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Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:25 AM · On: The After-Party
It's your own fault this review is short... must read next chapter... NOW!!!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:01 AM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
LOL, Edward AND Rob?!?!?! You, Author, are made of win!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:00 AM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
LOL, Edward AND Rob?!?!?! You, Author, are made of win!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:26 AM · On: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Lol, what a cliffie! Great chapter!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Pity-poison and Porn
EIGHT!!! Wow!
Loved this chapter, I didn't miss not having SNL one bit! Edward's nicotine withdrawl is too good!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Unacceptable Touching
Scrabble, sniffing and stroking... How you make those sound like sexy i'll never know...
Alice, again, is awesome!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
Wow, I can see why this one must have been hard to write. Poor Bella. I'm glad she's getting the chance to turn things around for herself. I am wondering about possible further drama from the pimp though, you know the whole "if there's a gun on the mantle in the first act it must go off in the third act..." thing. We'll see, I guess.
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Big-Tit's Buffet
I LOVE ALICE!!! She is awesome. I love the idea of Bella being his handler and can't wait for the eating of the "forbidden fruit."
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Alice, Asstard and Piss-Girl
Wow, Lemon scented goodness in this chapter. Edward can sniff me any day! I love that we are getting to know Edward a little better but I am very curious as to why Bella is homeless. Maybe I'll find out in the next chapter!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Breakfast & Belching
WOW! I kinda love domineering Edward. Very hot! Great chapter, I can't wait to see whats going to happen!
Reviewer: starrynight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:13 PM · On: The Alley
Great first chapter! I think I'm going to love this story! I love the back and forth between Bella and Edward. And I love that Edward is playing Garth Brooks! On to Chapter 2!
Reviewer: SomethingAwesome (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Confrontation
This chapter should win an award, I'm serious. It had everything; drama, comedy, and lemons. And everything that was done was done well. The sheer quality of this story never ceases to amaze me. While reading it I also realised that you could take this one chapter on its own as a short story, and it would still be extremely awesome. Do you know how rare that is?? Also this chapter made me cry. I have no idea how you made me miss my Mum when she was sitting right beside me, but you did. Love you. Srs. :3
Reviewer: jejcjs (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Confrontation
Oh my God. This chapter just devastated me. I felt so many emotions (strongly) throughout...I even cried and I am not a crier. Holy shit! It even had an awesome sex (love) scene. My only negative is that no man will interrupt his woman wheb she is telling him he has a giant cock. They eat that shit up 'cause it is their equivalent of a toe-curling. :)
Reviewer: rikki74 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Big-Tit's Buffet
I love it. Bella as a badass is golden. If I had anything to say that was negative, it would be that the chapters are to short. Thanks for the great read.
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 10:07 PM · On: The Bet
lol. loved this chapter.. the madman is.. well.. mad. Onward!
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Giney & Godzy's Big Day Out
Favorite line: '"There is a mardi gras of gay men waiting downstairs to pound your precious asshole into oblivion, so you and the annoyingly hot Brit had BETTER START TALKING!!"'
amazing.. onward!
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Unacceptable Touching Marathon
I need to go jump on my boyfriend.. right now. Holy Fuck Hot. Amazing. Going to bed now *glares at the clock* its now 3:37 am and I have work in about 5 hours.. will continue this tomorrow!
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 12:09 AM · On: The After-Party
FUUUUCK!! Amazing! Onward!! (3:10 am)
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 11:32 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
Lol. Soooo I'm assuming Edward and Rob look a lot like one another.. lol! Soooo smart! Love it! ONWARD! time check.. 2:32 am..
Author's Response: Ok, step away from the screen, sweetheart. That's enough for one night. You need to sleep.
Don't make me come over there.
Kiya x
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:54 PM · On: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Plllleeeeaaaassseeee Slap me!! Lol. Love this. Love you. Another 10. ONWARD!! (1:54am) ..eyes started to burn..
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Pity-poison and Porn
You're amazing and so is your story.. ONWARD (1:16 am)
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Unacceptable Touching
Favorite part? When Alice broke out the projector..
“Bella Swan –
Chaperone, Public Relations Manager, and Pretend Girlfriend Extraordinaire.”
I laughed my ass off! Loving this.. hoping to see some lemons.. :) Yes.. I know I'm worse than Asstard.. ONWARD (12:57 am)
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
Wow.. Renee was a bitch! Poor Bella.. and Edward? Oh man.. sexy.. ONWARD! (12:40 am)
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Big-Tit's Buffet
I'm loving where this is going.. time check.. 12:23 AM... ONWARD!
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Alice, Asstard and Piss-Girl
LOL! I looooove Alice! Your versions of Edward, Bella, and Alice are so far my favorite. Onward.. *glances at clock.. 12:10 AM..* yep.. ONWARD!
Author's Response: You go, girl! Sleep is completely overrated.
Loving your reviews.
Kiya x
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