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Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:51 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Wow what a perfect moment. How romantic!

Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:44 AM · On: In the Blink of an Eye

Can you pass them to me next?  Very sweet and lemony; a perfect mix!  Update soon please :-)

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:33 AM · On: First Impressions

Yay!

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:23 AM · On: The Interview

I normally read a few chapters before reviewing but I really liked the first chapter and look forward to reading the next 28!

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:20 PM · On: London Confessions

I really like the family interaction, I think it's really important that they are all close.  Great chapter!  Xoxo

Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:58 PM · On: London Confessions

good story. I really enjoy the way they are opening up. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Mr. Nice Guy

I loved this so much.
Jasper is a great friend. :)
I can't wait for Edward to tell Bella how he feels. :)

Great job

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Unlucky for Some

The lunch date was very interesting :)
Poor Ange :( I hope she will be ok.
I can't wait to read more

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Playing by the Rules

OH SNAP!!! BITCH-SLAP FOR JESSICA WHOO-HOO!!!!!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:50 PM · On: London Confessions

Can't wait for more! XD

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:00 AM · On: London Confessions

Great chapter and such a great story! Love the family interaction too!

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Mixed Messages

This is getting so good :)
I am so glad she left Jacob. I can't wait for something to happen between Edward and Bella.
I wonder how he will act the next day around Bella after all the things he said while drunk.

Love it :)

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 11:43 PM · On: The Swan

This was such a great chapter :)
Poor Edward though :( Jasper giving him a bit of trouble, haha.
I loved the interaction though.
Hope Edward will tell Bella what he feels soon. :(

Reviewer: Dewbedewx (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Truth

Oh my gosh. Fantastic chapter. Seriously. I think i may have peed a little.

Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 09:41 PM · On: First Impressions

I so thought she had busted the interview- maybe he wants someone to put him in his place.

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 08:58 PM · On: A Good Defense is a Good Offense

This was a awesome chapter :)
I am glad to have gotten Edward's POV.
Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:51 PM · On: London Confessions

Love the family time, its great to see the charachters interact. really quite funny. Also loved the sharing, think its good for them both, helps them figure out where they stand. Its also nice that they get onto the same page we're on, since we know this already.

Edward is definately up to something for Bella's birthday, i'm sure it will be nice. I'm waiting for their bubble to burst, it has too; reality is gonna bite them, they'll make it through but there will be some drama first.

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 04:33 PM · On: London Confessions

the cartoon references were perfect! they definitely fit bella and jasper. i thiought i was a good idea for the fox dinner thing to be brought up. cant wait for the next chapter! good job

Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 04:04 PM · On: London Confessions

Wow, I just love this story. I'm sorry I didn't review each chapter but I kept reading this continuously. I had to stop at 4.30am then carried on today to the end. This is a brilliant story. I love how Edward comes across at the start then opens up to Bella. I love how she feels about him. The way they both get together is so romantic. She's obviously just what he needed. Everything about this story is so perfect, I just can't wait to read the next chapter when you post it.

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Ugly Duckling

Great chapter :)
i can't wait to read EPOV. I have to know what he is thinking.
Awesome work

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Lip Service

Edward was nice enough to take care of Bella.

I feel really bad for Bella. :( I am not sure what Edward is thinking or if he feels the same way.

Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: pdxamy (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 10:29 AM · On: London Confessions

Yay London and honesty. Can't wait for the premiere. Everything had been going so well. Is drama around the corner?

Reviewer: Hex005 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 08:25 AM · On: London Confessions

Hey lady! Way to go on the not 1... not 2.. but 3 AMAZING classic cartoons! Mucho impressive. I was giggling like a schoolgirl. I do love the family interaction as well, they're just such a fun group. You want to crawl into the story and sit at the table with them! More of that would be awesome :) I think it brings the perspective of Bella and Edward's relationship out too, and how they interact together within a group setting. :)

I love London- it's my favorite place in Europe. Ok so I've only been there and  Dublin but still, I absolutely love London. I can't wait to see what kind of adventures they get into!

Reviewer: Bella Alice Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 08:24 AM · On: London Confessions

I love how you have put so much feeling into all the characters. Everything balances so well, the tension and emotions between Bella and Edward, the funny moments between family and friends. It made me laugh and also feel what was going on between Edward and Bella. As for the lemons well lets just say I really need to find myself and Edward and soon!!! Look so forward to the next chapter I can not wait!!! XX

Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:06 AM · On: London Confessions

im glad i didnt miss too much my lap top was M.I.A for a while! till next time!

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