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Reviewer: Lizzie (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Prolouge

Interesting premise and action packed, like you promised.  Action sequences can be difficult to write but I liked this one.  I hope you continue the story.

Reviewer: ohlukitskassy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Prolouge

Loves it :)

Its awesome

ily ellie

Reviewer: martha8450 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Prolouge

Interesting....keep writing!

Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Prolouge

Holy Crap! This is an intersting start! LoL

Author's Response:

Heh. Best to keep you interested i guess  :)



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