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Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 18: Story Time
Loved this chapter - very sweet.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: Family
Lots of food in this fic - now I want ice cream! Such a nice family.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 16: Alice, Rosalie, and Emmett, oh my!
Aw, Jasper's the best friend ever.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 15: Mini-Chapter: Veterans Day
Very touching chapter. Thanks.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Mini Chapter: Bella
Oh, you had to mention gummy bears... drool.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Living Room Campouts
It's probably wrong that I wanted Jasper, Emmett, and Edward to take turns kicking James in the face, right?
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tempers and Parties
A pimp, eh? Seems appropriately criminal!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 11: MidSemester pt. 2
Nice character progression. I maintain that either Jasper or Edward should be available for rent when I'm sick.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Midsemester Pt. 1
When I get sick this winter, I'll be thinking of a cute boy rubbing my neck.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 9: the Date
Oh man, now I want dumplings. And a date with Jasper and Edward.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: Prelude to a Date
I just want to give Emmett a big sloppy hug. Love him!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 7: Bella, part 2
Loved the interaction between all of them, rallying around Bella!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 18: Story Time
Continue to enjoy your amazing story. Eager for more...
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 6: Bella (part 1)
Excellent chapter - Jasper punching James and taking his clip was quite sexy. And I loved the kiss between Jasper and Edward. Nice!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Mini Chapter: Three Weeks In: Family Dinner
Loved your chapter ending - very sweet. And go Edward go for asking Jasper out! I'm looking forward to seeing what's up with Bella... good tension!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 4: First Week part 2
I love that you worked in The Princess Bride! And that is some high quality flirting that's going on - very sweet!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:30 PM · On: First Week: Part 1
Bring on the smoldering Edward, please!
Love that you're using CE and BCE - BC and AD are pet peeves of mine.
Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 18: Story Time
Oh, these boys are so wonderful and gentle together. They finally got to some sexin', but that was nothing compared to the tenderness and love they are showing. It's so incredibly sweet. This is my favorite story!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Faculty Orientation
I'm not sure why, but Tanya as a nurse cracks me up. I have no idea why the fact they're having violence drills is sticking with me.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Settling In
I'm totally hooked. I love that Edward uses a cane. Good beginning.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: Family
I like that Edward and Jasper are getting closer but I feel that the story is not progressing as much as it could be. Maybe it's just me.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 17: Family
Oh, loved the games of Mini Golf. Lol! And Edward/Jasper cuddling at the Cullens. Adorable! =]
Reviewer: PyranicPhoenix (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 17: Family
Horray for Jasper/Edward and Starbuck's carmel macchiatos (macchiatoes? I dunno the correct plural for it at this moment.) I will admit to being a bit sad that Emmett and Rose weren't pregnant yet, but I assume the great and powerful author has a plan. I love the story so far and can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: Family
oi! I love these two together, seriously!! I gobble up any fanfic I can find with these two as a couple - they just fit so well...Edward is all Emo, and Jasper can figure him out and quietly lift his spirits. Good fit! While I admit I'm frisky for them to get frisky, I love that they're taking things slowly and letting them happen naturally. Jasper has to ease in to have a family again, and Edward has to get used to being happy! Slow and steady wins the race, boys :) They're just so damned CUTE! gah! killing me, you are, with your tale of man love!! teehee 8)
Poor Alice. I'm glad that Jasper was there for her, and that she wasn't afraid to wake him up in the wee hours. She needed a friend. And he really does fit into this family so well - helped Alice, pepped her up, and knew just what to do with Emmett to keep him occupied. Sorry for Rose being blue, but timing seems to be everything with babies, so better that they plan for it. It'll happen.
Please remind Edward to tell Jasper about those little bitches from mini golf. EVIL teens must be eradicated!!! >:> Don't mess with Jazz or you mess with ME! hmph.
Thanks for TWO kick-ass updates in such a short time! I feel spoiled. :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: Family
awesome.
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