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Reviews For Bad Habit
Reviewer: LeNell (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

Bloody fantastic

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

Just started this story a couple of nights ago and I love it. Your Edward and Bella rock. Can't wait for next chapter now.

 

Reviewer: dmnsqrl (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

A now-ex once said (while complaining because I didn't feel ready for full sex) "Well since I can't run anymore (he'd been a cross country runner in school until the discovery of a heart condition that only took effect under extreme exertion and adrenaline) and we can't afford a gym membership, having sex with you would be about the only way I left to excercise!"

Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 8- The Lost Souls

Best sex scene EVER! thank you. :)

this is a brilliant story.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

"yes, I cheated on you!" that's the worst thing that was ever said to me.

Anywho, can't wait to see what these two do in the present.

Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 8- The Lost Souls

You have gotten me completely hooked on Bad Habit and I can´t tear me away from it. I love and hate Douchward, but he´s hot - that constant.  It might be a good thing that I´m home sick or my boss wouldn´t be too thrilled...

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

"Well I would have to sat it would be yes you are my girlfriend but do you have any friends that would want to go out with me. This was all said while we were in the middle of something." You did good on this story can't wait for more. I have a few more but I think that had to be the worst thing said.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

Okay, had to stop reading because I am officially sick of snivelling, controlling, pain-in-the-ass Alice.  Seriously, her dogging of Edward with regards to Bella is beyond tiresome.  Um, well...now that that's out, I'm going to go back to the second half of this chapter and keep going...

Finished 2nd half of chapter.  Looks like these two are still fighting the inevitable.

 

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sick Cycle Carousel

Wonder how the agreement is going to work out...

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 12 Disarm

The "Alaska Story" is far grimmer than I had imagined.  I do understand Alice's behavior a bit more now.  Poor Edward- to have killed someone and then hold onto the guilt- it's heartbreaking.  What a God-awful situation...

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 Nothingman

Ugh, James is such a creep.  The idea of him grosses me out!

I am not sure how much long Edward can stay away from Bella.  He's got a will of iron that slowly seems to be melting...

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 10 Hate Me

Ready for Edward to "man up" already and talk to Alice and then talk to Bella.  The constant tip-toeing around their attraction just isn't working...

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Freshmen

The more I read this, the more I am wondering what the hell happened in Alaska.  It's really starting to bug me...

Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

I think to this story often. It is very memerable. The worst thing that someone said was several things. The time that I really needed a shoulder to cry on he didn't believe me. He told me not to lie about my grandfather's death. I kicked his ass to the curb after that one.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 8- The Lost Souls

Now that they have each had each other, I'm guessing nothing else will satisfy.  Why does Bella need to gave to Alice's commands so much?  It just seems that Alice is just too controlling.  Even if Alice did have her feeling hurt before, why should Bella be penalized.  The more I read this story, the more I am not really enjoying Alice very much.  Which feels weird to me...

Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

the worst thing someone im involved with said - hmm dunno, maybe calling me his ex's name?

 

im so addicted to this story! im always looking to see if its updated :) i just want dooshward to realise he loves her :)

keep writing, your fab :)

Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 2- We're Going To Be Friends

I love your long chapters, they give you av chance to really get into the story. Feels like I´ve read a lot more than 2 chapters of Bad habit and thats a good thing in my book.

Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

I really like this first chapter and can´t wait to see how they ended up where they are now. I´m glad Bella stood up to her mother in your version since she´s obiously selfish and needs to hear it.

Reviewer: gillies (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

AHHHH ehehehehe i love it.

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

wow!!!!!

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 5- Goodnight and Go

Very nice. I just wondering if the girl up staires is Lauren from school?

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 3- The Gang's All Here

Wow I am really likeing this story. And I can't wait for Edward to come in the pic.

Reviewer: kate1991 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 14 Every Me and Every You

the worst thing was to know my best affair was "an accident. and as i should know: accidents do happen..."

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

I love the way you made Renee out in this story. From the Twilight books and the movie it always seemed like she was that way.

Reviewer: kellyjaxn (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Preface/Chapter 1- The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

I'd take RPattz naked in my bed waiting to do very bad things to me over reivews ANY DAY!! Regardless, excellent start to what seems like it will be a really good story. I know I'm behind in the reading but.... yeah. :) Anyway, thanks for not making chapter 1 a quick little blurb and making it something of substance instead of dragging it out. Keeps a person interested.

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