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Reviewer: sexysadie13 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Coming Clean
omg....I'm so sex starved right now that this is exactly what I needed today! Gah- I can't wait for the next chapter. Your story has certainly become my favorite on here. Thank you!
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Coming Clean
moooooooooooore pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Coming Clean
I don't think they'll ever be able to look at the breakfast bar the same way again? hehehehe
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Coming Clean
Bella arrived at Edward's premier dinner in her dress. But when she told him she wasn't wearing underwear, she blew his mind. He couldn't get her home fast enough. Appears they are two pieces of a puzzle. They just fit together. Their personalities just blend. Beautiful budding romantic relationship is developing.
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Assumptions
Are there any EPOV's in your story?
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Coming Clean
hot HOT
Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Coming Clean
Lovin the story, keep it coming!
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Coming Clean
another great chapter in the past couple the story has really come to life and is in a world of its own. i am loving. ok it was short but the lemony goodness made up for that. i cant wait for your nest update.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Coming Clean
I am having a problem with this story.
Everytime I read it lately I need new panties, and my girlie bits have a hard time trying to stop throbbing.
Reviewer: LuckyStar113 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Coming Clean
i think i need to invest in a breakfast bar... phew! hot hot hot
i can't imagine where these two are headed next and i'm excited to find out! can't wait!!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Coming Clean
I uh.. shower... wow.... XD
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Coming Clean
Holy Freakin Hale Batman!!! I swear it is -16 outside my window right now but I am freakin warm...that lemon was definatly temperature raising. I don't think I'll every see a breakfast bar again without smiling =)
Did I mentioned I loved it!!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Coming Clean
Fun little lemon. Loved Bella's POV!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Coming Clean
So I think that this should be how every party ends, really hot kitchen sex with edward cullen. sounds good to me anybody else think so?
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Coming Clean
Ummmm... wow. *fans face* Umm, good chapter. Gonna go find that hubby now... lol!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Coming Clean
Damn that was HOTT!!!! Great chapter!
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Coming Clean
W-O-W. Holy Hell Batman. Love you. You rock. More please!
Another 10! Shocker, I know.
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Coming Clean
great part
Reviewer: snowyland (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Coming Clean
OMG.. you don't know i've been waiting for this update for a week!! glad you did it finally.. ;-).. oohh and the lemon... HOTT!!!!!! please please.. update it soon... i love your story soo muchh...
need to have a cold shower now.. ;-)
xoxo
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Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Coming Clean
Well that was exhilerating. I think I need a cold shower dang.
Reviewer: dark edwards girl (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Coming Clean
i absoutley love this story! and u have so much you could do with it. im sure ur thoughts are endless!!!!!!! please please please keep writing!
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Coming Clean
THATWASSOFUCKINGGREAT!!! Where the hell is a man and a breakfast bar when I freakin need one???
Reviewer: CS3 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Coming Clean
Just read all 21 chapters in one sitting!
LOVED IT! Great lemons, great characters - feel like i know them personally!
Keep us the great work this is an awesome story
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Coming Clean
lovely lemon
Reviewer: NinjaKitten (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Coming Clean
yum.
i wish i had that waiting for me in my kitchen when i came home.
great chapter, keep it up!
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