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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was so hot! and it was only a dream!? that is a mood killer! but how awesome!

Reviewer: reneegonzales (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very steamy story!

Reviewer: reneegonzales (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very steamy story!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Because that was only a dream, you have to include a real version in Hearts on Fire. I loved it! You did an amazing job for your first time. Thanks for writing this. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Reviewer: amazingeternallove (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it. I think you have a talent for bringing details to life, which I am very fond of. I can't give any constructive criticism because I wouldn't know what to say, I personally think it is fine the way it is.

Reviewer: stitchcat (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think you did a great job with this! Of course, I will be thinking about the possibilities all day now . . .

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

sweey holy jeebus, yes.  how in hell did i miss this back in may?  *head desk*

SOFT = win.  total and complete win.

Reviewer: texasprincessaurora (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love your writing!  Love the story!  Love the outtake! Anxiously awaiting more! 

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Whew!  One would never know that that was your first lemon!  That was hot!  I really wouldn't mind seeing Edward and Bella put S.O.F.T. to the test in the actual story!


Author's Response:

Hmmm, now ya got me thinkin'...maybe towards the end...we'll see!


Reviewer: juggalettels (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sexy firefighters yummy.  Lucky girl.  It was a good one I just hate that ALOT of the one shots are all dreams its aw awwww come one haha

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was so was just wow! You wrote that so well. It was cute how he put his shirt on the truck to make it a little more comfortable. That is a seriously hot dream to wake up from.

Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

this was good. I think you hit it on the nail... or the truck?? LOL!!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was a great lemon. I have to go attack my husband now. And I  love Hearts on Fire and can't wait for the update.

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