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Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 28: New Traditions

nice

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 28: New Traditions

Wonderful chapter! I love how they love! Everything is so tender and gentle and warm. The giggling bit at the end made me blush! : )

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 27: Christmas is for Kids

nice

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 27: Christmas is for Kids

Fantastic xmas day. Mine was nice too, but I am a little jealous of the Cullen celebration!!!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 27: Christmas is for Kids

Very warm and special Christmas for Jasper.  I do so hope he finds peace in his heart.  With Edward to share the holidays with, who wouldn't be happy?

 

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 26: I'll Be Home for Christmas

So sweet and loving.  Holidays can be very stressful, but it seems these two are able to lean on each other and provide comfort.  I like that Bella is able to relate to Jasper in her own way and that she has her own special relationship starting with Jasper.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 26: I'll Be Home for Christmas

love it.

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 26: I'll Be Home for Christmas

So sweet. They are all so loving to Jasper, which he needs so badly! The tenderness is so thick you can cut it with a knife! : )

Reviewer: wormy (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: Settling In

...staying awake and reading your story after my night-shift...yawn...but it was worth it, i like it how you take things slow, develop the story, and "no cocks on first chapter" without any background...but...i can´t see the threesome, possibly they will be better only the two of them...oh, and i´m sorry for my bad english...

Reviewer: Kristen618 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 25: Shopping, Cockblocked, and Christmas Eve

Wonderful!  I love this story..

 

I have to say taht I agree with one of the posts below...I can't see Bella entering this relationship.  These two have something so special that I don't want her to be a part of!   

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 25: Shopping, Cockblocked, and Christmas Eve

Very sweet and beautiful.  The true love and affection shown by Edward and Jasper is what relationships are all about.  Jasper's Christmas may not be easy, but it will be filled with Edward and his family.  I hope it's enough. 

Perhaps Bella can fill in the gaps?

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 25: Shopping, Cockblocked, and Christmas Eve

so sweet.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 24: Winter Break Prep

love it.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 23: Shared Strengths

i love it. as much i am all about traditional couples. I love those two together.

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 21: Thanksgiving and Black Friday

You gotta love our boys.  So sweet to each other.  I love how they're taking things slowly and enjoying life together.

Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 23: Shared Strengths

Thanks for letting me know about the hot lemon water with honey... I have never tried that, and now with cold/flu season, we make it regularly at our house!

Love the story!  Thanks for sharing!

~Sapphire

Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

aww this is a very cute story.  I  look forward to seeing where ya go with it

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

*shock* I'm so glad that he's alright!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

those rotten little bastards!!!!!! I hate kids. How could they hurt my Jasper?? KILL them! Expelling them isn't good enough!! Conspiracy is a felony...charge them as ADULTS!!

Grrr...hurting my Jasper! HMPH! 

These two poor boys, cockblocked every time they turn around!!  My dogs get more action at the park than they do! haha. :)

This is gonna seem a bit weird or off track, but....seeing as this has evolved into such a love affair, I actually can't see the threesome with Bella any more! yes, they both love her and all, but....they haven't even had each other yet, and Bella's gonna hop in there somehow? (well, I assume it's Bella, 'cause Rose is their only other hetero buddy....and she'd eat them alive, as would Emm, for the suggestion...and I can't see Esme hopping into bed with them!!)  EEK!  Are they gonna be drunk or something? or involve another guy?? gah, the mystery is killing me!

I'm glad that Edward gets a chance to take care of Jasper. And the mac-n-cheese can fix anything, I'm sure. :)  haha- it's probably Edward's fave and he found a way to get some. :)

Jasper wanting to go home and curl up with Edward? EPIC cuteness. :))))))))

Thanks for the update!!!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

love it.

Reviewer: mamaheartstwilight (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

I adore your story!  I love how you are taking things slowly and really exploring their personalities.  Their struggles are realistic.  I normally get scared off with the lemons and slash but I was intrigued by the setting of your story.   Great work, keep it up! 

 

Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: Boys will be Boys

LOL!   Dr Grump... hehehehe...

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 20: Keeping Open the Lines of Communication

They have such a great loving relationship.  It's so great how they are confiding in and trusting each other more and more.  Such a sweet story.

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 19: The Sleepless Go to Seattel

Interesting...I'm anxious to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 18: Story Time

I know I've said it before, but I love how everything just seems to naturally flow for these guys.  The emotions just seem right because they have just evolved into the next phase of their relationship.

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