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Reviewer: SpunkyLuv (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
Sorry to say this but I didn't have a least fav. part of this chapter. Well at least of the writing. I could always do without James......and Victoria...and Lauren...and Calice Malice,lol. Sometime Around Midnight was to great for this chap. It fit so well. Edward's POV is too funny sometimes. I loved his inner thoughts on the fight with Blow-job Betty. And you just can't help but laugh at Emmett acting like Smokey. Your story sucks me in. Keep up the great writing. And I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Don't apologize for that! Crazy girl. I am sure we could all do without them, but they make the story so much more interesting and... a story. Em is one of my fave characters, so expect to see more of him in the next chap. I am really flattered that you like it and I can't thank you enough for reading and reviewing.
Stop by the thread sometime. I post teasers there and we roll out a lovely little welcome mat filled with the pretty.
Thanks again.
Reviewer: bbygoose (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
I really want to know how it plays out when they get together again. By the way I love that you recommend stories that you are reading.
Author's Response: Soon.
There are so many great fics out there but probably more bad ones. I read pretty much only stuff I am rec'd anymore, and if I can send a little traffic to some good stories I am happy to do so.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: genadvmts (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
This is one my favorite story, especially bc of the long chapters and POVs. But I am DYING to get into the present, especially since Edwards keeps saying he is going to hurt her and I am really hoping he doesn't. Want more sex scenes B/E bc the first one was hot. Can't these crazy kids work it out? : )
Can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
Damn it! Get Edward to Forks...and fast! please?
Ok...if you didn't guess already...i'm looking forward to another update...
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
was good...would like to know what he did...and did he hurt or then or is he about to ??
Reviewer: mshaz (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
I love it when authors recs other fics. Thanks! (you have some of my already faves there too. HL5 and TPAP)
I love the insight on Edward and how he acts without total control.
I'll try to, firstly, write reviews and more substantial ones in the future! Great chapter as always.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
Great chapter. It's nice to get Edward's perspective of his and Bella's first sighting and meeting. As well as the back to school party. Because it shows how much he cared from the beginning. You have both sides to see the right and wrong from both parties. It was very well written. Look forward to the subsequent chapters of both Edward and Bella's POV. Have a great day.
Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
Alaska, Alaska, Alaska! And the count down beings!
Okay...lame, but I'm so curious to know WHAT went down in AK. I'm hoping it'll shine a light on why Edward is well, Badward!
Left a better, longer review over on FF!
Favorite moment: Edward's inner struggle with...himself!
Least Favorite: Edward going down south on Mallory.
Fuckawesome chapter!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
Ughhh this foreplay is killing me
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
i cant wait for edward to return to forks! update soon please!
Reviewer: ehcem (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
I love this story! And I really enjoyed reading the EPOV for the kitchen scene, when they first met. :)
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me
I love that he feels like a stalker, yet is still uncontrollably compelled to be near her all the time. I was hoping for more detail when you described the kitchen scene from his POV, but I think you handled it really well. Alluring and sexy, and still a little obscure.
This is my favorite story on here. For real.
Reviewer: ehcem (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
I am loving the Edward POV! I can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen
WOW...I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.This story is bad ass. Please tell me that there is plenty left to read.You & this story are 4 sure one of my top favorite. Thanks you rock.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am not certain exactly how many chapters there will end up being for this, but I can assure you that we are a long way from reaching the resolution. We have barely scratched the surface. Okay, we have scratched it but not by much.
Thanks again.
Reviewer: bbygoose (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 4- Education
So i know that you are several more chapters into this story but wanted to comment at where I am at at the moment. I love the story idea... but when is she going to meet Edward?
Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen
Jeezuz, this is a kick ass story!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 2- We're Going To Be Friends
LOVE IT! Cant wait for Edward: )
Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning
This story is off to a great start...I cant wait to read the rest! Awesome Job for your first!
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen
I can't wait to read Edward's take on Bella's book and their first real meeting in the kitchen!! Write fast - please please!!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen
please update soon, that cliffy will kill me. lol
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 8- The Lost Souls
that was so effing good.
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen
I can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: sandrajestrella (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen
I really really love this story, but Im really confuse about some things, like why edward cant leave tanya? =)
Reviewer: eridani (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen
Hmmm, well I'd definitely best review then, because I would like to see Edward keep talking too- if only to get to the bottom of the mystery...what happened between the two of them!?!? I like the way your pushing the plot along, revealing only very specific details- just enough to keep us wondering. I think though that maybe you need to either make more use of those subheading that give the timeframe, or more ideally, try to incorporate info in the first few sentences of each time frame swap that drops the hint about 'when' the characters are. Nevertheless your story is fabulous and I'm so glad I managed to find it again and get back on the bandwagon.
Reviewer: eridani (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 Insignificant
The Righteous Brothers? Hell no! That song was written by Paul Simon for Simon and Garfunkel!!!! Amazing song it is too! Your chapter was similarly awesome and I'm going to read on!
Author's Response: I know, I was thinking to Unchained Melody because I had just heard it on the radio. I need to change that. Thank you. (I love S&G and I love Paul Simon as a solo artist.)
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