Reviewer: IvieM (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 2- We're Going To Be Friends

So far so good.  Looking forward to Edward and Bella meeting.  That should be interesting.

Reviewer: schnuck buck (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Black (V)

I am crying...bawling is more like it!

And in this case crying means... although this story is very long, I lost almost all of my weekend to it, because I could not stop reading it, which is good

 

I like how you let their thoughts keep up the  suspence, because they think so long, before something really happens.. Does that make sense? I m still on an emotional height, sry..

Yeah well, and I like that the whole relationships are not "perfect", and the whole Edward vs Bella is not the only troubled one. The whole Alice-and-her-meddling-fucks-so-much-up-scenario is sth you do not see very often...Despite from the heart wrenching cofession od Edwards mommy issues, everything seemes pretty realistic, with all those unsolved conflicts...

 

Well, my review.. looking forward to new habits,

Anna

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 11 Nothingman

oh man....tis does not bode well for them, nor does it allay my worries!!

 

did I mention....WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA?

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen

what the hell happened in alaska? and is tanya going to show up and fuck everythign up? damn it!!!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 7 Insignificant

holy SHIT, what a chapter!!  Mellencamp and Ani in the same chappie? that song of hers KILLS me and is so COMPLETELY appropriate for this chapter! you GO, musical girl!!

I've been reading under the assumption that these 2 would hook up eventually, but man, I'm wondering now how you feel about HEAs!!   He just needs to man up and talk to Alice, and say "I LIKE BELLA, deal with it!" and then tell Bella so, and Bella needs to talk to Alice about the fact that she overheard their convesation and likes her brother. It's not Alice's call who either of them date - I never, ever got that kinda bullshit. "don't date my brother, don't date my exes" fuck you, I'll date who I want to! oi!

I'm betting they're about to be cockblocked by ALice's return. damn!!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Hi there :)  I started this story waaaay long ago, but am an impatient kinda girl and started waiting for stories to finish before I read them. So sorry if these are repeat reviews!

I loved this delightfully-long chapter of yours! hurrah.  Man, I wanted to KICK Renee's ASS - hard - for her behaviors.  Good riddance, bitch! now your boy toy can babysit your sorry, non-maternal ass. gah! poor BElla. :(  Thank goodness she has Charlie - he's a rock, even if he acts like one too!   And soon she'll make some playmates and have the opportunity to drool over Edward. Forks ain't all bad! ;)

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Black (V)

omg, as much as he's been a doucheward, assward & every other kinda ward, i still feel sorry for him because without a doubt most people have have been in the situation of not realising what you have until its gone, sooo looking fwd to the new habits, so much so that i will prob read it as each chapter is posted instead of waiting till its completed like i do with most, great story fab plot but cant believe you left us in such limbo lol, so hurry up girl & get that new story rolling lol thx again

Author's Response:

Elle, thanks for all of your reviews!  Sorry I have not replied to each one individually.  To be honest I suck at replying, and I haven't received any review alerts from Twi'd in ages.  I just kind of assumed that there weren't any.  I was wrong though.  There were a ton.  The first chapter of Book Two has been submitted for validation, so it will be up whenever that happens.  It is up on FFN though, if you can't wait.  Chapter two is still being worked on.  Have not had much time for it, and am having just a bit of trouble getting it to turn out the way I want.

So happy you enjoyed the first half of the story so much.  Sorry for leaving you all in limbo, but there was a definite reason that I ended it where I did.  You'll see when you start book two.  Also there is un unedited outtake for chapter one of book two posted on FFN.  It's less of an outtake and more of the portion of my first draft that was scrapped.  I won't be posting it here because I don't want to make my beta's edit something that was never meant to see the light of day. 

Thanks again for all of your lovely words.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go

that was a super hot wet dream, im sure i have them all the time lol

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Black (V)

omg omg omg no!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm seriously vrying u better update fast i love love love this story and i want it to have a happy ending so bad
u are an amazing author you are so so descriptive its not even funny you deserve a award because this was bloody fucking amazing and i can't wait to read book 2
this has got to be by fav story i have read since i have joined this website
just wow uh!
well until next time mbellandedwardm
you will hear from me for evry chapter in each chapter in book 2 can't wait

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 3- The Gang's All Here

that ok i'm a complete dork to
o and the story is goin very well

Reviewer: lady luna (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Black (V)

Okay so ive been  reading your fic for like a few days now. and i absolutely love it.You are a very talented writer, can't wait to see what you have waiting for everyone in book 2 ..lol

 

your new fan((lol))

lady luna

Reviewer: welshcakes68 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Black (V)

Dude! You know the main page for this says completed right? Argh! Now I gotta wait to know? I thought this was the last chapter! NOOOO!!! {CALM, CALM, CALM} Though when I was reading it, I was like, "it's gunna be way to reached to end up where the prologue is".  Any,brill as always but now I'm dying inside to be left hanging (not to be over dramatic or anything =])*WC68*

Author's Response:

Deep breaths, dear.  Book two is in the works.  Should have been done with it, but life is crazy, nutty, busy currently and I decided to rewrite 7-8k of the chapter because I just wasn't satisfied.  It was good stuff, I will prolly release as an outtake after the chapter, but just wasn't the best choice for the story.  Writing whenever I can find the time though.