Maggie rocks :) Can't wait for Carlisle & Esme's reaction to Bella being in Italy and what she truly means to Edward!

Thanks for explaining in the notes that you're showing how his "high/happy" feelings are bringing out the darker feelings. I felt like the jealousy freak out thing was alittle out of left field. Am also glad you ended it with her giving him reassurance and not giving up on him so easily.

Bella waking up after all the festivities for Angela's bachelorette party.  Looking around trying to figure out where she was.  Hangover and dry as a desert.  Couldn't remember what she did when she got home or how she got there. When she eventually traveled downstairs after a hot shower she heard Alice giggling and talking with Edward.  No hangover at all.  She drank more than Bella and was perfectly fine.  At least she only another 1 1/2 hours before heading for the airport.  Bella teased Edward about whether the X-Box was still working after the guys played all night.  Edward said never played X-Box, but showed her the TV.  Around the TV were her pictures of herself with friends and families.  Edward was adding her belongings throughout the house.  Making her totally welcome.  Even her nik naks along side his BAFTA awards.  She was so overwhelmed with his hanging up pictures, placing books, CDs, DVDs, and favorite objects around the house.  He wants it let her know she lives with him and when he's in the "boring room" doing whatever to relax and unwind she can read, listen to music, her computer, watch movies, etc...  It was one of the sweetest things he could do for her.  She felt funny placing her stuff around his house.  Sounds like someone has told paps about Bella and Edward.  Smells like a Tanya attempt at scandal towards Bella.  The reporter and photographer approached her with all kinds of questions about herself and Edward Cullen.   Alice frightened them away.  A long 14 hour plane flight to Italy.  Bella finally caught up on her sleep.  The Cullen house is spectacular.  Maggie, housekeeper, auntie, nanny, babysitter, etc... totally accepted Bella.  She could see the love in Bella's eyes for Edward and could tell that Edward was in love with Bella.  Now it's time to meet the parents.  Love in Italy, large anniversary party, meeting Edward's parents, grandmother, aunt and uncle, among parents' friends.  Bella is stretching her safe zone being in the center.  Everyone will want to know her.  I liked the gift she found for Carlisle and Esme.  The bracelet for Alice sounds lovely.  Alice will be delighted that Bella thought about her.  Actually Alice was happy about the flowers, she won't be expecting anything else.  That's why it will make a excellent surprise.  Edward can't wait to have Bella in his childhood bed. It was sweet that he asked her about it.  He was willing to allow her another room to make her feel comfortable around everyone.  Since he knows she is nervous about telling his folks.  They already love her, it's not going to be a problem.  When they see how happy he is with her and two of them together it's a match made in heaven.  The witch Tanya out to ruin Bella's reputation implying she's a tart sleeping with her boss to get ahead.  Someone really needs to teach that creep a serious lesson.  Come on Alice get her and get her good.

This story has been so much fun for me! I find myself giggling along with all of Edward's and Bella's quirks. You write so very well, keep it up!!

love sam

Oh I hope they love her! I have a hard time with mean parents. It's not fun to watch her get "beat down" by the family. Love it and can't wait for more!!!

AAAHHH !!! awsome chapter, please update during the weekend I do not think I could wait a week !!!

Hell, that was one good lemon! Good job. Love your story!

That declaration of love was PERFECTION!!!!  I love this story. And I love how much they say "fucking" but now I am finding myself slipping and saying it more myself! Reading too much of this story!!!!!

 

I don't get the red drape on the eye pod though. That is kinda confusing. I get that it's for privacy, but it's kind of distracting trying to figure out how the damn thing is covered and it doesn't blow away. Maybe I am a ditz.

Damn - you are new to lemons?! Seems like you are a total pro!!!!

Your FanFiction is amazing, I can't stop thinking about it. It is almost more addicting than the Twilight Saga. Awesome, a masterpiece. Compliments

Cannot WAIT to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!

 

He is so hot! And I love that she has a backbone. Kinda wish she'd told Tanya off, but how you wrote it is more realistic.  I DO HOPE we'll find out Edward bitche Tanya out though!

I love the sexual tension between these two. But I hope they reveal their feelings soon and get on with it!