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Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 03:40 PM · On: In the Know

I absolutely adored this chapter.  This was the scene I was waiting for when I read what this story was about....that awesome butterflies in your stomach meeting of mere mortals and the silver screen gods!  I was laughing with giddy glee through almost the entire thing!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Plan of Action

I look forward to London.  I hope Tanya doesn't mess things up.

Reviewer: xTeam_Edward23x (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:39 AM · On: The Interview

I absolutely love this story! By far my favourite twilight fanfic. U r a very talented writer. cant wait 2 read the nxt chapter!


Reviewer: justdaydreaming5 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Protection

This was so intense! Can't wait to see how it develops!

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Ugly Duckling

I am lovin' Jasper. 

So, I actually had an identical scene (Bella overhearing Tanya in the bathroom) in a fanfic I wrote about ten years ago.  Classic! :D

Poor emotionally stunted Edward.  Sigh.

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Assumptions

I am really enjoying your story.  I love stories with a seemingly arrogant ahole Edward (who seems to have all the power) and a take-no-prisoner supposedly subordinate Bella, who ends up running the show in the end.

Reviewer: akka452 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Plan of Action

loved the chapter can’t wait for the next one

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Plan of Action

I can't wait for Bella and Edward's time in London. It is going to be so much fun.

Reviewer: Fanficlover (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Plan of Action

Love it as always, I so need a cold shower!
London here we come, o I’m so  excited!


Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Plan of Action

awwww edward...

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

this story is so entertaining. thank you for such a great read.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

fan-fucking-tastic!!  More please!

Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Plan of Action

Awesome!!  Can't wait for the trip!

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Plan of Action

Pool table is, woowww I have no words.

GHreat, amazing chap.

Update ASAP, pleaseee

Xo, G.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Plan of Action

I like how Bella showed her gratitude to Edward for being able to go to London.  :D

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Plan of Action

I am also looking forward to London!  Great chapter!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Plan of Action

Can't wait till London .. .and definitely enjoyed Edward's side... plus... wet Edward.... mmm.. delicious! LOL

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Plan of Action

Great chapter! Always love lemons with Edward, and what better way than hot sex on a pool table. Classic! I'm excited about the trip to London. I hope it goes well for them there. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Plan of Action

awe, well whats he up to?  love to see them hanging out and having fun its great. looking forward to london!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Plan of Action

Ahhh!! Sooo cute with the watch. :D

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Honesty

The lemon was fuckin lemontastic!!

Especially for a first lemon....mmmmm I love lemonade, dont you?? LOL

Now, you do realize that I will be expecting plenty more of that lemony goodness right....

Keep em cumming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Lemonade is best served HOT!!


Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: snowyland (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Plan of Action

Shitt!! That was HOT like hell... the pool table n the pool itself... uuhhh you're killing me!!

i'll vote for you..!!!




Reviewer: smil0514 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Plan of Action

I can't wait for London. And I agree I love EPOV

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Plan of Action

yes I am. london here we cum

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Plan of Action

Yes- love London!  So much to do and see- forever uncovering something new and interesting there each time I go.  Waaayyyy better than Disneyland!

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