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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Revealing

Would definitely hang out with drunk Edward!

Favorite Memory: Just holding and cuddling my son in the middle of the night, just the two of us, when he was a tiny baby, kissing his sweet little head. (he is currently a college student) 



Author's Response:

Everyone loves a drunk Edward. Your memory is one of my favorites as well :) I loved sitting with my son when he was teeny tiny and cradling him in my arms for hours, I love the smell of babies to this day :P

Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Revealing

I'd hang out with you and Edward anywhere, baby!  



Author's Response:

Dude, I want to run away with you and make little mexican babies together :) Drunk Edward is great... me, not so much.... I tend to streak when I'm drunk lol

Reviewer: Julia F (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Biology and Blushes

When you use the phrase "of coarse," or any phrase using that same word usage, it should be spelled "course."  "Coarse" refers to roughness, not a plan of action.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I've had a couple people mention that already lol. I finally caught onto that :)

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Goodnight for a strange meeting

Hi, my childhood friend was and still is....and I know this is going to be corny BUT ... he's my brother.

Through all the fights tears and especially laughter we still know each others buttons even though know we live across the country from each other. And funny enough I live 20 miles from downtown Jacksonville FL he is in this little town in Northen California called Eureka which he says sorta resembles Forks, but they have a Taget. It's almost hysterical.

I say Edward tries to kiss her there in the rain in the playground near their loved ones. But I'm sure it was Mrs. Peacock in the library with the candlestick. lol



Author's Response:

Aw, no kissing yet :( It gets there... I promise ;) You're last comment about the candlestick made me giggle. I heart you.

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Goodnight for a strange meeting

Oh you big tease! 

Poor Edward. :( Not that he's handling things well, but he really has a lot to deal with! I think it's really interesting that in your story, he doesn't get along well with Emmett and Alice.  I wonder if that will change. Hmmm...

Maybe when you write more, I'll find out. :)



Author's Response:

Yes, you shall find out more later :) Edward does deal with a lot, the poor guy :( I am a big tease, but next chapter should be up soon so... we'll get to see more :)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Goodnight for a strange meeting

LOVE THE STORY!!!BUT DAMN!!!!!!!!!A CLIFFIE????????

My childhood friend was Lois. 

Just an FYI-it's spelled "cirrhosis" of the liver(I'm a nurse)



Author's Response:

Damn, google lied to me and told me I spelled it right. FRACK! Good to know I have a nurse reviewer... maybe you could explain to Edward that was he's doing is going to kill him? We'll include you in one of the chapters have a talk with him lol.

I love me some cliffies :)

My childhood friend was Jenny!

Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Biology and Blushes

Humiliating school experience ...... actually it was middle school .... filling the sink with H2O and dunking tampons in it ..... leaving them for the male teacher ...getting caught and stuck with after school suspension

Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:35 PM · On: I've decided... God hates me

I think I have a girlie crush on you...not quite Katy Perry but close.... :p

 



Author's Response:

Aw, well, I have a full blown crush on you so :) I'm giving you one massive response to all three you left me. You are made of SUPER win. Angsty cookies rock, blue berry poptars are my favorite and... come on, who hasn't kissed a girl and like it?

I'm secretely in love with you and your reviews... lets run away together ;)

Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Leather and Life

I'll have frosted cherry pop tarts with my beanie babies, please.  Oh and uh,  if you find my whip can you send it home...Jessica was just borrowing it for the weekend.

Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Jack and Jinx

My favorite cookie is angsty flavored...keep em coming!

Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Goodnight for a strange meeting

OooooooO hopefully this marks the start of things to come for Bella and Edward =] Its so obvious they both need someone to confide in and understand what they're going through - i'm hoping that they realise that they have that in eachother sooner rather than later!

I'm a sucker for the lovey-dovey stuff, i'll admit... lol

Great add, can't wait for the next chapter! x



Author's Response:

Eek, I don't want to dissapoint but this story is far from lovey dovey lol. I mean, it gets there and it has its moments but... its about greif and coping with it. Bella and Edward are very emotionally screwed up, things may not go off so smoothly as everyone hopes.

I'm glad you are enjoying the story though, reviews make my heart super happy :)

Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Goodnight for a strange meeting

I have been lurking but I like this story. It's different



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. No more lurking for you :) I love every review and they all make me happy, even from people who lurk :P

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Biology and Blushes

Ok Chica... Reviews mean new chapters faster RIGHT?  So here is mine...

Love the chapter.  Jazz and Alice at lunch CRACKED ME UP! Go Alice, giving Jazz a little action, but damn in front of your brother... LOL

I whipped my head back to the two across from me when I heard Jazz start panting a little. I scowled at the two of them. "What the fuck are you two doing?" Alice had one hand sitting on top of the table and the other had mysteriously disappeared, she blushed and Jasper laughed.

I felt so bad for Bella when she hit Edward in the face. I too could twist an ankle walking across a room.

This line seemed to sum up what Bella is doing so well. Why she is staying.

The creeping sadness weighed heavily inside of me while I laid there though, first day of school in a place I swore I'd never go and the only reason I was doing it was for Jake. And he wasn't even here,

Excellent foreshadowing that Edward will be able to help her move forward with the Izzy nickname.

My most embarrassing moment in HS... Outside of just having to be there for 3 years. The longest 3 years of my life.  Knowing I was 3 years away from having to see 95% of the folks ever again... until FACEBOOK... (15 min lapses) Well... hum...  Oh yes... I know what it was...

Sr. Year homecoming, I was dating a guy who played baseball for a College in Dallas. I had been dating him all fall; we met volunteering camp for kids with spinabifita. It was not love, but the jackass had is "ex" answer the phone when I called to see what time he was picking me up for the game. She said he was not interested in coming... Fucker! So going to the game with out my date, after having a mum on at school, was the most humiliating HS experience. His buddies from the camp ripped him a new one for treating me so bad. :-)

-meg

 



Author's Response:

I have decided I am going to bake you a cake and cyber send it to you for being so fantastical :) I know that isn't a word but you deserve your own special word for how awesome you are. Everyone of your reviews make me smile inside :) And that guy does sound like he was a douchepacker... hate those :( Anywho, thanks for another awesome review... you are my new ray of sunshine!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Biology and Blushes

I am enjoying your story.  It is very emotional and interesting.  I'll be looking for it.

 

Hope you don't mind if I point something out.  You've been using the word coarse when it should be course.  Sorry, it's my internal editor...doesn't shut up!  I know you have a beta, but they have apparently missed this.  Just trying to help make your story better!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the tip :P I appreciate it, I always get those two pesky thingies mixed up lol. I appreciate your review though, makes me happy inside :)

Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Biology and Blushes

Oh wow, this story is really great... its really been getting me all emotional! Tears one minute, giggles the next...

Really looking forward to the next add xx



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much :) I like to tug at the heart strings, angsty and funny... always makes for good reads. I'm updating soon :) I look forward to another lovely reveiw from you!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Biology and Blushes

You better be updating soon.  Come on...you know you want to! 



Author's Response:

By tonight... be ready chika... it gets better :)

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:42 AM · On: I've decided... God hates me

You are so right about the 10th reunion.  I just had my 10th high school reunion, and the people there, who weren't your friends, some seem less fake than before while others have just kept it right on! 

Yay for Jasper being the one to meet Bella first and being nice to her. :) *sigh* I love me some Jasper....

You never know who you'll meet in science class... :)

I have had your story on my "fics to read" list for a while now.  I got so much work done yesterday that I am allowing myself a rainy day read-a-thon, and yours was next on the list. :) 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad I was next on your list :) I update often so... we'll be seeing what happens next real soon here. I know who she meets in science class :P I loved that reunion line, that one was courtesy of my dad who just went to his not that long ago. He's like, I didn't know that people are even less transparent when they leave school then when they were in school.

I love having you reading, hope you continue to enjoy :)

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Red Chevy and memories

Good Lord...

I love how you brought in the truck to the story.  Having her find and read Jake's letter there, when they had been there together while he fixed it up, was just a beautiful scene.  

Pushing next now....



Author's Response:

I loved doing that part :) I'm glad that you are enjoying everything so far... more goodness to ensue :P You're reviews make me smile lolli... I heart you!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Sitting with my dead

Aw, Oscar....you had me in tears. :( 

 



Author's Response:

Aww... lolli :) You reviewed me... you make my heart SUPER happy! What made you come on over? Did you see the pretty banner? Did you!? You are made of super win woman... cyber money to you!

Reviewer: BellEd1609 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Biology and Blushes

great story! cant wait to read more edward/bella interaction!

please update soon!

xoxo



Author's Response:

More B/E interaction coming up soon. Next chapter should be up tonight :)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Biology and Blushes

POOR BELLA!!!!!!A TRULY CRAPPY DAY!.....EXCEPT...WELL, SHE DEFINITELY GOT EDWARDS'S ATTENTION!!!!NOT THAT I CONDONE TEEN DRINKING, BUT I THINK IT WOULDN'T HURT FOR BELLA TO SHARE A FEW DRINKS WITH EDWARD...THEY MIGHT BOTH OPEN UP A LITTLE TO EACH OTHER, WITH THEIR GUARDS DOWN A BIT.



Author's Response:

You are very smart :) Shh... don't tell the others! ;)

Reviewer: jslpisces11 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Biology and Blushes

i feel so bad for those two- gotta heal each other....

I walked out of the side door to my HS my freshman year, promptly slid on ice and slid on my ass to the curb- where the wrestling team was boarding a bus.  WANTED TO DIE



Author's Response:

That would be embarassing, not doubt about it. lets see... my first day of high school I was walking to class and the head of the football team slammed right into me, damn near killed me lol. Everyone laughed and I wanted to crawl into a hole and die. Bells and Eddy do gotta heal each other, I completely agree.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Biology and Blushes

I love you too. Me and P.E. fit like Bella in a china shop. I was the girl not allow to throw, hit, bat, or even to run. lol

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Biology and Blushes

I still want to kill your Alice and Jasper... they just seem so selfish and selfabsorbed... not thinking about anyone but themselves.

But it was nice seeing Edward take up for Bella like that. With all of the stuff he has going on right now... he didn't have to go out of his way to help her.

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:25 PM · On: I've decided... God hates me

I feel really horrible for Edward.

Its enough that his own sister hates him... but now his "best friend" is making fun of him behind his back too. Who laughs at someone who is in pain?

I don't know what I would do if I was Edward. His mom is dead. His dad is no where to be found. Its obvious his siblings don't give a rats ass about him. And people treat him like he is a walking joke.

He has every right to be angry and bitter.

If it was Bella who was angry and bitter... people would sympathize with her just because she is a girl. But because Edward is a guy... he is held to different standards.



Author's Response:

Aw, don't feel too bad for him... he's not the most innocent character in this story. He has his asshole moments as well, the story is just beginning chikadee... every character gets redeemed in some way. Jazz and Edward? They're like brothers... brothers fight, but they still love each other.They just show it in really messed up ways.

Don't be so sure about his siblings not caring, we're only into chapter five and this is all from EPOV, things are different I promise.

I love that you are defending my Edward... he needed some loving after the rough time he's been having :)

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