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Reviewer: Tyranny (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Moving Forward
Ok, where to start. First of all, wow. HOT, HOT, HOT! Who knew medical terms could be so sexy? And then Edward, finally working through his shit. God I love Emmett! I can't even imagine how long you had to work to get all those different terms of endearment for him. Faster chapters please, I missed this story so much.
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Alice, Asstard and Piss-Girl
I love Alice.
And he sniffed her neck, fucking swoon!!!
love it.
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Breakfast & Belching
mmmm....menacing dark dominant edward....mmmmm
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:06 AM · On: The Alley
love it.
I was drawn to you by way of Nina's Smut Monday where you blew my friggin socks off with Grasping Darkness. So here I am desperate for more.
I already love both characters. They are both snarky and bitchy. LOVE THAT!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Moving Forward
can't wait for more
Reviewer: sagewoman (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Moving Forward
OMG!! you make me laugh ssooo much. i went over to fanfiction.net cause i couldn't wait for more to come up on twlighted. so here i was reading and laughing so loud i woke up the kids. better than sex (sad but true) so now i am tired out and need to go to sleep. thanks for that. keep it up(the writting jeeze) and keep it coming(or cumming whatever you like) LOL
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Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Moving Forward
God I had to laugh out loud reading the exchange between Edward and Emmett- absolutely hilarious!
And thank God poor Alice finally got her some Dr. Whitlock. Her hostility was reaching all new heights...
It's so much fun to read these chappies again...even the heartfail just reminds me how invested I am in the story...
Reviewer: GinaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
I am loving this story! Gonna get back to reading now!! :)
Reviewer: gleeglee (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Unacceptable Touching Marathon
HOT
Reviewer: gleeglee (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:58 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
totally didn't expect that! awesome!!
Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:51 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
this chap was pretty hilarious.
Reviewer: eclipsy84 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Misconceptions
Wow, there's some painful, heavy stuff in here. I just read the whole story so far in one sitting, and damn...Edward and Bella are both so damaged. They both need counceling. But being so damaged also makes them perfect for each other. I just have one complaint. I'm sure I'm in the minority here, but I really hate the whole RPattz thing. Mixing characters with real people doesn't work in my opinion. I have nothing against RPF, but this isn't that. He feels like a Mary Sue, which is all wrong since he's a real person. I love everything else, especially homeless/schizo Charlie. I can't wait to read more, I'd just prefer if you left Rob out of it and let the characters speak for themselves.
Author's Response: Hey, bb, thank you so much for your review.
I totally understand what you're saying about Rob. When I included him in the fic I was a noob to the fanfic world and had no idea about RPF's and mixing characters etc. I really just did it becauase I thought it would be quirky and fun. Then his popularity with the readers just exploded and I kind of felt bound to keep him in the mix.
I hope it doesn't diminish your enjoyment of the story too much.
Thanks so much for reading,
Kiya x
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Breakfast & Belching
Loved your Smut Monday contribution, so had to check out your other fics. I really enjoy your writing style.
I will go back to reading Screamers now --- I have to find out how Bella ended up homeless and watch B&E spar back and forth until they realize they're right for each other.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Unacceptable Touching Marathon
I have not stopped lmao since starting to read this. and OMG the SEX in this last chapter.. I think I gotta go jump my husband.. BYE thank you! keep updating its awesome
Reviewer: JessHansen (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
What can I say? Wow. You really are a fantastic writer. I am going to go now and continue reading. If I don't review each chapter it's only because I'm desperate to get to the next one :)
Reviewer: JessHansen (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
What can I say? Wow. You really are a fantastic writer. I am going to go now and continue reading. If I don't review each chapter it's only because I'm desperate to get to the next one :)
Reviewer: itsyblue (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Misconceptions
This has owned me for the last four days! I have laughed and cryed! Love that you have Rob and Edward in the story!
Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Misconceptions
I just wanted to say that I am really enjoying this story. There are many reasons why, but I typically enjoy stories where there is conflict, angst and for some unknown reaosn, I LOVE stories about Edward either being a player or famous. And usually those two things go hand in hand, so if you come up with another story plot with Edward being famous is some wat (movies, althlete, some trust fund kid who has nothing better to do than get reported fo being seen, getting in trouble, partying in the hamptons, jet setting , making sex tapes and being seen occasionally at parties with Paris Hilton, I am going to love your writing. I love to read about cocky, rich, snotty, famous Edward getting his cum-uppence. Then again, even if he is kind of thrust into the limelight and is famous and isn't thrilled with the spotlight but has to act the part and is living the surface lie and trying to find himself behind the facade of being a prick, that is hot as well! Just some ideas! I like your writing and even though you went with this one music venue, you didn't delve real deep into the music industry of what he is doing so perhaps you could go another angle on another story and really get into movie superstardom. Just a thought! Thanks!
Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Misconceptions
Man....these two just have serious communication issues! I almost feel like smacking them around a little until thye come to their senses, but with their masochistic tendensices I have a feeling that wouldn't solve anything! I just LOVE how you have addded Rob Patt in youe story as a he seems to come across in most of his interviews and as describes through his co-stars abd friends, rather overwhelmed by the paps, his fame, but down to earth, willing to make off hte cuff remarks to the press and in interviews as a prankster to keep people guessing, but still seems to try and hold on to that down-to-earth kind of guy mentality. It is a creative addition to this story to make Edwards 'nemesis' the actor who plays him in real life and even create the "inside joke" that neither Rob or Edward figure out about how they are mirror images of each other, but one os more the bad boy while the other taps into the less dark side of the complexEd/Patz dualaity, It is as though (if I were still taking a lit class in college) the two guys each make a half of whole of who they are. Rob, real life, would not have become the actor he is today without the part of Edward giving him his big break and this has allowed his other talents as a musician to also come to the spotlight. And and without Rob, Edwards character may not have been played up to the point of maddness to so many teen fans and therefore Robs music and career may not have skyrocketed. I would have to say that Edward and Rob and intertwined if they like it or not and that is someone incorporated into your story. If that was meant to be done on a such a deep level as I haved suggested, brilliant, if not...then it was still a stroke of fun and delicious mind candy!!! Please keep on writing so we can see how far this can go! I would personally like to see Pattinson play along and get Edward a bit jmore jealous so he realizes his mistakes with Bella. Not just because I like makiing Edward jealous...normally I do not...especially if Jake is involved (I think I threw up a little) but if Rob is involved, I am all for it! The irony is just to delicious to pass up, eh? Especially since Bella since to love attacking his nipples and he does provide such wonderful eye f'ing candy that, well...I would say rival Edwards...but he IS really Edward...so what the heck, right?!?!? Plus he DID warn Edward that if Edward fucked up that he would be there to pick up the pieces and it was game on...
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Misconceptions
Bree and Emmet all at once, poor Edward... But I love Bella and Rob interactions soo keep them coming eventhough I hope he doesn´t have to survive any more 2:nd hand food.
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Misconceptions
I so love the parts with Rob which are funny as hell. So sad that Edward is beimg all emo... men and their pride. So we finally meet Emmett,,,that was intense.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
~Shani
Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Misconceptions
F-ing hysterical!!! I was cracking up at Pattsy and Bella's antics. Love it!
Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Misconceptions
F-ing hysterical!!! I was cracking up at Pattsy and Bella's antics. Love it!
Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Misconceptions
F-ing hysterical!!! I was cracking up at Pattsy and Bella's antics. Love it!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Misconceptions
La première fois qu'Emmet débarque ^^
Franchement en relisant le chapitre j'ai regrété qu'Edward ai pas etrypé bree dans l'avion.
D'ailleurs a propos d'elle et de mon super plan pour la faire payer je suis désolée kiya mais j'ai pas eu le temps d'écrire quoi que ce soit... j'enchaine les semaines de merde et je te l'écrirai promit mais c'est pas pour tout dessuite.
Merci beaucoup pour ce chapitre ^^
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