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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love Charlie, and I think you did him justice with this one-shot. Very in-character.
Reviewer: starla 46 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
vEYR Very nice. I always hoped someone would write this scene. I hope you get a chance to read my "One Shot" "Chirstmas Wish" is the title and Eclipse is the category. It's new to this site. I would love to get your impute. Take care and, keep on writing!
Virginia AKA Starla 46
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was great
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
kk....i luhved itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh I loved this!!!
Reviewer: truthis2rare (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is cute! I really like it. =) good job.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very good!! I see why you won the contest!
Reviewer: GreekBee (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
To begin with, it probably seems like I'm stalking you via your stories, but I assure you, it's just because I have some catching up to do as things have been pretty hectic recently. Anyway... I couldn't help but laugh out loud as Jake started to strip, Charlie's reaction to that was priceless. And his reaction to the name was what I would have expected it to be too. In fact the whole thing was how I expected it to happen, and I probably wouldn't have been able to get it down properly on..paper (screen?) - at least no where near as funny as you wrote it. XD -Greek Bee
Reviewer: saram05 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
Holy crap - you had me rolling with your dialogue! Love it, love it, love it!
Reviewer: dreaming in black and white (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Charlie screaming like a little girl...loved this! Only comment is that she's called Renesmee, not Reneesme! Anyway, way I really hoped somebody would write this part, but it was a great idea to do it from Charlie's pov - thanks! xxx :)
Reviewer: Twilightened (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
Fun read. Thanks HB
Reviewer: Nightmare and Dream (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
xDDD Poor Charlie... His reaction to Jake stripping was so hilarious! Love it! Very well writting. The way you portrayed Charlie was perfect!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
HB1 YOU ARE MY HERO!!! I soooo was wanting to get Charlie's reaction to this very scene! THANK YOU!
I so loved it when Charlie screamed "like a little girl!" LOL
Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, that was perfect! I loved it. Charlie really is a good guy who just loves his daughter. The part where jake started stripping was awesome. Poor charlie.
Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
i love this one, BB! like i told you, charlie is the unsung hero of the twilight universe!
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