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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 09:47 AM · On: A place where we belong (V!)

I am SO HAPPY that they made love...and said the "L" word!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 08:56 AM · On: A place where we belong (V!)

I'm sobbing right now. SHAKING AND CRYING, Oscar.  This chapter was absolutely one of the more difficult ones to get through for me because I knew it was practically the end AND because Bella FINALLY let go.  

It took a while, but Bella's grief bubbled to the surface and then exploded.  It took the possibility of losing her "new" best friend for her to accept that her "old" best friend was gone.  I hope she can understand now that no one wants to replace Jake in her life; they just want to add to her life.  I'm so happy that Edward thought to go after her!!!!

xo Lolls

Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 08:49 AM · On: A place where we belong (V!)

i thought this was a great ending! super psyched for the epi.

Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 07:47 AM · On: A place where we belong (V!)

thanks for the update cant cant wait for the epilouge xx

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 07:16 AM · On: A place where we belong (V!)

sobbing like Bella right now. Sad the Epi is next. This has been a great story & I will miss it when it is finished. :)

Reviewer: ccoffman1 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 06:47 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

Wow. This is such an intense story. I can't wait to see what happens! Love the story. ((even the cliffies))

Reviewer: sarapride (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:02 AM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

I have no idea where you are going with this but it's driving me crazy! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: loveisahoax88 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 08:26 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

omg!!! i need this update!! AMAZING story cant wait to see what happens hoping nothign too bad cause they have already been thru so much :( thank you for writing

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:02 AM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

Two chapters left!!?!?!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Ok, so I am angry at Bella but sometimes things aren't what they seem - Bella did have a premonition in the car that something was going to go wrong, so I can't help but wonder whether she thinks that she's the link in some way. That it's her fault somehow that the family could lose both Alice & the baby.

 

 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 02:59 AM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

OMG only 2 chaps left????   This was a major hate chapter I hpe whatever it is that shes calling her dad fr puts her in a better light.  Maybe shes coming back to have everything set up for the baby...clean any mess Alice made when she went into labor etc etc thinking positive and trying to do something useful instead of feeling useless.

Post again soon as always another intense chap and very emoional.  Bella's lucky Edward didn't slug her hehehe

Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 01:57 AM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

I guess what I'm looking for is for this family to find some outward and inward love from the father.  They all need counseling desperately (this includes Bella).  They need to know that it's o.k. to talk about MOM (and Jacob).  Some resolution between Bella and Edward would be nice - they need to solidfy their love with one another.  In this chapter it would have been nice for Edward to be truly concerned about the "why" Bella found it necessary to leave.  I find it disturbing that Charlie is the only adult paying any attention to these "kids".  They need guidance and love NOW.

Reviewer: kriskit5 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 01:35 AM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

will there be a sequal to this story??

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 07:27 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

I can understand her grief. I can understand her agony.

But in the end I really can't stand her. This is positively the most 'unworthy of sympathy' Bella I have ever read anywhere. 

You could've warned us that this would become what it has unfortunately been for a long time now, an 'anti-Bella' story.

How you plan to have her redeem herself in 2 chapters is beyond me. 

Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 03:54 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

I wonder what she's going to tell her dad? thanks for the update, please dont kill off Alice !!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 03:20 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

I'm guessing Bella is having flashbacks of being at the hospital when Jake died? Hoping Edward will realize this or get the info from Charlie 

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 03:04 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

I am trying not to rage at Bella. lol  Here's my take on things: 

Bella has lost her best friend ever in Jake and has never fully dealt with it, as we've seen various times through the story.  Now, she's faced with the fact that her newer best friend Alice might die, too.  Bella has a dangerous mix of feelings right now, and her leaving is the only thing she could think to do to protect herself.  It's not right, but she did it.  I can imagine it will be a great regret, unless she decides to go back to the hospital. 

I hope Carlisle comes to the hospital and redeems himself.  :)

Almost the end! I can't believe it. :) Seems like yesterday we were all BSing in the chat about how nervous we were to write. :)

You'll finish well! :)

xo Lolls

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 02:57 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

Ugh to take angst to a full new level

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 01:41 PM · On: If it comes to an end (V!)

OMG I want to fvcking kill Bella right now. I am glad Edward is snooping to find out the reason but I still don't think what ever reason she gives will be strong enough to get her off the hook. So hate her right now!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 06:08 AM · On: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

Oh wow....I was shocked at Carlisle and his outbursts this chapter.  I knew he wasn't going to react well, but calling them all failures....not okay at all.  Wanting to kill Jasper, that's understood. lol

I don't like Bella's negative feelings about the baby.... :( I hope you update soon so we find out what happens!

xoxoxo Lolls

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 05:46 AM · On: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

Wow, Carlisle was a real douche in this chapter but it did make me laugh that what finally shut up his rant was Emmett announcing he & Rose were getting married.

I'm holding out hope that the baby arrives safely, Alice is ok and that Carlisle turns up to try and patch up the family a little.

Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 03:08 PM · On: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

I like this story - it's real for people who can't deal.  I'm really disappointed in Carlisle.  I would like to see his POV.  I would really like to see him come through for the kids and his grandchild.  Anyway, keep writing.

Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 09:58 AM · On: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

as always, i squealed hard and long when i got the alert on this story ;P geeze, Hal! Do you know how long i've been waiting for this moment? so just to be straight on what i think is going to happen:

1) alice and jasper go into the delivery room

2) bella goes in and helps some with the pregnancy

3) something is wrong with the baby.... i keep having the feeling that the baby isn't going to make it D*:

4) this whole experience brings ExB closer together. (probably not until the last chapter or even the Epi.

 

how to see an update soooon!!

Reviewer: BeccieT (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 10:21 PM · On: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

i am so glad i finally got to read the next chapter!!  OO carlisle is scary!!!! I like it!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 07:29 PM · On: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

I have a feeling that Jasper passed out cold...

Carlisle sure is a dick here!

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 07:00 PM · On: It's gonna be a riot! (V)

WOW, when you go all out...

It is bizarre that everything is out in the open now. I wonder if Carlisle is wallowing in anger/pitty or if he is driving to the hospital. I am happy Jasper stood up to Carlisle. Someone non family needed to for sure.

Can't wait to see how freaked out Jasper is at impending fatherhood.

So looking forward to the next chapter :)

 

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