Bella and Edward had before hand, it makes the romance between them seem more legit and not just lust. A vulnerable Edward makes him more desirable in my opinion, he's human, an extremely gorgeous human but just the same. I love the story so far and hope you won't keep up waiting long for the next one !!

Reviewer: Thinkingofyou (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Honesty

I liked this chapter. I am happy that they finally let their feelings control them. Both of them needed it.

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Honesty

hot hot hot loved it

Reviewer: SyrenPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Honesty

Wonderful chapter! so glad they finally got together! keep it coming!

Reviewer: poous (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Honesty

HOT HOT HOT about time these 2 got together

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Honesty

yippi!!! finally they're together:) i love this story, hope u update soon.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Honesty

just love your long chapters. Edwards history is awesome. Totally laughed at bellas oreo story. I like that they at least spent the day getting to know eachother better before the hot lemon. Very nice by the way.

Reviewer: edwardcrazy (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Honesty

finally... excellent chapter... you have no idea how much I waited for a little lemon between these two...

Reviewer: Kassiopeia (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Honesty

I loved it. The way she aksept him regardles skeletons. And the lemonscene was HOT. And that he almost said I love you to her (I guess it was that he was about to say in there) it was so sweet :)

Reviewer: elw (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Honesty

LOVED IT!!!!  Excellent lemon.  Excellent.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Honesty

Lemon was hot...

Interested in seeing what happens next...

Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Honesty

Great chapter and I am really enjoying this story -- I like this Bella alot, too.  Even though she has insecurities she is sure enough of herself to have some attractive self confidence -- not arrogance, but confidence.

Reviewer: Millburn (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Honesty

Loving it all!

Need e's POV now...how was it for him...or better still how will it be for him next time?

Thanks so much for this, it's great stuff, Millburn

Reviewer: Paige Parkker (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Honesty

That was seriously hot. Silly me read it at work .... guess who won't be able to form cohrerent thoughts for a while.

Reviewer: dark edwards girl (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Honesty

simply amazing!!!!!!!!! great job with the story already craving the next chapter

Reviewer: Swangirl666 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Honesty

About fucking time!!! That was incredibly hot. Need to go find my boyfriend now........

Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Honesty

OH MY DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PERFECT!! Their first time could not have been better!!! YAY YAY YAY...

And I love how she accepts Edward regardless of all the shit hes done... I hope we get some more lemons in the next one!!! And some more use of the word baby too...If i could give this chapter a rating of 20 i would! Thats how amazing it was.

Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Honesty

HOLY SHIT!! WOW i loved this!! i love where you had the sex scene that was awesome! it made it so much hotter. WOW!!! I like how u told the stories they both had to gain more trust to the relationship as well!!! KEEP IT UP!!! i t was amazing!! awesome!!! NEXT CHAPTER SOON??? :) :)

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Honesty

The lemon was great but the conversation before it was spectacular. =] Edward needs to tell her first though. Or if he heard her in her sleep, he needs to man up and let her off the hook. Lovely.

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Honesty

Wow! Absolutely increduble.

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Honesty

okay that entire scene in the pool you had all of us invision  WAS FUCKING HOT AS HELL!!! O.O jesus christ i was panting just from the description of it all. you built up the tension perfectly!!!!!!!! MORE PLZ!!?

 

edward's story i thought for a second was going to be darker but i am happy it wasn't :) i liked edward's story a lot and i'm glad they're finally together!! yay!!!

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Honesty

You inspired in the Edward part by GossipGirls and it was great, actually was better.

Fuck Lemons, owwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Inside the water was super hot, I love!!!

Update ASAP.

Xo, G.

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Honesty

Aw, this was an awesome chapter. Who knew Edward had so many skeletons in his closet. And something tells me we haven't heard the last of James that f'kin dog. I'm so happy that Bella and Edward opened up a little to each other and moved their relationship to the next stage (happy sigh). Can't wait to read where their relationship will go to now....

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