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Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
I just adore these two. I thought this was another fantastic chapter. I can't wait to see what their vacation has in store for them!
Reviewer: fallenangell2010 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
you made me laugh and you made me cry, you also touched my heart. a) you have captured the characters perfectly b) you touching on domestic violence was spot on. i have delt with dv as a child and as an adult and they way you wrote it was amazing, thank-you for having the courage to take that step. this story had me gripped from the begining and i cant wait for the next bit :-) well done xxxxx
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
I really liked the conversation over the magazine article, it's sad that false stories really happens like that. It's one reason I refuse to follow the gossip columns and magazines because I don't want to add to the feeding frenzy :P
It's getting closer to being completely out in the open for the two of them.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
awesome
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Although they haven't been together very long, the feelings Bella and Edward have for one another seem to be strong. I am very interested in seeing how Edward tells his parents and how the dust settles after Jane finds out....
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Love this chapter. It is nice to see their relationship grow and get stronger. They are just too cute together!
Reviewer: Izzu Dog (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
LOVE the crumpet refrence!!!! I literically grew up on them (Im from and live in the UK!!!!!)!!!! And they are seriously the nicest breakfast ever!!!!! but second to a goood ol' english fry up!!!! We also have muffins, which aren't like a cake muffin but like a bread thing and in a circle, you have to cut them in half and then like the crumpet's toast them and cover them in butter!!!
Another wonderful chapeter as always!! none of my stories have updated for abour a weeek and when I saw Help Wanted I was like WHOOO!!!!!! DEFO THE BEST!!!!! Sad about leaving my motherland, I went to New York last week and left from Heathrow Terminal 3 and I was like "WHOO I've been near there!!!"
UPDATE SOON AGAIN PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x x x x x xx
Reviewer: ilikereading (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Love it!! Those plane scenes, uuuummmmm ;D
That paps issues are killing me. It makes me wonder how hard must be in real life to real actors, like our Rob and how difficult must be trying to live your life, your real life. I don´t envy him.
I hope you can post another chapter really soon!
Su.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Sweet :) They're in this together and despite basically being out-ed and not on their own terms, Bella & Edward are supporting each other. Can't wait to hear about the rest of the family's reactions.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Great chapter! Domward was especially nice to read. I love it when he gets all demanding and possessive. Yummy! I'm anxious to hear what Angela wants to talk about. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Wow.. that was a great chapter, even with all the surprises... Bella is really showing how strong she is...she takes a licking and gets right back up. She's going to need that strength when Jessica finds out about her and Edward. The shit will really hit the fan then. Can't wait for the next update.
I am hoping that the lunch with Angela and Bella will be to discuss their living arrangements. I think Angela wants Ben to move in... and hopes Bella will be moving in permanently with Edward... except Bella isn't sure if Edward wants her there yet.
Reviewer: anduril1134 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
I like that Bella is thinking about getting a new job. I think she would do great running the Cullen family charity foundation! That way she would still be working with the family but directly under Edward, especially if she ends up moving in with him.
Please, more Xantax Jasper on the plane to Italy!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
love how you bring the reader through the story so smoothly.. this was such a great chapter! they had some challenges, but it was nice to see them get through them together and not sweat the small stuff. and yes, the plane was sexy as hell; i love domward. i have a feeling Ange wants to move in with Ben and doesn't know how to tell Bella, or he already purposed and that's why she needs alice to help plan her wedding. or im totally getting ahead of myself. anyways, cant wait to figure out what it is. LOVE love love the story!!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Oh, goodie--a check! I can't wait! :o)
Seriously hot airplane smexing. I need a cold shower or something now.
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
As you said in the A/N, "Hells yes..." to the Domward! *wiggles eye brows*.... I'm glad Bella appears to be getting her head around the gossip & photogs too!
I'm really looking forward to Belward traveling to Italy to meet the parents! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your story!!!!
dhull (austin,tx)
Reviewer: LuckyStar113 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
hello mile high club. now i won't be able to see transformers without thinking of edward's slick fingers. *sigh* i wish my plan ride from last weekend was as exciting!
go bella go! put those power panties on! then take them off around edward ;)
oohh i can't wait for italy! hmm more mile high riding? ;)
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Yes, strong and assertive Bella is definitely very cool! This is one of my favourite chapters - I enjoyed EPOV, but I'm glad to be back in the mind of Bella now. There was alot going on as well and I cannot wait for the next installment - please tell me Angela wants to move in with Ben!!! :-)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Edward, Bella, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, and Rosalie leaving London. It broke my heart until I thought about all of them visiting Italy to visit Edward's parents and tell them of Bella and Edward's relationship. That plane trip home was amazing. Edward was a teaser and a pleaser throughout the entire flight. Would mile high club be partially earned by Bella and Edward during the flight? It was smokingly hot arousing for them and the readers. Traveling is always nice, but coming home is even better. Bella going to cook for Edward is so domestic and homey. That's what Edward was trying to tell her. It was a sight he would love to see permanently in his home. It's like they are living together as a couple, a domesticated and loving couple. Like it is perfect for her to be in his kitchen. She belongs there. The way he said it may be construed as sexist, but he meant it complimentary. It pleased him, felt right. Seeing her face plastered over the cover of a magazine would have freaked anyone out at first. But she recovered from it, it will just be something she'll have to get used to it. If they are going public then there will be a whole lot more pictures as well as made of stories. I liked that Edward made her question all the woman he was with in photos she didn't know. So he could tell her family, friend, co-workers, and acquaintances. I think when Angela, Bella, and Alice have lunch, Angela will be wanting to move into Ben's apartment permanently. Or she will want him to move in with her at old apartment. Just the feeling that over the time she has been gone being with Ben living together is more precious to her. If Bella wanted to move back and needed her friend to help with rent, Angela would move back. The same feelings that Bella has regarding her previous apartment. In reality Bella wants to remain at Edward's house. I just hope Tanya doesn't open her mouth about Bella working for Edward. It shouldn't matter two people find each other it's beautiful, but Tanya is just a witch she would want to smear Bella's name by humilitating her. With comments like the "hired help." Edward personal assistant is paid for more than scheduling his calendar, other fringe benefits are included in the bargain. Cheapen their relationship and painting a bad picture of Edward so she can act the aggrieved ex girlfriend. Broken up with because of a cheap gold digging employee of Edward's. Looks like a lot of things could occur in multiple directions to test their love and relationship.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Another sweet chapter. I'm very glad Edward didn't freak out when the pictures were published. I'm curious about what Angela wants to talk about, too! Perhaps an engagement?
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Surprise (Part One)
Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens. Sounds to me like Anglea wants to move in with Ben. And I wonder how Jessica is going to react to Bells' pics with Edward.....
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
I knew absolutely and unequivocally that I was more than ready to face the world at Edward's side.......YES!
Reviewer: smil0514 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
love it!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Surprise (Part One)
I didn't find this story until chapter 26 and I will tell you I spent hours at the computer catching up from the first chapter!
I love this story and I can't wait to see where it goes!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Questions and Answers
um.........WOW!!!!!!!!!!! Am so loving this story!!!!!!!!! I have to admit, I pulled out some Kleenex on the chappie covering domestic abuse......not to air dirty laundry, but, have been on the receiving end of just such an asshat at one time in my life..... it isn't pretty, but I was lucky enough to get myself and my children out before it resulted in my death, or before they were old enough to remember much...........I think you handled that particular mine-field in a very realistic way.........and you did it without getting too wordy........very well written....and you have definitely become one of my fave authors!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Questions and Answers
love me a losing cursing emmett
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