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Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 17: Family
Awwwww....those boys are so darn sweet! And not too sweet like the ice cream. just the right amount of sweetness. It's such fun to watch them slowly grow closer and closer. I love this story!
Reviewer: MoodyBlued (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 17: Family
I'm loving this story and all of the family dynamics. Lots of attention to detail to make it work.
Would love to see some progression in E & J's relationship though...emotionally as well as physically!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 16: Alice, Rosalie, and Emmett, oh my!
OOH, I was excited for nekked Jasper as well!! Hmm, wonder if Alice is gonna make Edward a Jasper-related Xmas gift?? I bet she took some lovely shots of him all googley-eyed for Edward while texting. 8) Aaaah, gay love. ;)
WHOA nelly, a baby emmet! a "bemmet"? yikes! Rose must be peeing her pants....at least peeing the stick! It's good Emmett's in if she is preggers. The baby will sure have lots of love!
Boohoo on Jasper being without a family. Makes me happier that he has an adopted one now....but it seems he's been without so long that he doesn't quite know what to do with a family now, or how to relax around one. It will come in time.
Loved your last mini-chap as well....the ceremony as you described it was lovely. Glad he had some supporters show up. :) The don't ask/tell policy is so much absolute BULLSHIT that it just pisses me off and breaks my heart. It disgusts me that our government is so paranoid, or giving in to those who are, and that they'd discriminate so blatantly. Sigh. I appreciate our servicepeople, and I don't give a damn who they want to date!! gah!
Thanks for the updates, and tell Rose GOOD LUCK!
:)
Reviewer: gfeather (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 16: Alice, Rosalie, and Emmett, oh my!
After another day of mayhem in an already crummy week, coming home to read this made me smile.
Lovely as always.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 16: Alice, Rosalie, and Emmett, oh my!
Oh, that sounds like a big chore to keep Emmett occupied!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: Alice, Rosalie, and Emmett, oh my!
love it.
Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 16: Alice, Rosalie, and Emmett, oh my!
Great chapter. Loved the Alice angst. That Jasper is such a sweet one. And the kiss was awesome! You have Emmett completely pegged. LOL
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: Alice, Rosalie, and Emmett, oh my!
Never aplologize for extra chapters...never...
Once again Jasper's good nature is involved in helping everyone. When is he going to allow some one to help him?
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 15: Mini-Chapter: Veterans Day
Not sure what is haunting Jasper, but I hope he shares it with Bella and Edward soon. Keeping things inside isn't the way to healing.
Glad that Jasper is confronting his feeling and that he has people around him who care about him.
Pizza and brownies sound yummy. Too bad it's only 7 a.m. I do have brownie mix though...hmmmm. Possibilites are presenting themselves for lunchtime...
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 14: Mini Chapter: Bella
Yeah!! I love updates :)) Thanks.
Glad Bella's doing better...there is a happy life beyond James. And LOL her character being mean to the guard...work it out, Bella :)
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 14: Mini Chapter: Bella
Thanks. It was nice to see inside Bella's head for a moment.
Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 14: Mini Chapter: Bella
Really nice to get a look inside Bella's head. This fills in a lot of questions I've had. Nice touch with the secret identity! I LOVE this story!!! Please write more J and E soon! : )
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Living Room Campouts
I have absolutely fallen in love with this story. It is the one I hope is updated whenever I get an alert. They all really have a sense of family that is endearing.
Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 13: Living Room Campouts
*snorts* If Jasper did break the skeaze ball's ribs, I'd love to know just what he did to do it. Unerving at first but with a sweet ending. *laughs* I thought & said the same thing Alice did when she took pictures of Jasper, Bella, and Edward's positions. I'm just happy she felt safe with Jasper. Though I did chuckle over the "molesting your boyfriend." line. Fine work, Draven
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Living Room Campouts
i love it.
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Living Room Campouts
*sigh of happiness* So glad to see this updated. Now we know things aren't going to go smoothly with the Asshat; and Jasper and Edward still have a long ways to go. I sincerely hope RL doesn't tie you to much and that you still get opportunities to keep writing this. It's a great little story.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 13: Living Room Campouts
I love Edward with Jasper. Happy sigh. Romantic, smutty, hot, steamy, friendly, you name it. THey're like PB&J!!! Perfect together. :) Thank you for the update - that cliffie was hard!! Hope RL comes together for you. :))
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Living Room Campouts
Beautiful chapter. It's almost weird to me that B/J/E will be together because Edward really doesn't seem to interested in her and vice versa but if you can make it work, it will be great.
You keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tempers and Parties
it's so good. more please.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tempers and Parties
holy FUCK! JAMES!!!!!!
I hope that Jasper KICKS. HIS. ASS.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn...I knew James would surface, but I didn't see this coming!! Althought the costumes make the perfect foil, don't they?? BASTARD!! When he mentioned Edward's room, I thought it was gonna be someone trying to steal Edward's painkillers.
CURSED JAMES!! gah!
Jasper had BETTER beat him freakin' senseless and get his ass jailed!
Um...is this gonna result in the threesome?? Shouldn't Ed & Jas have sex by themselves first? Are they ever gonna get busy?
Please, please hurry and update!! I need to know that Bella is OK and that James is bleeding and unconscious! (it would be OK with me if he tried to run, and fell over the baby gate, toppling down the stairs with a thud as his head his the floor at the bottom. ) I'm tough on crime!! Lol
Many thanks for the update, if not the cliffie! :)
Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tempers and Parties
Missa, you left me on a cliff-hanger. Not very nice... Though I suspect I know who the blue stranger is, I hope Bella is left unhurt. *has the warm fuzzies from Edward & Jasper's cuddle moment* Fine work, Draven
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tempers and Parties
*squeal* an update!! Three guesses for the figure in blue and the first two don't count. ;) This is one of my favorite stories on here. I'm not so big on slash as I used be but you're really handling this well, exploring them as people and not just two hot guys hooking up. I really appreciate the attention you're paying to details about their emotions and stuff.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tempers and Parties
Oh no James! That scum.
Poor Bella. First James verbally abuses her and then Edward (who is her friend) verbally abuses her and then James comes back and attacks her.
Homegirl needs a break.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tempers and Parties
My guess is that James somehow ended up at the party...
He's such a disgusting ass! I wish he would go away- forever!
I'm glad that Jasper is there to help Bella. Really he is there for her in so many ways.
Lovely story, thoroughly enjoying it. Eager for more...
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Settling In
Awe! So sweet! I love how Edward ends up giving in and letting Jasper help him out. <3
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