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Reviewer: Hex005 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Rising to It
Well I for one am GLAD that they haven't said the L word yet. It just wouldn't have fit into the story yet! The last chapter was hilarious, definitely, and this one was a nice balance to it. I was worried that Edward would be pissed at her for hanging out with Jacob- I'm glad he's not as posessive as I'm used to him being in the books. It's nice and all, but kind of smothering. Write on, lady! :)
Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:12 PM · On: In the Know
Damn I want some of that sexin!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Honesty
*rawr*
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Rising to It
Holy Freakin Hale Batman!! Your Tanya is a devious bitch! Uuuuggg I hate superficial people.
I am glad that Bella and Edward are talking and the angst is good for them every now and then. I can't help but wonder if Jane did her magic and got Jessica to cave. LOL from what is sounds like...Jane is very good at getting what she wants...snicker. I'd be afraid if I were Jessica.
Reviewer: Dia (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Protection
Love this story,it's simply fabolous!And Edward's character...well,awesome!!!:D
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Rising to It
Angry Edward makes everything that much better. Fabulous chapter!
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Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Rising to It
K- excellent story and lemons...nummy! Can't wait to see the showdown (hopes and prays for one) with Jessica. thanks for a good story.
Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Rising to It
great chapter, I wonder if he ever the message to call Jane back asap?
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Drawing Lines
Wow... was THAT in the script??
And my personal favorite: "Well, that was about as comfortable as a pair of cactus panties!"
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Rising to It
I want more!!!
I really wish I could come up with something more to say, but my brain has aparently gone on vacation .
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Rising to It
HHHOOOTTT!
Reviewer: akka452 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Rising to It
great chapter cant wait for the next
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Rising to It
hmm I have to say i'm happily surprised that it was only barely a part of a chapter there... though I can see Jacob being a bigger problem.
I wonder will Edward try to do a "save Bella from himself" move and try to push her away at some point... I hope not, they seem to be working out the kinks in their communications already :)
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Rising to It
awww, i'm glad everything turned out alright.
Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Rising to It
man that tanya can be such a bitch! but i love seing the jealous side of bella and edward..especially edward! i feel its very important in their relationship. update soon.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Rising to It
After a wonderful loving evening together, Bella has to watch Edward and Tanya in a photo shoot. Talking with Tanya and her being a witch. Implication of things and trying to gather information. Bella was smart not telling her any details, protecting herself and Edward. Tanya is so angry that Edward wants nothing to do with her. But I can see from Bella's point of view it would be hard to see the man I love holding, caressing, and kissing another woman. Is she ever going to tell him she ran into Jacob at the main gate and went for a couple cups of coffee to just talk. Or is this something she plans on keeping to herself and hope he never finds out. Will she remember to tell Edward to call Jane? Both Alice and Rosalie knew what Bella was feeling. Tanya ordering Bella to get her a cup of coffee and Bella was going to do it. Why didn't she just tell her that the coffee was over at the table and she could get her own cup of coffee. I can see her giving Edward a cup because 1) she is his assistant 2) they are together as a couple and it's a loving gesture. Looking forward to the answer from Jessica regarding London. Snuggling and making up to each other and Edward's call to Jane. I hope by the end of the story Tanya gets her just desserts along with James.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Rising to It
Great chapter! Angry Edward is super sexy! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Rising to It
well it was a great chapter, and seriously i would have been just as jealous as she was who wouldn't be!
oh and angry edward is pretty hot.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Rising to It
Silly Bella. She really needs to watch herself around tayna. I think that bitch would go to the press in a heart beat about her and Edward.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Rising to It
yeah ugh humph WTF yeah yummy
^the rollercoaster you just put me on
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Rising to It
ooh - love me some angst. seriously. can't wait for the Jessic shit to hit the fan!
Reviewer: LovelyNette16 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Rising to It
Fucking right...that is some good cake...or ff!! lol!
Reviewer: taynemmsmama (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Rising to It
I am so enjoying this - I can't wait for more - I love your Edward!
Reviewer: snowyland (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Rising to It
OMG!!! i love it i love it!!!!
you're just amazing!!! long chapter and it satisfies me enough.. ;-)
they did need that spat!! and f*ck u Tanya!!! hahaha.. Thanks god Jacob was there to calm her a bit, though i can't i lie to you, i'm a bit worry he'll crush on her more..
i cant wait for update.. the same need Edward felt for Bella ;-)
xoxo
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Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Rising to It
I've noticed angry Edward can be a little hard on Bella. She seems to apologize a lot!
But I loved the chapter!! What happened with Jane and London?? She forgot to tell him about the phone call - oh no!!
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