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Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Aftermath
I have nothing to say... I'm actually depressed.... completely unhappy with Edward....
Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Aftermath
Too sad to reveiw, cant see the monitor clearly! Is it raining inside?
I wish James dies a long, slow horrible death!
Julie :)
Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
oh, a good hate Renee and Phil story! nice! So, jess is one of the whores, sounds about right :-)
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Aftermath
ok so u better update soon
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Aftermath
fucking hell...give a girl a kleenex warning or some shit.
This story has a kleenex rating of 11.
I would have had to put my laptop down to go get my box tissues, but I figured
hey, I have to do laundry anyway this morning and I already slept in this t-shirt...why not use it to wipe my tears and snot - becasue I sure as hell am NOT going to stop reading this story just to go get my box of tissues.
So now I need to go change my shirt and start doing laundry...but not before I tell you that this chapter...this STORY...is an amazing piece of work and I absolutely can NOT wait for the next chapter to come up.
I love how you had Bella actually tell Edward everything that she was thinking and fight for them. I hate it in all the other stories when she just keeps her mouth shut and lets him walk away. If he's going to walk away from her, he needs to do so with the full knowledge of her feelings and she needs to know she did SOMETHING to try to stop him. I'm glad she called him outo n how shitty he was being. Yes, i understand he's hurting too and he's got some major issues to deal with but that doesn't........GAH!!!!!!!!!!
::takes a deep breath::
Ok....I'm going to go wait (not-so) patiently for the next chapter to be posted....and do laundry. My shirt is starting to stick to me. ::shudders::
Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Breakfast & Belching
This is a very nice twist on the whole "supporting cast" of the story. James as pimp, huh? If we run into him again, can Lauren and Victoria please be his whores? It would be just so perfect... :-)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Aftermath
i understand that this had to happen because they never really told each other what happened in thier past, so it had to come out in a drantic way... but did they have to separate... well please don't let that happen for long!!!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Aftermath
holy cow that was intense....
can't wait for more
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Aftermath
How could you? That was traumatic!! You have to post soon
Reviewer: chance (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Aftermath
nooooooooooooooo, what the hell.. poor bella and dumb edward!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Aftermath
Hello kiya.
J'ai commencé a écrire en anglais sans faire gaf lol.
Ce chapitre est sans doute un des plus triste de ton histoire, Bella a le coeur complètement en pièce et elle est au fond du fond.
Les dernières lignes me donnent envie de pleurer... mais ce chapitre est un point tournant de ton histoire et il était important.
Inutile d dire que maintnant que je le relie je suis heureuse que tu soit arrivée à la réunion de godzie et gyne ;)
Reviewer: PulpAddict (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Aftermath
Oooh! I am deliciously heartbroken. I love it.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Aftermath
damn...I was fool enough to think the story was coming to an end. And I was fool enough to believe the dreamtastic first part of this chapter. ouch! Bring the pain
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
wow! that was something else. i want to continue but i'm exhausted. i hope to catch up by tomorrow.
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Aftermath
That was some heavy shit. Edward really was a very bad boy. I think their sins are fairly balanced. This ought to be a fucked up ride.
Reviewer: feydruss (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Aftermath
Make this right. NOW! Or my heart will fail.
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Big-Tit's Buffet
absolutely loving it!
Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Aftermath
WHAT IN THE EVER-LOVING-MUFF?!!!!? Are you serious?! How are you just gonna be all 'Ohh i love you we can get through this' in the beginning and then just be like MAJOR-FUCKIN-HEARTFAIL not even a little fuckin' heartfail HUGE M-Fin' HEARTFAIL and just rip my poor little fanfiction-obsessed-self's heart out. Totally muffed. there needs to be some reparations.
Author's Response: Lol!
Firstly, your use of the word 'muff' is brilliant. I may steal it.
Second, sorry about the heartfail babe. It won't last long - promise. Would it help if I gave you a nice foot rub?
Kiya x
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Alice, Asstard and Piss-Girl
still loving it.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Aftermath
Ugh. I hate necessary shit. Seriously, life is just too full of it.
This chapter is so well written- I can't believe how utterly heart-broken I am for Bella and how angry I am at Edward. It's just so damn hard to read.
How he can walk out on Bella while she's in the hospital for God's sake is beyond me. He must be pretty damn screwed up.
So uphill from here huh? Well just about anything would be uphill from here, so bring it on...
Author's Response: Are you ok baby? You seem stressed. Let me know if you want to talk.
Love you,
Kiya x
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Breakfast & Belching
i know i'm behind. but i really like your story and i kinda want to know the joke....please ;)
Reviewer: ericasmom4ever (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Aftermath
Thank you for not making her a stupid lamb.
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:41 PM · On: The Alley
love it
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Unforgivable
That was so horrible, so good and worth the wait!
Reviewer: litlle_miss_vampire (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Unforgivable
thank you so much for finally adding to the screamers i missed it so much! please pease add more to it!!
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