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Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Jacob
DAMNIT JACOB! GO TO HELL!!
Author's Response: You're cracking me up!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 11: Heart & Soul
Awww. I cried so much in this chapter. AND I ALREADY TOLD I DONT CRY SO STOP MAKING SUCH DAMN GOOD CHAPTERS!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Surprise/Good-bye
Noooo!!! U dont want him to leave. And the whole, 'how about now?' thing is just like all the romantic movies. awwww...
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 9: Hangover
WHAT!!! HE DOESN"T HAVE A GIRLFRIEND ANYMORE!!!! *SQUEELS*
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Thank God they've finally confessed their feelings! I was starting to get a little annoyed at them for taking so long! ;)
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Yay!!!! I'm so happy! I like how he tortured her a bit, too. Good stuff.
Reviewer: angelmastr7 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
great chapter....god I wanted to smack Bella in the beginning though! But I loved the way he did it..very cute...update soon!
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
FINALLY!!! That boy beats around the bush like noone else. I LOVE how Carlisle and Esme were playing along like it was nothing. Edward is quite the tortutous bastard. AHEM...I am DYING to hear his POV from these past two chapters...just sayin.
Now it's time for Bella to fess up, too! I really, really, REALLY love this story (both views) and literally cannot wait for what happens next. I'm sure Edward is not done venting to his family (and Bella) about not knowing about Jacob...and maybe he and Bella need to get to know each other better wink*wink* All I'm saying is that some more kissing , etc (lemon city)...would probably be appropriate, and appreciated.
Author's Response: Keep your pants on...or not...whatev...
I am in the process of updating EPOV, you'll get 2 before the next BPOV!
There might be a lemon...maybe.
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
ohhh FINALLY lol!!! good execution on the reveal!! loved it! looking forward to the next chapter!!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Oh.My.God! He confessed his love to her! I love that the started it in front of Esme and Carlisle and that Esme was "egging" him on. His confession was perfect! I can't wait to see where they go from here! EEK! ;)
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
please hurry with updates...such a sweet love story
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Awww I felt so bad for Bella in this chapter, cept for the end;) I am so glad that Edward finally cleared the air so to speak and now they can focus on them.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Awww this has defo been my most favorite chapter so far!!!
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Just beautiful! More please!
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Yeah! Finally!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
HeyFanpireMama,
I loooved this chapter it's one of your best. My heart broke for Bella although I knew that Edward meant her when he was talking about meating his love of his life.
You are a brilliant writer I was glued to the screen through the entire chapter. Great work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Sarah
Author's Response: ON--
You always astound me with your adoring reviews. *blush* Thank you for sticking with this crazy little story that has danced its way through my head. I hope I can continue to live up to your expectations.
Reviewer: jazzy89 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
awwww!! they kissed!! yay! loved it update soon :)
Reviewer: jazzy89 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
awwww!! they kissed!! yay! loved it update soon :)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
Yeah she finally gets it!
Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
silly bella! can't wait to see where this goes. Can they get married at the museum?? Please????
Author's Response: Oh, acie! Thanks for that grand idea! We'll see what we can do...
Author's Response: Oh, acie! Thanks for that grand idea! We'll see what we can do...
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
wow!!!!m stupid Bella.... but I stilllove her
Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
I love it<3
Reviewer: katieam1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
I LOVE this chapter!! So EXCITED they are Kissing!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
*sigh* ok Bella was pretty dense...slow for a non-blonde! But ooohh, I loved every torturous minute...*sigh*sigh*gush*
update Soon! this one's my favorite!!
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