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Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
OMG-love this! Please post more soon!
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
That was really, really hot, even if it was just a dream. Nice sexual tension. Can't wait to see the two of them dance around each other some more.
Author's Response: Your wish, my command. Thanks!
Reviewer: blacksinglet (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
best edward description i've read yet (the kitchen scene).
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
OMG!!! IT's about time the boy showed up -even if it was only a dream - that was smokin hot! I am not too proud to beg - give me some more PLEASE!! and SOON!!!
Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
mgmt eletric feel love that song
Author's Response: Me too.
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
WAS THAT A DREAM OR THE REAL THING, SHE HAD BETTER CHECK HER NECK THIS STORY IS INCREDIBLE
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
Finally an Edward appearance and worth the wait. But really....Lauren, almost as bad as Tanya who obviously comes a little later. Looking forward to more Bella/Assward interactions.
Kitchen scene with them = brillance.
Author's Response: Interaction or intercourse? Thanks so much.
I don't care for Tanya or Lauren myself.
Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Was it REALLY a dream? I am inclined to say no...and she is going to discover this through the hickey on her neck. I HOPE I am right :)
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
yeah so this chapter WAS FUCKHOT :) !!! loved the LEMON DREAM lol
Reviewer: gillies (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
That was awesome!! I love how you update so ofter :)
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
ok, i just read chapter six on fanfiction. and i cant wait to read the next chapter. you are really doing a great job with this story.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
I'm not sure that I believe that was a dream. In fact, I am fairly positive that Bella will see a bite mark on her neck in the morning that will tell her just how very real her "dream" was. Oh, and WHAT A DREAM! Ungh. Sweet Baby Jesus indeed!
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
Okay so Edward has been with both Lauren and Tanya???? Geez I think he needs to get tested! Why is Edward with Lauren? She is stupid and fake! And Tanya, well we don't really know about her yet but I'm assuming she is rather fake as well. When are we going to get back to the present so we can find out about Bella and Edward's late night rendez vous? I really wanna see this work out! But I do like reading about them in high school too! I want Bella, Rose, and Alice to kick Lauren and Jessica's ass! And for Edward to shape up! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
this was a great chapter!!! and i hope that wasnt the same Lauren bitch that Bella goes to school with. and damn, that dream. that dream makes me want to go to bed and think of edward as i try to sleep so i can have a dream like that!! LMAO!!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
god damn i want to sneak into the kitchen right now for a glass of water!!!!!!!!!! Holy hell that was hot!!!! please keep going!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
I also make mooing noises in crowded public places. Especially when everyone is rounded up for school assemblies and everyone is packed up like sardines in the too-small hallways. They are all pushing and shoving at each other trying to get one way or the other as fast as possible (not very in this situation), and there I am. Mooing. I think it is funny, but I got yelled at by the Dean once so I have limited my mooing to non-education related venues only.
Reviewer: mshaz (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go
Ugh.. that was... well.. HOT. I wish I could have dreams like that. Let's hope a dream like that will come while I sleep. ;)
Good night! Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 4- Education
ooh i love it but i want some bella/edward noww!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It'll happen.
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 4- Education
this story is good. cant wait for the updates.
Author's Response: Thanks. Chap 5 is up!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4- Education
dude, where the hell is edward??? :)
Author's Response: Woopsie, have not read these chapters in a while. Sorry. Edward IS in the next chapter which I will submit for validation tomorrow. If you are impatient chapters 5 and 6 are posted over on FF.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Gang's All Here
SNORTING out loud about Charlie's pornstache!! I must admit..I find movie Charlie kinda hot, and you KNOW he's got some seeeeriously dirty shit goin' on behind those black eyes....yum!
OK, there is a rampant virus spreading through Twilighted...it's called MistakenApostrophe. Cullens, as in "I love the Cullens!" or "the Cullens consider me family!" has no apostrophe. It's just plural. Now, "I stayed at Alice Cullen's house" does, because it shows possession. :)
I'm loving the story, but am SOOO impatient for Edward! what gives?? was he really out with a chippie? or stalking Bella and highlighting pages of her text?? DO tell, you fanfic temptress!!!
xoxo
Author's Response: I'll never tell. But the next chapter will.
Did I do that? The apostrophe thing, I mean? Sometimes it happens inadvertently when I run spell check, but I try to catch them when I go through and edit for the final time. Ooops!
Reviewer: briagirl19 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 4- Education
Where in the heck is Edward?!?!?!?
Author's Response: Around.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 2- We're Going To Be Friends
Poor Alice! those Forks bitches, treating her so poorly...she should have been the main event, and the hot brothers just a fringe benefit! No wonder she latched onto Bella like a pixie barnacle! :(
Yikes, Bella must be a fashionista nouveau with all those bags! I'm sure Alice had her buy a bathing suit....although Forks ain't exactly the Riviera for sun, is it?
Let's head to the next chappie and see whom she meets, shall we? :)
Author's Response: OMG! That is the funniest thing I have ever heard. Pixie barnacle. Please tell me I can steal that, you will get all credit of course. That is great. Totally having a 'can't believe I didn't think of that' moment.
I live about 3-3.5 hrs from Forks and it gets hot on the peninsula, just not too often. Get to the next chap for your answers.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Wow, I love it! You've nailed the characters (I have a huge soft spot for Charlie and his sturdy-dad ways) and Renee...man..I wanna CUT that bitch! what a HAG! and Pencil Dick is no help either! >:< How DARE she?? Bella should have given it to her 10x more!! grrrrrrrrrrrrr.
You are doing a fantabulous job on your first fanfic!! Bully for you! :)
xoxo
Author's Response: Sorry I have not responded to this. I somehow overlooked it. I apologize. Thank you so much. Look for more to come with Renee, that storyline is def not over yet. Charlie does kinda rock. I try to keep it pretty light, but firm... thats what she said... when it comes to his scenes.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
Wow, I love it! You've nailed the characters (I have a huge soft spot for Charlie and his sturdy-dad ways) and Renee...man..I wanna CUT that bitch! what a HAG! and Pencil Dick is no help either! >:< How DARE she?? Bella should have given it to her 10x more!! grrrrrrrrrrrrr.
You are doing a fantabulous job on your first fanfic!! Bully for you! :)
xoxo
Author's Response: Bully for you- I love that saying. Not sure I have ever heard anyone use it besides me. I am thrilled that you like it. Thank you soooo much for reading and reviewing.
I too have a soft spot for Charlie and Renee irritated me in the series. Funny, no one seems to like my Renee! Including me. Stay tuned for more drama with her, it gets worse and worse and possibly worse before it gets better.
Stop by the thread and chat. We provide Robward porn for all newbies.
Thanks again, BB!
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