Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: Surprise/Good-bye
Whoo-hoo!!! he did come to Phoenix! But what's up with this "finding myself" expedition? Aside from that weirdness, Bella is freaking oblivious!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 9: Hangover
I'm with Bella, I'd be super pissed off at that gift too, total mixed messages from a guy with a girlfriend (or so we thought at the time she opened it) Whoo-hoo he doesn't ahve one anymore.
Walking around outside? I hope it's at the Hale house:-)
I think Bella wins for biggest bitch w/ a hangover.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 8: Gifts
Ugh - Jake is a whack job.
The photo gifts are great. Tiffany's?? Fancy:-)
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: Uneasy
Initially, I liked the idea of a decent possible love interest in Jacob just to kick Edward into action. But it seems like Jake is going to fail on his own rather than get Edward to man up. Bummer.
The bigger bummer is that Edward didn't come totown for her bday weekend:-(
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Insignificant
Yea for Esme giving Bella a little insight into Edward's feelings, even if Bella just brushes them off. I love that E&B got to spend a day together w/o anyone else.
I love when stories take place in Chicago and actually go to real places, it's just so easy to picture them there. I've never been to Cafe Expression and it's been years since I've been to the Signature Room. Time to put those on the list of things to do.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: Memories
How did Rose never notice Bella in the hall photos before?? I suppose if she ever was heading upstairs at the cullen's house, it was straight to Em's bedroom w/ only one thing on her mind. :-)
And what is up w/ the Bella shrine in Edward's room? Looks like Bella isn't the only one w/ a childhood crush.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 4: Dinner
Awwww, that was a cute reveal to C&E.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: Eddie-boy
So cute, him trying to remember who she is - but can't place it until she calls him Eddie-boy. She's a dork for worrying about going to see C&E. :-)
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Found
Ooohhh! I love that they didn't give Edward the head's up that she was back in their lives. Can't wait to see his reaction!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Alone
I've been eyeing your story for awhile and today I finally caved. Adorable start:-)
Reviewer: spunkransom30 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
I can't stand the suspense! Tell me more! ;)
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Alone
I'm cheesy and romantic too and that is why I love your story - the real world sucks - I'll choose a fairytale anyday!!!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
Is it their new house? Great chapter. Now update so we know where they are. Please and thank you!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
i know its the house that they loved and were 'waiting' to hear from the realtor if the offer was accepted. i guess someone already heard from them... but its just my guess..... also i love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
:P
Edward's fangirls annoy me during these times :P
Reviewer: kiwi vampire (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
Fantastic it only gets better... Keep going!!!!! hehehehe
Seriously Love this Story.
More Please
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
oh you are an evil evil little writer!!!!!!!! Come on, that was so good!!!!!!!!! Please tell me it is THEIR house...that would be amazing
Author's Response: Yes, I can be evil and no I will not tell you. But I will promise you that when the next chapter is up, it will be worth the wait. K? K.
Thanks for reading! You've brought a smile to my face today!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
Are they at one of the houses they looked at??? Did Edward decide to buy one?
I have to say that I hate the bitches that are all over Edward!
Author's Response: I don't like 'em either...but the boy's so pretty they can't help themselves. I'm just glad that Bella isn't feeling as threatened anymore.
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
Yay! It's great to see them so happy! This is a wonderful fairy tale and I love it!!!! Although I'm not sure if I could handle such a pretty man - that would get tiring. I can't wait for the ending! Thank you again for writing a story that makes me feel happy!
Author's Response: I'm so glad it's making you feel happy! I often worry that I'm getting too cheesy and romantical...but like you said, it really is a fariy tale and they're supposed to be that way. I'm just a big cheesy romantic at heart anyway.
Thanks for keeping up with us here @ Serendipity, it means the world to us! :)
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
great chapter!!!
Reviewer: lydchil (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
Super chapter! I think they're at the house they put an offer on (and that the offer was accepted). Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
You always do this!! Ilove it I HATE IT. Again cliffhangers SUCK for people with no patience who want MORE. Where the hell are they anyway and when is Edward going to propose????? I wanna read about a ring!! Goes without saying, Loved the chapter. OOH I guess I said it didn't I?
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
I bet they are at the house they want, Edward always likes to surprise her.
Reviewer: Jilli90 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
enjoyable
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 21: New Beginnings
WOW....are they at the house they put an offer on?
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