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Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Alone
nice story so far - im intrigued
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out
Way to go Bella!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out
Great chapter!
I can't believe Tanya! Grr... But way to go Bella for punching her face in!!!
Will Edward and Bella stay together? I hope they do.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: Ecstacy
Mmmmmm. Yuuuummm :D
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out
Great chapter! I hope this is the last we see of Tanya.
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out
I was laughing out loud for the entire chapter. My husband keeps givng me weird looks. But drunk Bella = hilarious Bella.
Nooo, don't take away my happiness!!
*savors*
Awesome chapter :-) And I admit, I'm a teensy bit happy the warm fuzzies won't last long, because that would mean you'd be done writing their story and I don't want it to end!
Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out
I have been to the Redhead Piano Bar and I lurve it!!!!!
Very cute chapter!
Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out
I have been to the Redhead Piano Bar and I lurve it!!!!!
Very cute chapter!
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: Girls Night Out
What do you mean it won't last long?
How dare you!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
thats good taht bella realized that edward really does love her!
Reviewer: katieam1 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
I love Alice in this story!!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
goooooood job gurlie. i really liked it. Gosh, why can't those two just believe that they're perfect for each other. well, at least they got to that part and are finally happy. this reiew makes noooooo sense....does it??(sigh) please update sooooooon!!
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
awww!! This is just perfect!!
Loved it!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
hehe I'm not so sure that Bella was all that insecure about Edward, as much as she just wasn't willing to "share" him yet at the family BBQ... at least, that could be a small part of what occurred to her :)
It's good to see them both getting things out in the open, and I did like Alice's 'I fail to see the problem' talk with Bella.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
Hi FanpireMama,
first I've got to say it's awesome how often you update. Thanks soooo much for that.
I looooved this chapter. It's so typical Bella to be so insecure. I'm glad Alice could set her right. Will you be going through all 4 books in your story? I think this would be at the end of the second book?
Great work on this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Will Tanya make an appearance soon?
Sarah
Author's Response: Thanks for all of your reviews, Sarah! To answer your "Tanya" question...you should check out the thread! I left a teaser up there for the next chapter that may hint at a comeback. Just sayin'!
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5188&p=598995#p598995
Reviewer: crazycoffeemom (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
loved it loved it lol hurry with the next update.
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
That was great i cant wait until the next update loved it:)
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
I love your allusion to the fact that if Edward could read minds, Bella would be the only one he couldn't read! And I loved the understated lemon in the previous chapter. It fit.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
I always get warm fuzzies reading your chapters :-) Edward is so caring about Bella!
I'm still dying to find out what happened at family dinner now that they've finally hooked up ;-) I can only imagine the gossip!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
aw yay! shes letting herself be happy :]
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
Damn woman you had me worried there for a moment! I was ready to jump on the page and slap Bella around a little bit. I'm glad she went back to talk to him. Can't wait to read EPOV on this.
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 16: Ecstacy
Finally! im so happy she finally said it!
i loved this so so so much :]
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
thanks for the update, your an amazing writter, keep it up
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 15: Torture
again, seriously this was totally amazing.
i love this sooo much!
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: Inner Demons
Great chapter!!!!
Bella is most certainly NOT putting her big girl panties on......cause she can't find them!!! lol Yeah, that's a joke based on the beginning of this chapter!! Whoo, I am too good lol
Can't wait for an udpate!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Nice one!
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