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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
Such a sweet story; who doesn't love some Jasper & Alice after all? I agree with the laughter of the last chapter - hilarious! My one criticism is I really thought Jasper had other lover's before Alice, like Maria?
Awesome Jasper-Alice tale. I think my favorite was Alice rewearing her dress for their vow renewals at the 100th :)
Reviewer: Iridescka711 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 12- Anniversary
Beautiful!!!!
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
i heart Alice and Jasper!!
Reviewer: JESmakeup (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
I know you wrote this awhile back... But I wanted to let you know you KILLED IT!! Great great story!!
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 13- *credits*
This was an awsome look at Alice and Jasper!!! Thanks for all the hard work. I'm so gald the links still worked that showed what her dress and his coat looked like;)
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
Hey, I guess you didn't get the email I sent you? If you did, and you just ignored me then just ignore me here as well, lol! But I asked if you wanted to add your story to my Eternal Hope series for Alice/Jasper stories. I loved this story, so I would like to add in to the list :)
Reviewer: hathor (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
That has to rank as one of the all time funniest things I have ever read. I know you said in the end notes you almost peed your pants writing it and I almost did the same reading it!
I have read stories with non-cannon pairings and they kind of make my stomach churn, cos they don't seem right. I know that Alice and Edward aren't real brother and sister, but the idea of them together - yuk. But this was just so dam funny.
Thanks for the story. Hope to read more of your stuff.
Reviewer: fanvamps (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 11- Cheat
haha
Reviewer: fanvamps (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 10- The Other Side of a New Moon, then... The Breaking of Dawn
lol!
Reviewer: fanvamps (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 8- The Cullens
your doing great on this story and the one abuot r/e.
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
that was sooo funny i was on the ground hehehe silly alice
Reviewer: LiveLoveHorses (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 12- Anniversary
ahh! i love it!
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 12- Anniversary
SOB! I just kept reading the vows over and over and over and over and over again, I love the idea, I may just use it for my own wedding! *rushes off to collect favorite quotes*
Reviewer: Saljobee (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
Oh! That is funny on so many levels!
Reviewer: Spaccas (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
That was hilarious!!
Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
LMAO poor Alice .
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
Hahahahahahhahahah OH MY GOD SHE HAD SEX WITH EDWARD
hahaha priceless.
That really made me laugh, poor Alice.
But I honest to god LOVE Jasper.
Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
I just found your story. Loved it. I laughed my ass off.
Reviewer: carolinajoy (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
Absolutely hilarious. I love the entire last part with Alice in the shower. It's such a great moment between her and Jasper. Very nice!
Reviewer: gillywater (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
EFFIN HILARIOUS!!!! Yeah you shoulda put some warnings on this...warning that if you drink anything while reading this outtake, there is a SERIOUS chance that it will be coming out of your nose a short time later. :)
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 15- The Mindfuck
Jasper, you are SO not getting any for the forseeable future!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 14- Outtake 1
I loved it :)
It was nice to see them talking about it on their own.. nice and peaceful.
Will look forward to more outtakes :)
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 1- A Waiting Game
Very good.
Reviewer: deltagirl (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 14- Outtake 1
I love the tummy ache. We never get to see this in the indestructible vampires so that really stands out to me.
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1- A Waiting Game
Lovely beginning. I love that Alice brings hope to Jasper.
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