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Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thanks for continuing to post here on Twilighted!
Author's Response: I said even if there were only a few of you who wanted me to continue, I would....and I will. However, there is a companion piece called My Manic and I that I am only posting at FF.net...head over there if you want to read it. It will be series of A/J outtakes. Thanks soooo much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 7
I just found this story and it is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: Stardust1 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 6
Please, please. I love your story and is my preference to read it here. I don't know why I just don't like FF.net that much. :$
Reviewer: RescueMe17 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
I think that this story is great! And I hope that you continue to post on here.
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
I don't go to FF.net much, although that may change, but do what you need to do for you.
Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
love it please continue to post your wonderful story here !
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
I hope more people review I think this is a great story. I love the connection between Edward and Bella. And Jasper's coolness. I go backa nd forth between the two sites, so if you decide not to continue here I'll catch on the other.(can I even say that) any way looking forward to the next updaate.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is a good story I hope you continue to post on both sites. I would love to see Alice's pov next time and can't wait till the confrontation between Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: nikkipattinson (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 6
Please don't stop posting here. I really enjoy this story.
Reviewer: freshonlybakery (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 5
Uh oh. I'd freak too, if I were in Bella's shoes. Not that I blame her though.
Love this, I think this is a great story :) More please!
Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
i am touched by the care in which you've crafted each of your characters thank you for the view into the life of a caretaker .
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 5
You don't need to fix anything, if you keep writing lemons like that there will be alot of boyfriends and hubands walking around with smiles on their faces. Although I think they jumped into things a little too quickly. It was still freakin hot as hell. I can't wait for the ext update.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh! This is going to get ugly. Which is really too bad, because it is just so beautiful between Bella and Edward. Tyler is an ass and doesn't deserve her anyway.
This story is really interesting- ready for an update!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 5
so good
Reviewer: nikkipattinson (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
WOW! I love this story. Please update quickly.
Reviewer: silver sniper (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying this story so far, you have done a great job on it. I particularily like Jasper's thought process, it adds an element of reality to the story. Edward's reaction to first seeing Bella was perfectly done, a nice touch.
Great work so far, I am looking forward to more of this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I worried over their first meeting a lot, so I am glad it came out ok!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
I don't mind the whole they are meant to be together thing, it's just how it is for them. And what was up Tyler's butt. anyway looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wonder what Tyler's issue with Edward is...
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Awwwwww-more please! Poor Edward!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
I think that Tyler guy is an ass and Bella needs to send him packing. I am so dissapointed that Charlie is tolerating this.
Jake has the right idea. I'm ready for him to follow through.
I'm pretty concerned about what's going on with Jasper. I really hope Alice or Edward figure out what's really going on...
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh no, poor Jasper. I can't imagine how scary and frustrating life must be for him and Edward.
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
Sounds like Bella is stuck in a deep rut...I wonder who will come along and help her out of it? ;-)
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
I just started reading this story and anything about mental illness is not pleasant, for the patients and care givers it's a rough road having expierence with the subject. I love how it started out and am looking forward to the updates. And don't worry I'm not going to review on facts that are right or wrong.I just love any story that has to do with our favorite couple.
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
Still very interesting...Jasper is such a deluded thing. It's sad to see him so far from reality.
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