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Reviewer: Emmauk26 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Prologue
Reviewer: Twilight_1012 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:59 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
this is really good. you have to keep going!!! have to have to have to! i cant wait, i love where this is going, it kills me that bella wants to leave though. i hope she doesnt take off leaving the baby, or taking it for that matter. tey are both going to end up crushed :( i still cant wait to see where this goes. its so good!! :)
--Kayla
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 05:00 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Very good so far. I am totally loving it.
Reviewer: leahpooh1 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:17 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
WOW!!! I just found this story and it is amazing. Please continue writing.
Reviewer: snoopykota (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:21 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Wow. This is kinda dark but... I like it. I want to see what happens next. This kind of reminded me of a book I read once called 'Redeeming Love' by Francine Rivers. Similar theme minus the pregnancy. You should check it out. You should also write more chapters for this story! ;)
God Bless, Happy Writing, ect.
Author's Response: OMG I love that book!!! :) Thanks for reading bb.
Reviewer: thenxtmrscullen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:34 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Great story!!!!
please please please keep writing.
~K~
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 09:30 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Great story
Can't wait to read more
Reviewer: jacob123 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:09 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
i LOVE it!!! i love stories like this!!! you should win an award! keep going! continue!!
Reviewer: freshonlybakery (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:30 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Oh Emmett! Lmao, I love him, hehe.
This is really good so far! It's intriguing and I just want more! :)
I don't think it's farfetched at all, a little exaggerated of course but I mean it's fiction! It's supposed to be a tiny bit unrealistic!
*must resist urge to check fanfiction if it's further ahead.. gahh*
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:41 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
augh!! don't leave me like that!!
more more!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:01 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
augh!! don't leave me like that!!
more more!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:57 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
augh!! don't leave me like that!!
more more!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:56 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
augh!! don't leave me like that!!
more more!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Angela
aww I love this! I hope you have ;ol Ed beat the !@#*%$! outta this Chris guy! or if Emmett is his brother or friend in this story oh - that would be awesome! surely Ed has some 'powerful friends' too - especially since he's rich
love how they're relationship is going!! keep it up! it's fun to pretend that there's a guy out there as perfect as Edward!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 04:02 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:18 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
She's not going to leave him is she.... That would kill him I think..what about the baby. ..
Reviewer: tiffknee (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:33 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
this story is amazing! I can't wait to see how their relationship develops and what this Chris character has in store.
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:12 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Good chapter. Bella can be so dumb about her feelings sometimes LOL. I hope she doesn't leave.
Reviewer: melw1995 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:29 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
dude if bella leaves im go to be so sad it wont be fair!!!
Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:01 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Awwww he loves her!!!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:11 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
Oh u cant leave it there errr ok i guess ill have to wait lol i cant wait :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:05 AM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
it just keeps gettin better
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:33 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
So sweet! How soon are you going to break my heart? Been swooning over your story, wishing and dreading over what happens next! Don't hurt me too bad!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:15 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
I'm liking it!!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:12 PM · On: An Unexpected Invitation
thanks for the update, you rock !
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