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Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Unforgivable
This is my absolute favorite chapter yet! And of one of my favorite stories, too! So this was a real treat for me!
Keep up the amazing work!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Unforgivable
O my GOD! I can’t believe any of that just happened. I expected James to get away with some blackmail. Well I guess Edward doesn’t have to explain his anger issues now, since she clearly got a look.
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Unforgivable
MORE!!!!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Unforgivable
I a glad you are back I thought you abandoned this story and I really love me those two. Can;t wait to read the after of this mess....
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Unforgivable
glad you are back.
very heavy chapter, i had to break it up. couldn't just sit and read. VERY WELL done.
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Unforgivable
glad you are back.
very heavy chapter, i had to break it up. couldn't just sit and read. VERY WELL done.
Reviewer: poopyguy (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Unacceptable Touching Marathon
He raised his eyebrows, and I resisted the urge to start chewing on them.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAHAHAAHAAHAHA so good
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Unforgivable
wow. intense
AMAZING but intense
loved it
Cant wait for more
Oxo
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Unforgivable
I'm very disturbed by this chapter, although I understand why it had to happen. I hope it's the catalyst Bella and Edward need to come clean with each other and begin healing.
Glad you're (finally) back!
Reviewer: domenica (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Unforgivable
Holy hell - that was an intense chapter. I may have been frustrated to not have seen an update in awhile, but this more than made up for the delay! Like it, love it, want more of it! Can't wait for the next chapter - keep up the amazing writing! :)
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Unforgivable
I have missed this story so much! Thank you for updating! Wow that was a lot of shit to happen in one chapter. Wow. I like the way you wrote that scene. I could invision everything happening. Very well done. Well Edward came to her rescue and beat the living snot out of him but will he accept her for what she's done. And will she accept him after he threw her off of him....Hmmm until next time. Awesome job!
Reviewer: B and E 4ever (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Unforgivable
I am so glad to see a new chapter i was beginning to think you fell off the face of the earth. Lots me things in the chapter but it was so good cant wait to see whats happening next. Update soon please.
Author's Response: Sorry about the wait honey. I would have loved to update sooner but alas, it was beyond my control. Thanks for coming back to the story. Then next chap is already in the cue and will be up as soon as it's validated.
Talk soon,
Kiya x
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Unforgivable
God, I had forgotten just how damn hard this is to read. Truly, this chapter kicked my heart's ass.
Masterful though- the light-hearted beginning w/Star Wars quotes (no doubt influenced by Irritable Grizzly) were pretty damn funny.
So, so glad you are back on Twilighted. I hope you never have to leave again.
xoxo,
lavishone
Author's Response: *sigh* I'm glad I'm back too baby.
I didn't know Catty-wan was a Star Wars geek. I'm a huuuuuge fan. Pathetic really.
Love you.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Unforgivable
wow ... that was some way to leave the chapter!!! that was amazing and full of angst and emotion and secrecy ... it was great and I cant wait for more ... i have missed you since you were gone!
Author's Response: I've missed you too baby. Can't wait for you all to catch up with the story. I'm currently writing chapter 27 so you guys have a ways to go!
See you next chappie.
Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Unforgivable
ok, at this point, i'm just glad edward didn't get stabbed. i've already had three stories happen, and it's just annoying now haha
OMG. james. bitch.
i'm worried now :(
Reviewer: jmauck (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Unforgivable
Ok so I am a lurker, not a reviewer. But I just have to say The Screamers is one of my favorite stories, EVER!! Thank you so much for finally updating. :)
Author's Response: Sweetie, don't lurk! Come and play with me! I'm nice, and pervy, and have an extensive range of alcohol!
See you next chapter I hope...
Kiya x
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Unforgivable
Thank you for updating again! I was so missing this story and I'm thrilled to find out that you will be posting regularly again! Now we do the dance of joy!
I loved the Star Wars quoting! And it was perfect when Edward said I love you to Bella and she answered with "I know." PERFECT! I also loved Edward's little rant about how much he wanted Bella all the time. Even when she farts! That cracked me up!
But now that I've mentioned all the light stuff, it's time for the heavy stuff. I can't even imagine what had to be going through Edward's mind when he saw the video tape of James raping Bella mouth. Jeeze, for someone who has a normal temper control it would be impossible to not want to kill the fucker. Now you take someone like Edward who has trouble controlling his temper and show him and tell him about all the shit that James did? Yeah... not gonna end pretty. I'm just hoping that your Edward isn't going to be a cannon Edward and boo-hoo that he hurt Bella and she shouldn't be with him. They are both hurting and they are both better with each other. They both need to TALK!!!!
I cannot wait for the next update to see the aftermath of all this.
Kat
Author's Response: Hey Kat
Jeez, it's so nice to be back. Missed your reviews hon!
Um...you know how you don't want Edward to chuck a shit-fit and walk out...Weeeeell...
Stick with me babe. I have a plan. (Heartfail warning for next chappie though. Just sayin')
Kiya x
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Unforgivable
holy shit!!!! this was freaking intense.. but THEY BETTER MAKE THINGS RIGHT AFTER THIS I MEAN IF THEY BREAK-UP... they have come too far to break-it up.. i know that this was a areally intense chapter.. but they are each other's medicine to getting better... this is jsust a side-effect that will go away hopefully! update soon please.. i really don't want to wait very long like last time haha
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Unforgivable
holy cow....can't wait for more
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Unforgivable
Won't kick you ass for being away so long, we all know how real life van get in the way. Just real glad that your back and am looking forward to the next update. That's on hell of a cliffie!!!
Reviewer: mrsjasperhale88 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Unforgivable
OMG my jaw is on the floor! Please update soon so i can continue breathing. lol
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Unforgivable
OhMyFuckingGod!!!! I'm almost afraid to find out what happens next. Geez.
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Unforgivable
glad this story is back!!!!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Alice, Asstard and Piss-Girl
Omg, this is so hilarious, almost peed in my pants.
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Unforgivable
I've been reading up on fanfiction. Can't wait for the rest, I love this story so much. :)
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