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Reviewer: Chalice Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Unforgivable
Niiice! I mean, it's not good that the pretty boy got his face bashed in and Bella got all cut to pieces.. and James should have died, nasty fucker.. but the writing was really great!
Good job!
Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Unforgivable
That was pretty fuckin' intense. Wasn't expecting all of that. Nope. I hope everything's okay :(
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Unforgivable
wow, i love this story and was waiting, desperate for another chapter. this was more than i could of hoped for but im uneasy now about whats going to happen... please update soon
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Unforgivable
Wow..just wow...that was quite the chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: aimeexjeannette25 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Unforgivable
I was like," wow i havent seen an update from this story in a while, it better be good. "
Now I'm like," holy shit."
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Unforgivable
Glad James got beaten! Please make him go away & let E & B get on with healing
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Unforgivable
Hello kiya ^^
Chose promise chose due mon message sera entièrement en français!!
Alors pour ce chapitre je souhaiterai juste faire un petit comentaire a propos de :
“Baby, you can make me scream all you want later,” I whispered. “Maybe we could role-play? You be you, and I'll be a screamer.”
En relation avec le dernier chapitre publié sur ff je suis morte de rire... XD
Reviewer: dinahhh (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Crotchsplosions & Consequences
Moooooorrrreee Pleeeeaasse!
I love this story!
It makes me laugh so much - Alice with Jasper is just downright hilarious.
I can't wait for the next chapters....soon pleeaase.......I'm begging!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Unspoken Truths
I let some review because I'm curious about one thingg, you stoped update on twilighted ??? (I don't whant to start a flame over the thread so I ask it here...)
Author's Response: Hey LG
I haven't been able to post here recently as I have been without a beta. It's been forever, but thank God I've recently had a new one assigned to me, (in the form of the kick-ass Blondie) so I've just (like hours ago) started submitting my new chapters here.
Believe me, it has NOT been my choice to not post here. I've been going INSANE!
Hopefully everything will be smooth sailing now and I'll get all of my existing chapters up as quickly as possible.
Thanks for asking. You are so damn dedicated to this story it makes my eyes water.
Love you,
Kiya x
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Unspoken Truths
HOLY shit! suck ass cliffie! Okay, you will have to update really soon.
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:13 PM · On: The Bet
I just love the "madman". And I am reviewing because I just can't enough of this witty and funny story.
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:06 PM · On: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Just.....freaking hilarious. I do not write reviews often. Most of the fanfiction I read is fluff and filler before you get to the jusicy stuff. But here, It's juicy EVERYWHERE! BTW, love the comic releif as well. SO refreshing.
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
This fanfic is awesome. Your portrayal of Bella is very OOC and creative. LOVE IT!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Unspoken Truths
All righty, more often than not, I'm not so into the dark with the Twific. But the best and easiest way to get me into it is to get me hooked on a funny fic and then blindside me with the super angst - I'm totally there. And then you bring it to a who' notha level by smacking me up the side of the with this -
“Oh GOD, YES, BREE...YES!!”
- gem of ridiculously hilarious Domsper goodness. That whole Alice/Jasper convo had me laughing so hard my eyes teared up. (Not to mention, it was pretty damn hott.) Rock the eff on, lady.
Author's Response: Hey honey
I just have to say thanks for the awesomeness of your reviews. I've loved receiving every single one of them.
Just thought I'd let you know that I have completed another four chapters of The Screamers that aren't yet posted on this site as I am currently lacking a validator and can't post without one.
If you would like to catch up with the most recent chapters you can find them here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5081258/17/The_Screamers
Just a warning that the angst that has been steadily building in the story so far really comes to a head in the next couple of chapters, but then it will settle down and even out again. Stick with it hon, funny/sexy times are ahead.
Thanks for the love - I heart you hard.
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Crotchsplosions & Consequences
Your Madman A/N's are genius!
And by the way ...
“You can't just work me up into a Goddamn sexual frenzy after I tell you you're my fantasy man, and you tell me I'm your fantasy girl, and you make all my girl parts kersplode, and you make me aware of the enormous, hard cock in your pants, and I finally think that, for once, my poor deluded vagina is going to get the real Dr. McJasper and not a latex covered substitute, and then you turn around and look at me with those ice-blue pools of sex and say that we fucking have to stop the shit-hot plundering of each other's overheated and painfully aroused bodies!!?”
- that is the most spectacular sentence I have ever read in my whole life.
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Sexual Healing
GO ALICE! *punches my fist in the air* But I hope she still plays hardball with Edward, 'cuz that shit is hi-la-ri-ous.
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:46 PM · On: The Bet
Wow. Edward's Madman inner monologue was really well done! It brought a strong sense of reality and true conflict to this mostly-fun-times story. Excellent work! Can't wait to delve deeper into that nugget of angst. :)
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Giney & Godzy's Big Day Out
The beginning of this chapter was utterly, absurdly hilarious. Forget the funny nicknames - the two of them, talking about and defending their genitalia as if they were people, was some of the most side-splitting shit I have ever read! Right on!
Also, the mutual masturbation scene was fuckhot.
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Unacceptable Touching Marathon
Whoa. Got any of them extra panties I could borrow? ;)
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:29 PM · On: The After-Party
Oooooh, that was good. And the part with Cullen and Pattinson in the alley - absolutely hilarious! But sexy times ahead, right? Promise? 'Cuz I really have to get back to work right now, and I know that if I peek, I'll just read and get myself in trouble! Sigh.
Author's Response: Baby, your reviews have been making me smile all day! Thank you. Yes, definite sexy times ahead - a shitload of them in fact. Enjoy!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:03 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
Dude, what the hell? That was so funny, I can't wait to read part 2! Moving on now ...
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Pity-poison and Porn
“It's just that your sister insists on buying me the world's smallest g-strings” – LOVING where this conversation is heading - “and they tend to be a tad uncomfortable.” Take it off then! YOU NEED YOUR COMFORT!
Oh my god - "YOU NEED YOUR COMFORT!" - I burst out laughing!
“I had to send out a search party, but we got there in the end.”
Another hysterical outburst! And then ...
“Tiny G-string story?”
“A clever ruse.”
I was literally rolling around on my bed laughing. You write some damn funny shit!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Unacceptable Touching
Oh man, that was funny. I love Alice. Her list of no-no's cracked me up!!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
Totally loving this. Adore the banter!
Reviewer: jbabycupcake (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Unspoken Truths
When are you gonna be done with the next chapter????? I love this story
Author's Response: Hey hon
I've actually finished a few chapters since posting here last, but I currently don't have a beta here to validate my stuff so I can't post.
Here is the link if you'd like to check the new chapters out on ff.net:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5081258/1/The_Screamers
I hope you enjoy the new bits.
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