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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Tipo Geloso
I loved this chapter. Loved the "marking" int he bathroom and loved Jealous Edward, so fucking hot!!
Can't wait for more. I hope he doesn't torment himself too long or try to shut out Bella.
And kudos to Bella for texting him. So perfect.
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Tipo Geloso
Holy hot as hell, Batman! LOL Loved the new chapter as always. At the start of the next chapter Edward better be running his ass down the hall to make up with Bella! ;)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:19 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye
I LOVED IT! it was so perfect!!!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:40 AM · On: London Confessions
i love the family interactions.. they're hilarious!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Playing by the Rules
ahhhh edward is sooo sexy :) love how you put this chapter in.. its really cute :)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:02 PM · On: In the Know
laughed so hard in this chapter!! also love how jasper calls bella tinker. super cute
Reviewer: melmarett (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Naked
Sending you da love babe! No doubt lovely Rose will be paying Emmett a suprise visit LOL
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Naked
Beautiful way to spend a birthday. With close friends and loved ones. From early morning wake up from the love of her life to shopping. Lunch with everyone opening gifts. Still looking forward to the gift from Rosalie and Emmett. Too embarrassing to show in mixed company. Must be good, Edward will definitely like it I'm sure. Jasper and Alice 1st Edition Dracula. Impressive. Then Jane giving her the lovely silver key chain with her full name and the meaning "The beautiful one". Very appropriate for Bella the beauty. Alice after lunch sent the men home and took Bella shopping some more. Edward took Emmett to the gym since Emmett is lovesick for his Rosalie. Poor guy. Jasper just harassing him as usual. Doesn't realize how much Em is missing his girl. Edward filling the tub with bubble bath for a nice long hot soak with Bella. The two of them are so darling together. Always tender and sweet to each other. Making each others' dreams come true emotionally, physically, and spiritually. Looking forward for the club with Alice and Jasper and Edward and Bella in the Grey Goose Room.
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Coming Clean
sooo hot!!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Truth
i really like tipsy bella.. shes funny :)
Reviewer: sexcii (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Protection
This CHapter was amazingg!!!!....i didnt actually believe Edward would stay with her even though he has totally fallen love with her. You're an amazing author!!! KEPP IT UP:)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Confessions
this story is adorable! i love these characters so much, and i love how you've placed them together. im so excited to keep reading!! :)
Reviewer: bjm1954 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Naked
Wow. What a great story so far. I am eagerly awaitingthe coming chapters. I am amazed at how well you build suspense. I came to the end of the current chapters and sighed when I realized I would have to wait, hopefully not too long, for future chapters.
Thank you very much for such excellent writing.
Author's Response: Wow - what a compliment!
Thank you so much for enjoying it an dtaking the time to review.
Jax x
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Naked
very sweet
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Naked
awwwwww this chapter= sweetness!!!! i love sappy edward lmao! gah i love this story so much its not even funny!!!!!!! i love when the whole crew gets together and i was "awwwww" ing at the emmett part!!!! and im thinking that little surprise is rosalie!!!! ammiright?!?!?!? hahah lmao. amazing chapter!!!!!! <3
Reviewer: flippa (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Playing by the Rules
it looks dayum good on her jealous stupid face hehehehehehehehehehe love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: chagrace (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Naked
and here i was thinking that Jane was actually Edward's mom...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:21 PM · On: The Interview
Holy Hale honey!! You nailed my top three cartoons growing up, Thank You for that it was great going down memory lane. This whole chapter was magic in the words...channeling your inner Sorceress? *wink* Loved it!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Leaving on a Jet Plane
Sorry total RL fail so have gotten behind in my stories. Gotta admit honey, this is going to be an amazing trip. Dear Lord playing Bella like that was definalty worth a trip to the freezer. LoL...wonder if Bella is a member of the mile hight club?
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Naked
surprise visit from rosalie?! i think so.
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Naked
surprise visit from rosalie?! i think so.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Naked
woop woop woop! I loved this, loved the whole tub scene. And I think Rose is on her way yes?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:49 PM · On: In the Blink of an Eye
sniff. You made me cry dammit!
Perfect, fucking perfect!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:17 PM · On: London Confessions
I love the family dynamics you have going on. The dinner was just like it us when we go home to Scotland and meet up with my family. We all order different thigns and then pass thigns around.
Loved this...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Leaving on a Jet Plane
LOl Jasper is funny :) and I can only imagine the whirlwind that Alice caused running through the house packing forthem both.
Loved the fact Edward held her hands as the plane took off. It's the worst part for me too so I know how she feels.
Another great chapter...
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