Thanks for mothers day present!!! Loved it!!

HAHAHA. that chapter was so cute.

i love this story soooooo much.

cant wait for more

Adored the bachelorette party and day.  A marvelous day with the four girls spending quality time together drinking mimosa.  Alice, Rosalie, Bella, and Angela the bride opened their private gifts to her.  The poem was beautiful.  The pictures of them together what memories they represent.  Then the four of them went to the spa.  Massages, pedis, manis, being pampered throughout the whole afternoon.  Then the girls returned to Alice's apartment.  Semi naked men bartenders and servers.  Seth had a hey day with the muscle bound hunks.  Then Alice decided must have a Whitlock Wednesday for them.  Talk abouto Bella blushing even more than usual.  Seeing her boyfriend on the big screen.  Just think how exciting that would be for an ordinary girl from a small town.  Definitely would put a smile on someone's face.  Bella talking about her gorgeous hunk of man pie.  Complete with crunchy base and whipped cream.  Delicious and enticing manhood.  Finally they all get into fairy tale costumes.  Loved everyone's costume including Seth.  Actually all of them were totally wasted.  Alice was reminding both Bella and Rosalie that they an afternoon flight to Italy the following day.  Bella was all worked up after all the sexual talk at the spa, the hunky bartenders, watching Jasper and Edward on the big screen, playing I have never... game, drinking and dancing the night away.  She looked enchanting in her Tinkerbell costume, Edward was surprised and pleased at how the costume hugged her delightful figure.  He thought she was so cute when she was drunk.  Tickled pink with the way she slurred her words and her attempts to seduce him.  Bella wants to join the sex in public, sex in car, and having sex in a place where they have to be quiet.  From your description of Bella she can't be quiet when Edward touches her.  She makes a lot of noise when they make love.  Bella said she was ready and then fell fast asleep.  Awesome day for the girls and Seth.  Funny, sentimental, sexy, and exciting.

Great chapter, looking forward to Italy!!

I absolutely adore Seth! :)

Sounds like they had a fabulous party for Angela!

xoxo Sarah

haha i love drunken Bella! awes Italy finally! that plane ride is going to be HELL.. i can't wait for her to curse out Alice for that one :)

I love this story!!!

Can't get enough of it and have read it many times!

LOL ! These girls party like nobody's business. They are so outrageous and I cant help but shake my head, laugh, and wait to see what they do next. Wonder if Edward is going to ask her about the crunchy base because...I would love to hear bella explain that one. I don't think Italy is ready for these crazy kids lol.

sexy, hot, drunken Tinkerbella going home to Edward is sweet.  Can't wait for Italy.  Edward needs to play some piano for Bella - and by this I mean they need to Christen it.  Thoroughly.

Aww Another fab Chapter!!!

This chapter was beautifully written. I was so confused at how Edward acted in the nightclub, how much he hated himself, but the flashback scene really explained it. I got it, I understood it, I cried. And Bella forgave him and supported him, but not like a ditzy girl, like a grown up woman who felt hurt at being shut out, but able to forgive Edward and loving him, willing to allow him to explain it to her without a) throwing herself in his arms and they have passionate make up sex *eye roll* or b) stomping away like a spoild brat who didn't get her way. Kudos for having the presence of mind to make their first "Real" arguement adult enough for reality.