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Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this one-shot. Very strong writing style. You capture Jasper´s character very good.

Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

beautiful love this short little story

Reviewer: Auna (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is sweet!!  I love Jasper, so you really made my day.  I wish more people would write from his POV. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  When I first got into this fanfiction, Carlisle and Esme spoke to me the most.  Now Emmett and Jasper are, so we'll see where that goes. :)  Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jennlyn78 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm very intrigued and am waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed!  This is actually just a one shot.  I love my one shots, SotS not included.  Sorry!  And thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: I_Run_With_Vampires (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

So SWEET!!!!!!!   Write more!!!!!! PLEASE!?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just joined this site and am so happy to see your work here as well. I do wish that you'd find some more ideas popping into your head. I'd love to see where Jasper and Alice go.

Author's Response:

Oh, trust me.  I have the ideas, it's finding the time to get them all out that is the problem. :)  Glad you're enjoying and thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love stories about Jasper and Alice in the beginning.  They are so few.  This was a wonderful first chapter.  Can't wait to see their story unfold.....

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, this was only a one shot.  The prompt for Novel Novice caused this to pop into my head, and I thought I'd post it here.  Sorry to disappoint, but thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed!

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