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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Hide and Seek
Edward is being so sweet to Bella. I am glad they are finally together. Edward needs to learn to express full thoughts. Granted not wanting to tell the public they are a couple is to save her from all the tabloids and their horrible lie stories, but he needed to tell her he's just keeping her out of papers and pictures, interviews, and people trying to get to her regarding him and their relationship. He also needs to define the relationship, hopefully they will discuss while on the way home, at home before bed, or in bed after. They both need to know the boundaries. I would imagine her picture will be in the papers due to his attention being with her and them sitting at a table alone during the party. Just the way they were talking and looking at each other I'm sure gave them away as a couple. Emmett and Jasper are happy for Edward. Wonder if Alice knows, if not I am sure Jasper will fill her in. Will Edward and Bella make a formal announcement to their families? Tanya is such a clueless wonder can't figure out that what Edward said is what he means. Some day she'll realize the truth, that any romance between herself and Edward will only happen on the big screen while they are acting. In real life Edward can't stand her or her nasally voice. Looking forward to Alice's squeals when she realizes Bella is with her brother Edward. Should be interesting and when the paparazzi find out about them as a couple and photographs them and writes their own version of what they are to each other.
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Hide and Seek
AWESOME
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Honesty
You should get an award for that hot scene! Seriously, wooo! I'm so glad they've opened up to eachother. Xoxo
Reviewer: LuckyStar113 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Hide and Seek
ooh dress sex can't wait! i'm very much looking forward to a slightly more aggressive edward.. mmm should be good!
i love that you update so quickly! makes my day! thanks baby :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Hide and Seek
DEFINITELY, DEFINITELY, DEFINITELY, your EPOVs are the best! Please give us more of them! Woo-hoo!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Hide and Seek
I like how their relationship is progressing, but I"m worried for how Bella is going to react when she either sees more pictures of the two of them together, or (misleading) pictures of Edward with someone else. Great chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: sweet_lp_girl (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Hide and Seek
a tear falls every time i get to the end and don't see the next button =(
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Holy Fuckin Hale Batman! Sex Kitten Bella and Sexy Edward are enough to kill a person with all the sexual innuendos. I am thrilled that they are slowly revealing themselves to friends...lol Edward has no clue that Alice may already know more than he thinks, I can't wait to see what happens, wonder if James is going to be an ass and make trouble.
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Love it...just love it. Great chapter!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Hide and Seek
WOW!!! As I was reading, I was afraid that Bella would walk in on some Tanya/Edward or Diana/Edward action and things would go all to H*LL for a couple of chapters. SO GLAD you didn't write it that way!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Hide and Seek
I don't like sexy Edward. I love him! tayna really is a clueless bitch.
Reviewer: NinjaKitten (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Love it!
Gotta watch out for the quiet ones... those are the girls that molest you under tables and whatnot. Not that it's a bad thing. Not at all. More please!
Reviewer: ContemptuousCullen (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Thanks for updating on thanksgiving. You are awesome as is your story.
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Wow that chapter was Hot!!!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Hide and Seek
you just cant go past a potty-mouthed, dirty talkin' Edward......
Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Hide and Seek
I squealed like a twelve year old when I had seen this story had been updated.... and it did not disapoint......I'm glad that Bella changed her mind and came to the party...I'm anxious to see how long they are able to keep their relationship a secret.... Great stuff....
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Hide and Seek
great part
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Definitely have got it bad for sexy Edward but I like him snarky at the same time. You need a little bit of sour to combat the sweet so you don't get a toothache.
Reviewer: Brittbee21 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Hide and Seek
holy hell! umm amazing!! I am so excited about this story and I hope it never ends! that will be a sad day! cant wait for more!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Ok so yeah who doesn't love a cheeky edward. I also liked his possessiveness, mainly toward jacob. honestly its great. the chapter was great and i'm looking forward to edward getting her home.
Reviewer: snowyland (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Hide and Seek
OMG!!!!! i love it i love it!!!!
sexy Bella and Edward..
i can't wait for more... please.. update it soon..!!!
and do make sure it's a long chapter!! ;)
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Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Hide and Seek
*sigh* i absolutely adore this story!!!! and ewwww tanya is a bitch lmao. i really hope that they tell each other how much they care soon...and edward is just too adorable! thank you for another update tooo!!!!! im loving this :) amazing ch!!! <3
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Yes I like it all Sexward
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Still loving it! Dress up sex is fun... I hope they enjoy theirs soon :-)
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Sexy Edward makes me want to take an ice bath. Forget a cold shower!! LOL
So happy you updated so soon, and on Thanksgiving, too.Aww, so sweet!
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